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Spring a Butterfly
Dusty cocoon of box tight packed through warmer days deep green wire limbed larvi unbends into branches of frizzy plastic tree tall, when you both...
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not ready to fly yet
cat on the bed looks up as I go in he lies on the floor curled as if fallen like a leaf still in school uniform the chrysalis of his face asleep next...
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clues
Pheonix feathers ruffle beneath the cherry trees on pavement by the letterbox and shed gold of a giant lion molten on the road's curve near the park'...
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mushroom movement
green grown gown gauzy grass grace solid soil lid down wonder on grains gain rain sense tense dense silent silt still eel slick icky cling linger...
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blackberries
prussian purple sprays, each sweet-swollen round of rounds bursts with crimson juice, stalk-thrust out as if reaching to fill Autumn's hungry gaze or...
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Jenny's lyrical poem about a
Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023
Jenny's lyrical poem about a writer's inspiration is Pick of the Day! Please do share and retweet if you can
Read full commentPosted in When All I Need Is Artistry
Wonderful, inspirational poem
Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023
Wonderful, inspirational poem! Like many others, I loved "shower of words/like cloudburst descends"
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Of course! Guessing sunny
Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023
Of course! Guessing sunny side up?
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I liked your description of
Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023
I liked your description of gallantry, drinking Maria's Rakia so Priyatelkata didn't have to :0) And the description of the lift very much too. I had only heard about teflon being a result of space travel technology so justifying the huge amount...
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I liked how Sandra is
Posted on Tue, 25 Jul 2023
I liked how Sandra is concerned that Blueberry has water, even though she hates and fears the dog, showing she is not an uncaring person. And loved how Thomas's first reaction was concern for Blueberry, not his Mum :0) Which reinforced you saying...
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I love the richness of your
Posted on Tue, 25 Jul 2023
I love the richness of your descriptions, there seems such abundance - characters, animals, plants! Maria must be very strong willed and tough to be able to look after so many animals on her own
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Wondering if, sensing how
Posted on Mon, 24 Jul 2023
Wondering if, sensing how hostile Thomas's mother is about the relationship of the two people the dog loves best, has made Blueberry hostile to her? I really liked how you describe her as "lightly Christian" and Christianity meant to be about...
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It made me think of the crows
Posted on Mon, 24 Jul 2023
It made me think of the crows being like a catalyst with the storm to make your fairytale memories from childhood so strong they seemed reality, that if you were outside that window you would be in magic
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He is like Rango, the feral
Posted on Mon, 24 Jul 2023
He is like Rango, the feral cat I am feeding :0) That is a wonderful photo! I had not heard of those comic strips. I really like the rhyming in your first part, how it ends with "marmaladey shade" is great :0)
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Don't know what
Posted on Fri, 21 Jul 2023
Don't know what to say, absolute masterpiece :0) If I read on the 12 I hope it would not be after you as would have trouble with stopping giggling
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