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This is beautiful! So fluid,
Posted on Wed, 30 May 2018
This is beautiful! So fluid, the way the song pulses and the heart pumps to keep the wings moving quickly. Also, couldn't think how you make it clear that the last line is about coming back to earth, and wonder if it is the D's, which have a...
Read full commentPosted in May Sky Melody
you have caught the feeling
Posted on Fri, 25 May 2018
you have caught the feeling of thunderstorms so well! Have a feeling bulls and thunder gods go together which makes it even more tingly
Read full commentPosted in Gaia visits
yes, I liked that the cows
Posted on Wed, 23 May 2018
yes, I liked that the cows and children died had significance for different reasons, so much heartache put so simply
and that "Winters smelled of kerosene". I remember there were lots of powercuts growing up, so paraffin reminds me of cold...
Read full commentPosted in Histories of a small town in Ontario
NEVER feel guilty! If I
Posted on Fri, 04 May 2018
NEVER feel guilty! If I could only write like this I would, every day. No other issue is as important, for if we destroy the Earth there will be nothing anyway.
Lions, giaffes, elephants. These are all at serious risk. No cgi is ever...
Read full commentPosted in Palm oil or Orangutans?
two seperate creativities
Posted on Sat, 28 Apr 2018
two seperate creativities and visions combined to make something magical for both? A child feeling equal in a grown up world, a grown up reminded of the wonder of being a child
Read full commentPosted in Collaboration
I love this.
Posted on Fri, 27 Apr 2018
I love this.
Going at different speeds but arriving together
A dead end coming to life - brilliant!
"look back at the increasingly staggering view". Gives a strong image of space/time so easily.
"Convenient" table...
Read full commentPosted in Effort & View
Beautiful poem, you express
Posted on Sat, 21 Apr 2018
Beautiful poem, you express so well the seeming fragility of Spring but also how it's actually very strong, as it has overcome the darkness of Winter, just as the flames of your dreams overcome dark times. It makes me think of those ink paintings...
Read full commentPosted in My Dreams are Safe (IP)
hm, not if you can't see the
Posted on Sat, 07 Apr 2018
hm, not if you're short sighted like me :0) It's like a miniature metaphor for the miracle of life, the twentieth attempt the thread goes through and you're off. Before that it gets fuzzier and cut off and bent and huffed and puffed at and...
Read full commentPosted in On sewing buttons
I love this, it's so gentle
Posted on Sat, 07 Apr 2018
I love this, it's so gentle :0) I'm not technical, so always feel very pleased that I've managed to fix something, when I sew on a button. Equally, I worry that I don't understand writing often. Your idea of joining the two together is lovely. I...
Read full commentPosted in On sewing buttons
yes, I would. There was an
Posted on Thu, 29 Mar 2018
yes, I would. There was an interesting interview on the World Service a while ago, with someone who had written about his experiences doing his compulsory national service in Israel. He spoke about how it felt to be called a traitor by his own...
Read full commentPosted in End Islamophobia (In the Blairite Party)
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