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211 of my comments have received 214 Great Feedback votes

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Very interesting idea. "It is

Posted on Fri, 02 Feb 2018

Very interesting idea. "It is almost as if once physical baggage has come over the threshold of the hotel that complex items of personal emotional baggage that add dimension to our identities have been left somewhere in the street outside or even...

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Well Done!

Posted on Sun, 21 Jan 2018

Well Done!

I've been vegan 25 years now, I think. It's getting easier, believe me. And people like you who can articulate your ethics clearly without apportioning blame are going to help the cause. Maybe one day people will come round to...

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The way you describe the walk

Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2018

The way you describe the walk with Bristol is the best thing I've read about dogs ever. Also enjoyed how Grandad washed up the special bowl with his elbow

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too much rhyme and rhythm???

Posted on Sun, 14 Jan 2018

too much rhyme and rhythm??? There is a feeling of joy to be had JUST  from the rhyme and rhythm when it's as good as this. "A city of gutters with rats running deep." is perfect

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the way you have made the

Posted on Thu, 11 Jan 2018

the way you have made the first part like small steps, words broken by commas, and end with the release of a flowing sentence is wonderful. I love the last two lines

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Maybe the dogs are interested

Posted on Wed, 10 Jan 2018

Maybe the dogs are interested in the "Claws of cats of unsound mind" . Or maybe wondering at the waste of so many potentional dog newspaper stands (trees much better than lamp posts as more absorbant) The Christmas tree frenzy does seem to...

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Posted in Where do Christmas Trees go to Die?

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I know it is horrid and

Posted on Sun, 07 Jan 2018

I know it is horrid and stressful when you have to keep adding it up as you go, and putting stuff back, but so long as you have enough money food shopping is such fun? Go vegan, then you won't feel guilty about meat. Shopping in the evening,...

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So beautiful. The short first

Posted on Tue, 27 Jun 2017

So beautiful. The short first lines make me think of how the air seems thicker/heavier when it's cold, so that your breath floats on it. And "break" at the end of the fourth line immediately makes me hear the crunch, as if the line were the snow...

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This is so very far from

Posted on Thu, 28 Sep 2017

This is so very far from anything I've experienced, but it made it so real to me. Particularly :

30,000 feet up – beyond blue –
we are untouchable, invincible:
nothing murderous from Mosul,
or killing from Kabul
can...

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Yes! Particularly like "grasp

Posted on Fri, 22 Sep 2017

Yes! Particularly like "grasp that bootlace, snake-like grip" Also "Where" being at the end of the line. Those last 3 lines are like tiptoe

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