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432 of my comments have received 439 Great Feedback votes

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I'm glad :0)

Posted on Mon, 27 Jan 2020

I'm glad :0)

Yes, I always wanted to see one too, there was something magic about how you never do. Years later Mum's cat caught one, I was suprised how tiny it was! It didn't bite or scratch when I picked it up, just wriggled in a muscly...

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I like this one very much.

Posted on Mon, 27 Jan 2020

I like this one very much. Well, not like, because it is grim. Admire. The idea of earthworms being like memories in the tunnels of your mind and "uncoil of earthworms" is wonderful.

"thoughts concealed

until I forgot the existence...

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you have made the memory of

Posted on Sat, 25 Jan 2020

you have made the memory of hurt into a liquid, it's a fantastic metaphor

the welts reappear across my back...

groaning at the bottom of the sea...

the sewerage pouring through your door...

the river running through...

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Posted in Reading room

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This bit, in the middle of

Posted on Mon, 13 Jan 2020

This bit, in the middle of all the trance inducing greenery like a dagger in a soft hand:

every decency,

every abomination is homogenised - 

this slavery of a belief 

that is the condemnation of the abused.

...

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Posted in Lime Tree

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You evoke a very strong

Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2020

You evoke a very strong feeling of uneasiness:

she will show you

that you are no hunter at all -

you are the little lamb that knows

the cold sharp of terror, that knows you have,

unnoticed,

drifted from...

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Posted in Wolf moon

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I like the idea of willows

Posted on Wed, 08 Jan 2020

I like the idea of willows talking to the moon and hiding nests off moon pearly eggs :0)

 

 

 

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Posted in There is hope here

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I like the waterfall "c"

Posted on Wed, 08 Jan 2020

I like the waterfall "c" sounds, in cleft and cliff and crystal - you didn't need to say the sound as the sight words give it, really clever! The last line, every word seems stressed so it is full of the power of a mass of water.

The woods...

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Posted in Water-Break-its-Neck, Radnor Forest

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beautiful Rhiannon, I

Posted on Thu, 15 Nov 2012

beautiful Rhiannon, I particularly like how you use the form to build images then melt them away. Not just clever but creating emotional impact as well. I particularly like the last stanza with its vital surge in the middle like a wave and then...

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Posted in Poignant ice tribute to Titanic victims (Belfast, 21/10/12)

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 I feel for you.

Posted on Mon, 06 Jan 2020

 I feel for you.

Everything tells you to HELP   but if everything you are is rejected what is the right thing to do? I was lucky because my brothers did/do everything. You HAVE TO HAVE A BREAK  or you will break yourself! I am so sorry to...

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Posted in Catharsis

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Luigi I have lost count of

Posted on Sun, 05 Jan 2020

Luigi I have lost count of the things I have learned from reading your poems. I am glad you got a cherry, you ARE  wise, and witty also! No reflection necessary

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Posted in Reflected Glory

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