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hard and fast and shiny
we make our faces look plastic like dolls we had as children, un aging if we can afford to pay in plastic. Package fruit so it won't go black as air...
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lost in space
in a bowl of hills beside the sea air is ice cream red orange green lights tutti frutti the ferry's fog horn a spoon full of stillness
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Spring a Butterfly
Dusty cocoon of box tight packed through warmer days deep green wire limbed larvi unbends into branches of frizzy plastic tree tall, when you both...
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not ready to fly yet
cat on the bed looks up as I go in he lies on the floor curled as if fallen like a leaf still in school uniform the chrysalis of his face asleep next...
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clues
Pheonix feathers ruffle beneath the cherry trees on pavement by the letterbox and shed gold of a giant lion molten on the road's curve near the park'...
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OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!! What a
Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2024
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!! What a plot twist! Didn't see that one coming :0) Masterful storytelling!
Read full commentPosted in Strange Brew (Dead Reckoning series - Part 33)
Fabulous rhymes Luigi! Very
Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2024
Fabulous rhymes Luigi! Very enjoyable altogether :0) Gave me a strange impression of camels loaded up with cock-tail cabinets trekking across the desert
Read full commentPosted in Djinn and Tonic
You make a really good point,
Posted on Sat, 26 Oct 2024
You make a really good point, without letting your emotions overcome you, which is more than I have been able to do, the times I have tried the last few months!
Read full commentPosted in If Netanyahu and the Israelis should invade Britain? (Don’t panic! It’s only History repeating itself!) by Alfred N.Muggins
"In the middle of the box was
Posted on Wed, 30 Oct 2024
"In the middle of the box was a circular glass lens, a black pupil surrounded by a luminous red iris." made me think of Sauron, not Hal :0) Glad the narrator made it out! And that Fritz was not Sauron, that he gave all his former students choice...
Read full commentPosted in Who Wants to Live Forever?
I am looking forward to the
Posted on Sun, 27 Oct 2024
I am looking forward to the crescendo! It will be sad if there are to be no more outings for Perfidia, she is a BRILLIANT character - don't suppose she could set up a detective agency of her own, with Chaos? Would love to see her outwitting some...
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 21
So interesting how you are
Posted on Sun, 27 Oct 2024
So interesting how you are unfolding Perfidia's character, this fragility. And Daphne softening up, too. You are building up to an explosive dinner party!!!
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 21
"It's clear that I can't
Posted on Mon, 28 Oct 2024
"It's clear that I can't communicate with these people" that's the saddest line, as maybe if he had been able to, before, whatever happened to cause him to become a ghost could have been averted.
Read full commentGreat build up of tension with the short...
Posted in Ghost Story
wise words
Posted on Sat, 26 Oct 2024
wise words
Read full commentPosted in If Netanyahu and the Israelis should invade Britain? (Don’t panic! It’s only History repeating itself!) by Alfred N.Muggins
If he ended up so like the
Posted on Sun, 27 Oct 2024
If with all emotional up-grades he ended up so like the kind of person Vanessa bought him to get a break from, would he guilt trip her so much she could not take him back to Cybermates? It would not be like a divorce at all, would it? (imagine...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for You..Part 39
"And that man on the
Posted on Sun, 27 Oct 2024
"And that man on the television, Jeremy Paxman, I don’t think I like him.’" That's so funny :0)
Read full commentThe two strands you have : one of Vanessa feeing manipulated by Cybermates (am beginning to wonder if they are a company created by robots) and...
Posted in Parcel for You..Part 39
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