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something in the air
Flies weave a buzzing basket of still warm light. Hairline rainbow cracks in space above paths, like mistakes leave unseen tethers of regret, sticky...
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remembering dandelions (again)
Prisoned between tarmac bars of road and footpath herbicide subdued Earth waits sure of the last laugh when only the toughest are still around to see...
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breezy
this breeze, seeming slight might be calmness dying, a storm’s birth it could have come from Samarkand or been in Neanderthal lungs we all breathe...
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10th july grasshopper
mossy rocks tumbled from windbreak wall hold back reed tines' reaching on and on to moor's distance misty bright of gorse here, in warm air, low...
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wet 6th july
clouds secrete clear, cold threads, falling, coccoon round tree limbs shade flesh, lumens an airy tingle of tall grass, till rainbow orbs pool bodies...
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Your Cicely must have had a
Posted on Tue, 21 Sep 2021
Your Cicely must have had a very strong spirit to keep going when her parents passed, though I wonder, if grief is like a tide that's high when you first lose someone, then ebbs as you come to terms with it in order to keep going, then as you...
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I found this powerful and
Posted on Tue, 21 Sep 2021
I found this powerful and moving, this extreme distress seems very real, I hope you are ok
Read full commentPosted in I understand the wild beast’s roars. (IP) (Nat.geo.wild)
Wow! That must be the perfect
Posted on Sun, 19 Sep 2021
Wow! That must be the perfect short story! Was absolutely not expecting the ending:0)
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I really like how you mix
Posted on Sun, 19 Sep 2021
I really like how you mix homely into Hallow -
"farmers gathering crops late into the night,"
"School halls bursting with the fruits of Harvest,"
and the creatures outside, in the wild -
"a bee’s buzz slows as dreams...
Read full commentPosted in Autumn
Had a feeling it would be him
Posted on Sat, 11 Sep 2021
Had a feeling it would be him at the door :0) How do you create your characters? You are brilliant! Do you have any tips?
Perfidia is becoming more and more interesting, I am so impressed how you are exposing a bit more of her...
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Wow! This is my favourite
Posted on Sun, 12 Sep 2021
Wow! This is my favourite episode yet! I LOVED the beginning, with the delivery man and then it went on to be so action packed. Good on Willow! You have been building up this fete for ages and it has started off brilliantly!
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First, I really like your
Posted on Sat, 11 Sep 2021
First, I really like your title!
Then :
"a landscape
changing hue and alignment with every step." perfectly conveys moving through the natural sculpture of the outdoors
and :
Read full comment"In this wild, clean immenseness,...
Posted in A Paradise Not Yet Lost
trouble, gullible, rebel are
Posted on Thu, 09 Sep 2021
trouble, gullible, rebel are great!
This reminded me of that brilliant one of yours about homelessness?
"imaginatively disobey" this reminded me of some bright children, who put so much effort into not doing things. How wonderful to...
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I liked "clouds squeezed to a
Posted on Tue, 07 Sep 2021
I liked "clouds squeezed to a pulp" too, made me think of them being like fruit making juicy rain :0)
Also "lightening strikes like a knife" is wonderful, both for the quick jabbing sounds and the imagery
And the idea of leaves...
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"Once, men and trees knew the
Posted on Sun, 05 Sep 2021
"Once, men and trees knew the same earth," would have taken me a whole poem to say this :0)
I liked the fairy tale too. I suppose for many people in the past, and now, in some places, stories were the only place where justice...
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