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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
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| Story | Tyger Fire | well-wisher | 1 | 8 years 3 days ago |
| Story | Hip Replacement Update | skinner_jennifer | 19 | 8 years 5 days ago |
| Story | Alfie's Alphabet Book - Part 1 | well-wisher | 3 | 8 years 1 week ago |
| Story | Global Warning | well-wisher | 2 | 8 years 1 week ago |
| Story | Condoms for Cornwall - a short monologue | MJG | 20 | 8 years 2 weeks ago |
| Story | They | Ewan | 4 | 8 years 2 weeks ago |
| Story | I'm Going Through Changes | skinner_jennifer | 18 | 8 years 2 weeks ago |
I like how the beach is woven
Posted on Mon, 12 Nov 2018
I like how the beach is woven all through, the people, the seagulls. It's a great frame for the story, it adds to the easy warmth of it
Read full commentPosted in Sass (Part 2)
Glad your Mum got to stay at
Posted on Sat, 10 Nov 2018
Glad your Mum got to stay at home. I'm sure your instincts were right. The two care homes I have visted were aweful. The high heels rang a bell. I wonder why they think that looking like they are running a business is...
Read full commentPosted in Gift: A Son's Story (Push)
In an interview someone
Posted on Sat, 10 Nov 2018
In an interview someone famous who had gone to live in America (can't remember who it was) said the thing they missed most about England was the sound of crows cawing in the Autumn. Your poem has a timelessness to it, makes me think this has been...
Read full commentPosted in In That Moment
Another of your beautiful
Posted on Wed, 07 Nov 2018
Another of your beautiful pared down poems. No unnecessary stuff just like Nature itself
Read full commentPosted in NATURE
I didn't know contactless was
Posted on Sat, 03 Nov 2018
I didn't know contactless was so risky! I don't like it because I forget my PIN number if don't use it each time. When I worked in a supermarket we had to check people's signatures carefully for every non cash transaction. Now if you lose a card...
Read full commentPosted in I Give Up!
44 years wow! You must both
Posted on Wed, 31 Oct 2018
44 years wow! You must both be warm and giving people :0) C ongratulations
Read full commentPosted in GROWING OLDER
I would love to see a book of
Posted on Thu, 25 Oct 2018
I would love to see a book of poetry by you and Rhiannon and Jenny and other writers, and I'm honoured you ask me too, but I have had no luck ever getting my stuff published
Read full commentPosted in An Autumn of Leaves
this is lovely. If ever I got
Posted on Thu, 25 Oct 2018
this is lovely. If ever I got to choose where in the world I'd like to visit, it would be those maple trees when the leaves turn, I'd love to walk under them. Your poem makes a beautiful picture to help my imagining. I love "cradle of colour"...
Read full commentPosted in An Autumn of Leaves
one you need to read quite a
Posted on Sun, 21 Oct 2018
one you need to read quite a few times.
the other night there was a program about two asylum seekers from Ghana trying to get from America across the border into Canada, describing how in the snow they headed towards the lights of cars...
Read full commentPosted in From Roadside
Congratulations on 1000
Posted on Thu, 18 Oct 2018
Congratulations on 1000 pieces of writing, what an achievement! Reading your work has tought me a lot about using alliteration and rhythm, and your comments are the perfect example of how to give encouraging feedback
Read full commentPosted in Junk Mail
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