houses are envelopes posted through time recipients changing letters put in, taken out. From the War son, brother, father, lost mother upstairs, her...
Step on a moon stone to cross the stream - Van Gogh’s Starry Night - willow flowers pollen halo’d in swirling water.dark. Sun-coin's cloud-pursed. In...
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You are so kind, Turlough,
Posted on Thu, 10 Aug 2023
You are so kind, Turlough, thankyou! Neighbours on both sides are lovely. Infact when the council was doing spraying up the road, one neighbour, who was outside at the time, asked them not to spray my wildflower bit, and since then they haven't!...
Thankyou Turlough :0) I am pathetic about crying. They always do something. The worst thing was the weedkiller they put on the roof to kill stuff growing on the chimney (well, not them, someone else paid to, when they left) and the drips ran off...
well, that has cheered me up no end :0) Thankyou so much for all your immoral support :0) I will just hope they get engine trouble on the way back to England and have to wait ages and ages for someone to fix it. Or even better, engine trouble the...
I came onto ABC just now thinking of writing a rant as the people who own the holiday let upstairs have come to stay and when I went outside today they have dug up all my wildflowers. Reading this has cheered me right up :0) So a big THANKYOU!...
I love your macro views, zooming in as with "green tangle of / shade, a jungle assembled". I like watching snippets of lives there, too :0) It is brilliant how you draw attention to these vital creatures
Thankyou so much for your very generous comment Turlough :0) There was a book I read to my son where one of the character's parents became a tree and they would have to visit them in the woods :0) I am very lucky as it is just a few minutes down...
So much sense of dramatic change! I liked the rhymes at the beginning very much, specially how you have "rain" at the end of a line. Then "A bridge of paper/Crossing chasms to the past" is BRILLIANT. And glad you conclude with "rainbows" after...
Brilliant to find another part of this story! Perfect for reading on a Saturday afternoon :0) How on Earth are you keeping it going alongside the Sir Harry one?
Should this be disturbed? "Willow was pleased she’d disturbance that cat’s...
To find someone you can make laugh, who makes you laugh too, that is the most special relationship there can be, I think. So the beginning of your poem was so uplifting, joyous. Making the end like when music is suddenly cut off, the loss and...
You are so kind, Turlough,
Posted on Thu, 10 Aug 2023
You are so kind, Turlough, thankyou! Neighbours on both sides are lovely. Infact when the council was doing spraying up the road, one neighbour, who was outside at the time, asked them not to spray my wildflower bit, and since then they haven't!...
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Thankyou Turlough :0) I am
Posted on Thu, 10 Aug 2023
Thankyou Turlough :0) I am pathetic about crying. They always do something. The worst thing was the weedkiller they put on the roof to kill stuff growing on the chimney (well, not them, someone else paid to, when they left) and the drips ran off...
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well, that has cheered me up
Posted on Wed, 09 Aug 2023
well, that has cheered me up no end :0) Thankyou so much for all your immoral support :0) I will just hope they get engine trouble on the way back to England and have to wait ages and ages for someone to fix it. Or even better, engine trouble the...
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I came onto ABC just now
Posted on Wed, 09 Aug 2023
I came onto ABC just now thinking of writing a rant as the people who own the holiday let upstairs have come to stay and when I went outside today they have dug up all my wildflowers. Reading this has cheered me right up :0) So a big THANKYOU!...
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I am glad you have a bent for
Posted on Wed, 09 Aug 2023
I am glad you have a bent for writing fun clever poems Luigi :0) Hope you have a lovely holiday!
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I love your macro views,
Posted on Wed, 09 Aug 2023
I love your macro views, zooming in as with "green tangle of / shade, a jungle assembled". I like watching snippets of lives there, too :0) It is brilliant how you draw attention to these vital creatures
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Thankyou so much for your
Posted on Wed, 09 Aug 2023
Thankyou so much for your very generous comment Turlough :0) There was a book I read to my son where one of the character's parents became a tree and they would have to visit them in the woods :0) I am very lucky as it is just a few minutes down...
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So much sense of dramatic
Posted on Sun, 06 Aug 2023
So much sense of dramatic change! I liked the rhymes at the beginning very much, specially how you have "rain" at the end of a line. Then "A bridge of paper/Crossing chasms to the past" is BRILLIANT. And glad you conclude with "rainbows" after...
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Brilliant to find another
Posted on Sat, 05 Aug 2023
Brilliant to find another part of this story! Perfect for reading on a Saturday afternoon :0) How on Earth are you keeping it going alongside the Sir Harry one?
Read full commentShould this be disturbed? "Willow was pleased she’d disturbance that cat’s...
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To find someone you can make
Posted on Sat, 05 Aug 2023
To find someone you can make laugh, who makes you laugh too, that is the most special relationship there can be, I think. So the beginning of your poem was so uplifting, joyous. Making the end like when music is suddenly cut off, the loss and...
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