Woods' edge, evening, mid july. Walk through tall, wirey grass, make a dozen daddy long legs zizz up, spark-like in sideways sun, though each returns...
In shade most of the year, infront of a curving wall not quite road nor verge at tarmac's edge a large fuscia bush drops stiff silk particoloured red...
So much great stuff in this! Gods of selfies, what an interesting/scary thought. I loved "sky licked shore" too. And "Slapdash wild Spring"! BRILLIANT! And the part with the ledge is strongly nightmarish, then "soft and adrift as Winter snow"...
Your photo shows such a kind, fun, vibrant man. You write very powerfully. I am so sorry. Your wonderful children are with you, you will help each other.
I can imagine it all too easily! Possibly (fool's) gold, definitely glowing. But Musk's will be bigger, he will make his face in the sky with satellites to look like stars
I liked this a lot, too. How you describe the outer wide space of the beach, and the inner space each of us carries. As if afraid of another's footprints in one's mind, but also the possibility for there being a new beach, a new horizon, in the...
That must have been so awful for you. You describe it really well. I am sorry. My Mum has just passed, and we are going to have to do this. Though losing someone close must always be terrible, how quickly your brother passed away, that must have...
That's not true! The
Posted on Fri, 17 Jan 2025
That's not true! The policemen are always funny!
Read full commentPosted in Hit Me with Your Rhythm Stick (Dead Reckoning series - Part 44)
As Jenny says, tension really
Posted on Fri, 17 Jan 2025
As Jenny says, tension really building, now!
Read full commentPosted in Hit Me with Your Rhythm Stick (Dead Reckoning series - Part 44)
enjoyable new episode,
Posted on Fri, 10 Jan 2025
enjoyable new episode, Thankyou :0) I still feel Precious is not all bad, but so intriguing what she is up to, and very stressful for Samantha!
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So much great stuff in this!
Posted on Sat, 18 Jan 2025
So much great stuff in this! Gods of selfies, what an interesting/scary thought. I loved "sky licked shore" too. And "Slapdash wild Spring"! BRILLIANT! And the part with the ledge is strongly nightmarish, then "soft and adrift as Winter snow"...
Read full commentPosted in The Gods of Selfies
Your photo shows such a kind,
Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2025
Your photo shows such a kind, fun, vibrant man. You write very powerfully. I am so sorry. Your wonderful children are with you, you will help each other.
Read full commentPosted in "Silence"
Thankyou so much Jane XXX
Posted on Wed, 08 Jan 2025
Thankyou so much Jane XXX
Thankyou very much, Maxine, for your kind advice XXX
Read full commentPosted in "Before They Call, I Will Answer, While They Are Still Speaking, I Will Hear." Part Five.
I can imagine it all too
Posted on Tue, 07 Jan 2025
I can imagine it all too easily! Possibly (fool's) gold, definitely glowing. But Musk's will be bigger, he will make his face in the sky with satellites to look like stars
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Enjoyed this part, and that
Posted on Fri, 20 Dec 2024
Enjoyed this part, and that posted today, very much. The rhythm all on its own is great
Don't know how pernickety you like your suggestions -
"That morning felt more like March than December. The sky was a rinsed-out blue like a...
Read full commentPosted in The Patrolman - 1
I liked this a lot, too. How
Posted on Thu, 09 Jan 2025
I liked this a lot, too. How you describe the outer wide space of the beach, and the inner space each of us carries. As if afraid of another's footprints in one's mind, but also the possibility for there being a new beach, a new horizon, in the...
Read full commentPosted in Sonnet in Silence
That must have been so awful
Posted on Wed, 08 Jan 2025
That must have been so awful for you. You describe it really well. I am sorry. My Mum has just passed, and we are going to have to do this. Though losing someone close must always be terrible, how quickly your brother passed away, that must have...
Read full commentPosted in "Before They Call, I Will Answer, While They Are Still Speaking, I Will Hear." Part Five.
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