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our burning issue? Poverty is sin and soul's end the means to reach new Heaven : Space, where guilt's weightless and wealth won't decay though years...
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Thank You so much for this
Posted on Fri, 14 Nov 2025
Thank You so much for this FABULOUS IP response, which I completely missed! It kept making me smile all through, like with the lifeboat bit but the last two paragraphs are BRILLIANT. How these old buildings have been here for centuries, but in...
Poetic, vivid, mysterious, this fabulous short piece by rask_balavoine is sure to get you in the mood for Halloween, so it is Pick of the Day! Please do share if you can
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A Rubik's cube, shifting sides, a bright child's hope and friendship flowering amid others' anger, all in Marandina's story which is Pick of the Day! Please do share if you can
Woven through with magic, Marandina evokes so well the landscape and weather of England's west coast through the experiences of his teenage protagonist. This part of his fabulous wip is Pick of the Day! Please do share if you can
You make "Life still goes on" so ominous! Sometimes thoughts, happenings, need time's distance to see what was going on clearly, for great descriptions to wrap round deeply hurtful experiences, objectify them. Your poem is wonderful, telling a...
Marandina has set his scene wonderfully in this first part of a new WIP. Step into his story, the darkness and magic, which is Pick of the Day! Then, please do share if you can
Sympathise with you so much! "Senses insulted by / Perverse information gathered." is a fabulous way to put it. The other day, my son wondered how people will learn empathy in the future, when so much of their knowledge will come from AI....
Thank You so much for this
Posted on Fri, 14 Nov 2025
Thank You so much for this FABULOUS IP response, which I completely missed! It kept making me smile all through, like with the lifeboat bit but the last two paragraphs are BRILLIANT. How these old buildings have been here for centuries, but in...
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If any living thing survives,
Posted on Mon, 10 Nov 2025
If any living thing survives, it will be in the cracks between mankind's control. No man's land in our battle to be God
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Poetic, Surreal, rich as an
Posted on Mon, 27 Oct 2025
Poetic, vivid, mysterious, this fabulous short piece by rask_balavoine is sure to get you in the mood for Halloween, so it is Pick of the Day! Please do share if you can
Please change or delete the image if you want to? It is from here :...
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A Rubic's cube, shifting
Posted on Fri, 12 Sep 2025
A Rubik's cube, shifting sides, a bright child's hope and friendship flowering amid others' anger, all in Marandina's story which is Pick of the Day! Please do share if you can
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This wise and beautiful poem
Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025
This wise and beautiful poem from lenchenelf is Pick of the Day! Please do share if you can
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Woven through with magic,
Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025
Woven through with magic, Marandina evokes so well the landscape and weather of England's west coast through the experiences of his teenage protagonist. This part of his fabulous wip is Pick of the Day! Please do share if you can
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You make "Life still goes on"
Posted on Sat, 12 Jul 2025
You make "Life still goes on" so ominous! Sometimes thoughts, happenings, need time's distance to see what was going on clearly, for great descriptions to wrap round deeply hurtful experiences, objectify them. Your poem is wonderful, telling a...
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Marandina has set his scene
Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025
Marandina has set his scene wonderfully in this first part of a new WIP. Step into his story, the darkness and magic, which is Pick of the Day! Then, please do share if you can
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (1)
A wise and wonderful poem
Posted on Tue, 17 Jun 2025
Growing from her gardening roots, Jenny's wise and wonderful poem is Pick of the Day! Please do share if you can
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Sympathise with you so much!
Posted on Thu, 05 Jun 2025
Sympathise with you so much! "Senses insulted by / Perverse information gathered." is a fabulous way to put it. The other day, my son wondered how people will learn empathy in the future, when so much of their knowledge will come from AI....
Read full commentPosted in Perverse Future
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