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Cherry

In your shoes

The bag's bright pink, prawn cocktail in clear script. We don't have prawns now the sea is plastic soup. You wear shoes so your feet don't touch the...
Gold cherry
Poem of the week

renewable 2 (second go at this)

behind a moss furred wall woods slope down and bluebells shimmer peacock hued through bright green shade cool incense filled and in the field airy...
Cherry

renewable

Bluebell slopes shimmer bright green shade full of cool incense. Then across the field airy Rumplestiltskins white, slim as bird bones spin, slow...
Gold cherry

cotyledons

winter fingered earth safed. Now joined as prayer clasped hands they come up from darkness forgotten hopes open for the sun. Fragile, green growing...

on the way to the letterbox

On trees, sky high blossom's pure, untouchable pink. Fallen, fresh soft coolness mixes with dust and thorns.
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373 of my comments have received 377 Great Feedback votes

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I like how you wander in and

Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020

I like how you wander in and out of the painting, and memory and conversation. And like the picture, the female seems to hold up the image of the male

 

No men really shine even if they insist

they are armoured in one hundred...

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happy tails, yes :0) Don't

Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020

happy tails, yes :0) Don't cry! If there is a Heaven he will be waiting to show you, that's what I hope

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Posted in To my Best Friend...(Frankie)

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Feel for you so much, still

Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020

Feel for you so much, still miss my best friend after 20 years. You are doing all you can, making him happy and feel loved. Beautiful poem shows the strength and peace he has given you xxx

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Posted in To my Best Friend...(Frankie)

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Even though your thoughts are

Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2020

Even though your thoughts are wrapped up in metaphors of birds these poems are so raw. I feel like I am getting to know your emotional state like seeing birds flick between leaves. It seems rude to read them

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I really admire the way  last

Posted on Sat, 15 Feb 2020

I really admire the way  last words in the lines stand out, as with - wild, hurled, and the alliteration of wind and wild. I feel my throat opening like the sky as I read it, to make the long vowel sounds in my mind. Would be a great one to  hear...

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Posted in Storm

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I had not heard of

Posted on Wed, 12 Feb 2020

I had not heard of "indwelling"  before. Having looked it up, it's a great word :0) There is a quiet, positive power in this:

"Not so bright to shine beyond

Nor enough to light the way

But an indwelling warmth 

To...

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Posted in Jar of Lights

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I really like the idea of

Posted on Tue, 11 Feb 2020

I really like the idea of winter being cold blooded. So much pain! But the Earth does change, it can't help itself from turning, you don't have to try, just have your eyes open :0)

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Posted in February

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I like the details revealing

Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2020

I like the details revealing age, of taking care, of themselves and of each other, the way he holds the glass of water till her fingers grip it is so tender, the way he has to manage his heart, what he can do. Finding music he knew on the radio....

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Posted in There Was The House and There Was The Sea (1)

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I love your walking poems,

Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2020

I love your walking poems, with their breathing rhythm. But I love this too, the pause of it:

spitting drizzle – growing
heavier, but nearly back at car – see through
the cloudy veil a gleam of sunshine glowing

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Posted in Grey-Day rambling

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I like "spines of shade"

Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2020

I like "spines of shade"

and also that "love can be as painful

as much as it can be evergreen"

I am so impressed at all this brilliant writing while being very ill!

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Posted in Pine Trees

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