cold air's become a glitter ball with falling leaves its swirling lights as trees dance round their disco hall in fearful thrill of frosty nights now...
Mary jumped back from the hole and went to Wong, always keeping that hole in the web in sight, as if the Monster would burst through any time. "Wake...
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sorry, reading my comment
Posted on Tue, 26 May 2026
sorry, reading my comment back, it looks like I was criticising there being no note - I wasn't! Meant that adds to the tension, as her Mum won't have any idea where she is.
Beautiful weather here, Thank You for asking :0) Lovely breeze and...
Thank You so much for giving your time to reply, Jenny :0) I am glad you are to have pills, hope this happens soon!
It sounds magic being in the garden as the birds wake up :0) Secret time.
Take care of yourself
XXX
Lovely biology lesson, Rhiannon :0) I liked particularly how your first part seems to flow together, like leaves moving easily, and you have the tense, stiff sound of "gripping" and "sucking" in the second part, the hardness of ""pound" and "...
"News" was always a nightmare! And so unfair on those of us who didn't do exciting stuff. There should always be an option to explore imagination, the gift that boredom brings.
Your dilemmas here of which truths to tell, is so well written...
This must have been so frightening! "Their house had always been safe." First having to venture out into the strangeness of school, only to find the foundations of home being threatened - and your Mum's feelings, too, brilliantly described
You have brilliantly created such a sense of stress, being attacked by others' opinions! This is one of your wonderful pieces, like a musical composition, the pure clear note, at the end
sorry, reading my comment
Posted on Tue, 26 May 2026
sorry, reading my comment back, it looks like I was criticising there being no note - I wasn't! Meant that adds to the tension, as her Mum won't have any idea where she is.
Beautiful weather here, Thank You for asking :0) Lovely breeze and...
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Thank You so much for giving
Posted on Fri, 15 May 2026
Thank You so much for giving your time to reply, Jenny :0) I am glad you are to have pills, hope this happens soon!
Read full commentIt sounds magic being in the garden as the birds wake up :0) Secret time.
Take care of yourself
XXX
Posted in Where Thoughts Take Me
In the last few lines,
Posted on Tue, 26 May 2026
In the last few lines, Amandarella reties the string twice?
Read full commentPosted in Amanderella and the Mystery of the Moor Chap.9
This is great! Having the
Posted on Tue, 26 May 2026
This is great! Having the goodies being taken over and used by an unseen force, and those around not knowing, is really sinister.
And Danielle left no note!
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (22)
Lovely biology lesson,
Posted on Tue, 26 May 2026
Lovely biology lesson, Rhiannon :0) I liked particularly how your first part seems to flow together, like leaves moving easily, and you have the tense, stiff sound of "gripping" and "sucking" in the second part, the hardness of ""pound" and "...
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"News" was always a nightmare
Posted on Tue, 26 May 2026
"News" was always a nightmare! And so unfair on those of us who didn't do exciting stuff. There should always be an option to explore imagination, the gift that boredom brings.
Read full commentYour dilemmas here of which truths to tell, is so well written...
Posted in Tom All Alone 16 (ii)
This must have been so
Posted on Tue, 26 May 2026
This must have been so frightening! "Their house had always been safe." First having to venture out into the strangeness of school, only to find the foundations of home being threatened - and your Mum's feelings, too, brilliantly described
Read full commentPosted in Tom All Alone 16 (i)
Hi Jenny, am thinking of you.
Posted on Fri, 15 May 2026
Hi Jenny, am thinking of you. Hope you are ok and not too hot! Lots of love XXX
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You have brilliantly created
Posted on Wed, 20 May 2026
You have brilliantly created such a sense of stress, being attacked by others' opinions! This is one of your wonderful pieces, like a musical composition, the pure clear note, at the end
Read full commentPosted in Clamouring voices
The start of a new adventure
Posted on Tue, 19 May 2026
This start of a new adventure for the indomitable Amandarella is Pick of the Day! Please do share if you can
The image is from here : https://...
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