Di_Hard

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part 5

By Di_Hard on Sat, 16 Jan 2021

The car bump ing as Karen drove off the ferry woke Mary from a bad dream - a huge spiderweb dangling with bundles like sad grey fruit, soft and...

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part 4

By Di_Hard on Sat, 09 Jan 2021

But Mary had no room for words. Her fear was big as a mountain. Tears spilled and a huge sob, like a tidal wave came up from her chest. The seagull...

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part 3 (redrafted)

By Di_Hard on Sat, 02 Jan 2021

Mary's heart was going "Boom, boom, boom" shaking her ribs. It was the only sound she could hear. Then Jake was there, shouting, "Can I have icecream...

part 2

By Di_Hard on Sat, 26 Dec 2020

Mary couldn't help laughing too, the first proper laugh since that Tuesday after school when she had not been allowed to go with Mum, then everyone...

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It went very well with a nice

Posted on Wed, 09 Apr 2025

It went very well with a nice cup of tea, Thankyou :0) What a brilliant story! You took me there, descriptions of the cottage reminding me strongly of going on holiday to the West of Ireland as a child

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I am really enjoying your

Posted on Sun, 06 Apr 2025

I am really enjoying your untangling of all these threads :0) What a brilliant idea, to have it all to do with the cats! And how the couples are being released as they begin to confront their problems is great

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Congratulations! This is Poem

Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2025

Congratulations! This is Poem of the Week!

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The words "Young man" used to

Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2025

The words "Young man" used to hold energy and hope. But I don't know anyone who feels that, now. Stars are cold company. "Lacing his shoes the way he was taught" made me think of how even if you do everything right, try hard, it doesn't matter....

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Not just the way to a man's

Posted on Fri, 28 Mar 2025

Not just the way to a man's heart is through his stomach, then? It seems another part of Cedric's creepiness to manipulate Vanessa like this!

Very interesting, looking at stuff from Spencer's point of view, now. Not enough just to react to...

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love the sound matching the

Posted on Sun, 23 Mar 2025

love the sound matching the meaning in : "Sufficient soaking"

and "thrive in radiance" is gorgeous.

Light showers do descend more slowly, they make me think of sky finger tips

wonderful to read a new poem from you, hope you...

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I feel I am getting to know

Posted on Fri, 14 Mar 2025

I feel I am getting to know your river through your posts :0) I really liked

our shadows

dark and monstrous elongated in slanting

light.

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I like music being physical

Posted on Fri, 14 Mar 2025

I like music being physical emotional mental blessing :0) Makes a lot of sense that it must be better to be woken by something pleasant than alarming.

It is nearly the time of year for the herring gulls to start their families which lots...

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Oh! That makes Cedric really

Posted on Thu, 13 Mar 2025

Oh! That makes Cedric really creepy! BRILLIANT idea. And Annie calling him uncle Cedric, and the contrast of how she views it all as an experiment while Vanessa is living it, you are so clever

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OOh, I love the wind locking

Posted on Sun, 09 Mar 2025

OOh, I love the wind locking them all in! Brilliant to have everyone turning up, too. This is a FABULOUS installment :0)