never done, the sea is a bed remaking itself over and over, so light never sleeps on the salt shot silk of its sheet and thoughts are beached shells...
Gone the rag sound of a bird alone dropped on naked silence between dumpsters' grinding regurgitations from horizon's bridge and fuzzy pulse of cars...
i used to cross slow growing moss swells by tree masts, tossing, lichen rigged, see in the distance dragon wings, folded into hills. But now, words'...
W hen she woke up, Mary did not feel tired anymore. Ever since she had had to stay at Jake’s house, it had taken ages to go to sleep. Night time was...
OOOOOOOOOOOOHHH!!!! This is BRILLIANT! I had NO IDEA all this was going to happen :0) You are SO CLEVER.
The clunky way human shaped robots move, you are doing that with robot emotions, showing how they might evolve, learn, adapt, grow....
I love how start with "Richly bound", making me think of oak trees being like those huge gold embossed old books, the kind with ancient histories or even magic spells inside. And "resolve continues to shine" is a wonderful way to describe their...
You are brilliant at descriptions! and you remember such details! I could not, even for yesterday. I feel very lucky to have read this. Also, silly for having commented before, that it was bad to have mechanisation if it made so many unemployed....
I really like the idea of the diner being a bridge between a magic forest and real New York :0) And a great encouragement always to have some happy imagining in mind, incase you should go into such a place where wishes are fulfilled!
"a glimpse of silver,
swish and skitter,
fish-like darting, wriggling slither,
tiny harmless insect flitter;"
this is so full of life! What a wonderful IP response Rhiannon, Thankyou.
Brilliant dialogue, again.
Posted on Tue, 22 Apr 2025
Brilliant dialogue, again. And I didn't know London was the third most watched city. Very enjoyable to read
Read full commentPosted in New Directions (36)
OOOOOOOOOOOOHHH!!!! This is
Posted on Fri, 18 Apr 2025
OOOOOOOOOOOOHHH!!!! This is BRILLIANT! I had NO IDEA all this was going to happen :0) You are SO CLEVER.
Read full commentThe clunky way human shaped robots move, you are doing that with robot emotions, showing how they might evolve, learn, adapt, grow....
Posted in Parcel for You - Part 58
I love how start with "Richly
Posted on Sat, 12 Apr 2025
I love how start with "Richly bound", making me think of oak trees being like those huge gold embossed old books, the kind with ancient histories or even magic spells inside. And "resolve continues to shine" is a wonderful way to describe their...
Read full commentPosted in Mighty Ancient Oak
I liked the banter between
Posted on Thu, 17 Apr 2025
I liked the banter between them :0)
Read full commentPosted in New Directions (35)
You are brilliant at
Posted on Wed, 16 Apr 2025
You are brilliant at descriptions! and you remember such details! I could not, even for yesterday. I feel very lucky to have read this. Also, silly for having commented before, that it was bad to have mechanisation if it made so many unemployed....
Read full commentPosted in A Black Morris Minor and a Pink Carnation
I really like the idea of the
Posted on Mon, 14 Apr 2025
I really like the idea of the diner being a bridge between a magic forest and real New York :0) And a great encouragement always to have some happy imagining in mind, incase you should go into such a place where wishes are fulfilled!
Read full commentPosted in "Where to Diner"
Great to find another
Posted on Mon, 14 Apr 2025
Great to find another instalment of your Boris Saga :0) That conversation between him and Trump sounded so likely!
Read full commentPosted in Boris and the Art of the Deal
Fantastic introduction,
Posted on Mon, 14 Apr 2025
Fantastic introduction, particularly loved the bit about Archie's Gran :0) I hope so much this book does really well
Read full commentPosted in Archibald's Note
Still thoroughly enjoyable!
Posted on Sat, 12 Apr 2025
Still thoroughly enjoyable! Very glad to find another part
Read full commentPosted in New Directions (34)
"a glimpse of silver,
Posted on Wed, 09 Apr 2025
"a glimpse of silver,
Read full commentswish and skitter,
fish-like darting, wriggling slither,
tiny harmless insect flitter;"
this is so full of life! What a wonderful IP response Rhiannon, Thankyou.
Posted in Invertebrate Fallout!
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