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rivers - once revered liquid addresses for deities of equilibrium with gravity pull caravans of wet welded into muscled power, sprung from Earth like...
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Present
Today's gift wrapped in light. Birdsong as foil ribbon unspools, bright slipping trills tying time together. The woods' snowdrops have come! Beside...
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comfort and joy (another go at this)
beside a garage the magnolia grew in grace, still-dance of slender curves, smooth grey stem arcs, loose laced, spacing light. Buds slept - tight...
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woods, late
walk in the company of streams through chill evening, day's ash, grey shadows clot into understanding night a deer starts awake, hastens to hide life...
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Be Leave
I'm tired as a bee buzzing against glass for cannot pass into sleep. The deep beyond thought. Unreached though mind's wings batter and long hours,...
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You are keeping up the pace
Posted on Sun, 24 Aug 2025
You are keeping up the pace really well! I like how Jade is thinking of possibilities that had not occurred to Thomas as perhaps he has the potential to be a bit frustrating, always used to being in control. However maybe he will be good for Jade...
Read full commentPosted in "Art of Trouble" 5
Love both the word-sound and
Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025
Love both the word-sound and meaning of
"be more than beckoned to
by an Ice-cream van tinkle
or a sprinkle of glitter"
there must be so many, many questioning "why do we do, what we do?" these terrible days
Read full commentPosted in Lit
I love "Clustering in clouds
Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025
I love "Clustering in clouds that shade" and "welcome showers"
Read full commentPosted in That all-important molecule!
I liked very much the fort,
Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025
I liked very much the fort, and your descriptions of wildflowers. Your way of his passing the time on his walk, thinking, was great :0) And the casual way at the end, you mention he often sees people who might not be there, adds to his quality of...
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy - The Immortal Witch (6)
I like how you are
Posted on Sat, 16 Aug 2025
I like how you are introducing all the characters from the first part. And Marcus Whale is great - scary, wild, hurt, always on the outside. Did the dog want to stay in the lift, or go out if the doors opened somewhere interesting? There is a...
Read full commentPosted in The Vale - Chapter 6
I read your poem first, then
Posted on Sun, 17 Aug 2025
I read your poem first, then went to the link. Had not realised that kind of music was Jazz, although I have heard it before, always thought it was related to Tango. How amazing he could do that with only two fingers on one of his hands! And that...
Read full commentPosted in Django, Gitáno Gitaristo (Django, Gypsy Guitarist)
Another wonderful instalment
Posted on Sun, 17 Aug 2025
Another wonderful instalment :0) Gwladys is BRILLIANT!
ps you have him sleeping in the woods under the "starts"?
Read full commentPosted in Lofted (Episode 21 - The Further Chronicles of a Young Lady (and her Maid))
This is so lovely, Jenny
Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2025
This is so lovely, Jenny
Read full commentPosted in Fragments Of Life
Scozen :0) Thank You so much
Posted on Tue, 05 Aug 2025
Scozen :0) Thank You so much for reading. You come from Loch Lomond! We live on one of the islands, but may be moving to be nearer Edinburgh, as my son has a place at Napier, and it is going to be a wrench. I am so happy to have taken you back to...
Read full commentPosted in before Floris
not sure you meant "marking
Posted on Wed, 13 Aug 2025
not sure you meant "marking time" like this, but i love the idea of the patterns in the sky being a huge, incomprehensible angelic version of our clock face. I really liked "languorous" too, as it sounds like long, giving another impression of...
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