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Great rhythm you have cought
Posted on Tue, 14 Aug 2018
Great rhythm you have cought the music of the storm and made it into words
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lots of good lines, what a
Posted on Sat, 11 Aug 2018
the first bit - what a way to describe how someone sounds!
also very much liked :
"Tonight grows older
than I can handle"
Read full commentPosted in I AM HOMELESS
gosh, the stress!
Posted on Mon, 23 Jul 2018
gosh, the stress!
Read full commentPosted in Saturday Part One.
Happy Birthday for September
Posted on Thu, 19 Jul 2018
Happy Birthday for September :0)
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this is beautiful all through
Posted on Thu, 19 Jul 2018
this is beautiful all through, no favourite bits, it's perfect
Read full commentPosted in DISCOVERY
That's a great, sensitive
Posted on Mon, 09 Jul 2018
That's a great, sensitive point of view. Thankyou for posting. I live here and am struggling to know how to handle this let alone write about it
Read full commentPosted in Be Careful What I Say.......
Brilliant choice. I like the
Posted on Wed, 13 Jun 2018
Brilliant choice. I like the rhymes, how they're not obvious, they sort of pull at you like light on moving water. As the poem is moving. To start with all I noticed was how beautiful the sound is. But the meaning is beautiful too when I read it...
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The most helpful advice I got
Posted on Wed, 20 Jun 2018
The most helpful advice I got, though I couldn't understand it at the time, is to realise you have choices. It's only so bad if you feel trapped.
The sleep thing is interesting to me. It seems accepted that insomnia is a result of...
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It seemed somehow menacing
Posted on Thu, 28 Jun 2018
It seemed somehow menacing from the first sentence. I like the wonderful sound details of the familiar, "dragged it gently along the terrace" "cool little bubbles popping" "the bottle making a small guzzling sound" "wings beating out a faint...
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I like the idea of a better
Posted on Fri, 29 Jun 2018
I like the idea of a better self being like a lost toy.
I don't know if you meant it to, but I find this a hopeful poem, reminds me of cutting off the mouldy bits of plants and suddenly they look so much better and you notice there were...
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