cold air's become a glitter ball with falling leaves its swirling lights as trees dance round their disco hall in fearful thrill of frosty nights now...
Mary jumped back from the hole and went to Wong, always keeping that hole in the web in sight, as if the Monster would burst through any time. "Wake...
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Jenny, I think you are a bit
Posted on Thu, 05 Jun 2025
Jenny, I think you are a bit older than me, so I consider you to be very brave to take up the challenge of a phone! I do not have one as my hands shake too much, also I cannot hear phones very well. BUT I can do email! Emails are REALLY EASY...
That sounds a bit of an ordeal! But you describe it brilliantly! Must have been scratchy and hot, as well as a bit scary, incase turning an ankle on the hard ground. Glad you made it out safely to record in this poem as your track :0)
Hoping babies are more treasured, if fewer. Have to say, though, that I don't know any young people who are confident about future prospects. This drive to replace all jobs with machines of some kind, (now even creative opportunities), and at the...
Agree with Claudine - GREAT cliffhanger from stepping off the kerb :0) I liked your descriptions of the green grocer's too. And the pressure of people's lives and possibilities on the bus
i love how always you weave time into your poems about Ireland. Seeing your photo made me think of those poor bodies found buried since the Bronze age, the brown water you describe must be much the same do you think, as it was then? All the...
Jenny, I think you are a bit
Posted on Thu, 05 Jun 2025
Jenny, I think you are a bit older than me, so I consider you to be very brave to take up the challenge of a phone! I do not have one as my hands shake too much, also I cannot hear phones very well. BUT I can do email! Emails are REALLY EASY...
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That sounds a bit of an
Posted on Thu, 05 Jun 2025
That sounds a bit of an ordeal! But you describe it brilliantly! Must have been scratchy and hot, as well as a bit scary, incase turning an ankle on the hard ground. Glad you made it out safely to record in this poem as your track :0)
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How you describe your
Posted on Tue, 03 Jun 2025
How you describe your experience is funny and made me smile Rhiannon, but must have been frustrating! And your description of your Father in law, too.
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Hoping babies are more
Posted on Mon, 02 Jun 2025
Hoping babies are more treasured, if fewer. Have to say, though, that I don't know any young people who are confident about future prospects. This drive to replace all jobs with machines of some kind, (now even creative opportunities), and at the...
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What an Inspirational poem!
Posted on Sat, 31 May 2025
What an Inspirational poem! Thank you! i will write it out to put by my laptop :0)
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Agree with Claudine - GREAT
Posted on Sat, 31 May 2025
Agree with Claudine - GREAT cliffhanger from stepping off the kerb :0) I liked your descriptions of the green grocer's too. And the pressure of people's lives and possibilities on the bus
Read full commentPosted in Dead Man: 3
i love how always you weave
Posted on Thu, 29 May 2025
i love how always you weave time into your poems about Ireland. Seeing your photo made me think of those poor bodies found buried since the Bronze age, the brown water you describe must be much the same do you think, as it was then? All the...
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So Emily is at the start of
Posted on Tue, 27 May 2025
So Emily is at the start of her story!
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Eight
I am so impressed at how you
Posted on Sun, 25 May 2025
I am so impressed at how you are making all your research come alive!
ps
Uncle Hugo had arrived home late. His virtuous demure hadn't changed
should this be virtuous demeanour?
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a romance :0)
Posted on Mon, 26 May 2025
a romance :0)
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