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woods, late
walk in the company of streams through chill evening, day's ash, grey shadows clot into understanding night a deer starts awake, hastens to hide life...
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Be Leave
I'm tired as a bee buzzing against glass for cannot pass into sleep. The deep beyond thought. Unreached though mind's wings batter and long hours,...
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gloaming
Charcoal-soft dark calls, silk wings oil-easy under cinder blue. Llightless, sky heavies falls to tall birch tops' black lace twigs, pillared on slim...
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thoughts in the small hours
as the most intelligent species it is our right to destroy this planet we are the only creatures here to have self awareness and understand concepts...
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layers
Day's doorway closes, people rush along pavements, time cut short as thoughts before sleep ; a car slams shut, cocoons a growing warmth whose wings...
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brilliant description of
Posted on Tue, 26 Sep 2023
brilliant description of intense seconds, you moved by someone being moved by the current, moving the reader with the beauty you saw and created with the current of your words. Really enjoyed
Read full commentPosted in Hush
I liked the idea of a
Posted on Sat, 23 Sep 2023
As someone who has felt alone in the past, I found this rang very true.I hope this is not how you feel just now?
Read full commentI liked the idea of a companionable alone-ness in a library, where to be alone is not to be the odd one out. And libraries are...
Posted in "Alone..."
this is so well put together!
Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2023
this is so well put together! I had no idea what you were describing, but at the end, it all fitted perfectly :0)
Read full commentPosted in The Elephant In The Room.
Bushels is a brilliant amount
Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2023
Bushels is a brilliant amount word, like the sound of rushing dry leaves, which might have even come from a bush! This is a lovely fresh air poem, "toes in the sand" says so much
Read full commentPosted in Summer's Last Weep
Wow! You have brilliantly
Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2023
Wow! You have brilliantly evoked the atmospheric brutality of thunder and lightning!
"such deluge of fury rages in the here and now"
"sheet lightning searches darkness"
wonderful!
Read full commentPosted in Tempestuous Stirrings
wonderful :0) You have the
Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2023
wonderful :0) You have the whole ebb and flow and ozone and brightness
Read full commentPosted in Around The Havens
that definition of banquette
Posted on Fri, 08 Sep 2023
that definition of banquette is wonderfully daft :0) Would love to have seen Archibald's face
Read full commentPosted in Sailing (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 34)
I sympathise with you SO
Posted on Mon, 18 Sep 2023
I sympathise with you SO MUCH about slugs! I hope all grows well next year :0)
I was working at Woolworths when that closed. I don't know how the same thing could happen again with Wilcos, there are fewer and fewer useful shops
Read full commentPosted in Red and Green.
Really enjoyed this story! I
Posted on Wed, 13 Sep 2023
Really enjoyed this story! I liked very much the description of people like bees dancing. And how you chose the Empire State building, which made me think of where Jesus was meant to meet the Devil, too. And how you went smoothly from here to...
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what a visual poem! I am
Posted on Sat, 09 Sep 2023
what a visual poem! I am guessing you are starting to feel Autumnal with all the richness!
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