Pheonix feathers ruffle beneath the cherry trees on pavement by the letterbox and shed gold of a giant lion molten on the road's curve near the park'...
prussian purple sprays, each sweet-swollen round of rounds bursts with crimson juice, stalk-thrust out as if reaching to fill Autumn's hungry gaze or...
I guess he meant the change to sound scary, as his military parade was not as intimidating at China's. But his willingness to send boats to Venezuela while not lifting a finger (maybe a middle finger) to help Gaza, is...
I really liked the tornado, too! And Danielle's practicality after he had been imagining cannibals, as she wonders which local island :0) Also the description of them going across the rocks is great
I think of writer's block being like a desert peopled with shadows, but your words here are like rain, enabling millions of flowers to spring up from dry sand
You are keeping up the pace really well! I like how Jade is thinking of possibilities that had not occurred to Thomas as perhaps he has the potential to be a bit frustrating, always used to being in control. However maybe he will be good for Jade...
I did enjoy very much, Thank
Posted on Mon, 08 Sep 2025
I did enjoy very much, Thank You :0) I feel for you greatly, about the haircut. And £700 for a table!!! Good gracious!
See from the dates this is written about events awhile ago, so hope you are going into this Autumn with less exposed...
Read full commentPosted in Birthday Blues by Alfred Muggins
Very well put.
Posted on Sat, 06 Sep 2025
Very well put.
I guess he meant the change to sound scary, as his military parade was not as intimidating at China's. But his willingness to send boats to Venezuela while not lifting a finger (maybe a middle finger) to help Gaza, is...
Read full commentPosted in The Department of War
Enjoyed this, too
Posted on Sat, 06 Sep 2025
Enjoyed this, too
Read full commentPosted in Listen to the mad man
that must be the Perfect
Posted on Wed, 03 Sep 2025
that must be the Perfect Freshers' Week :0)
Read full commentPosted in Leaving home Inspiration point ( IP )
I really liked the tornado,
Posted on Tue, 02 Sep 2025
I really liked the tornado, too! And Danielle's practicality after he had been imagining cannibals, as she wonders which local island :0) Also the description of them going across the rocks is great
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (7)
Love :
Posted on Mon, 01 Sep 2025
Love :
tranquil distant hills
keeping their ancient secrets.
Spry and pure spirit of torrent,
fly across blessings bestowed
I am happy you have rain at last, and hope your garden has some soon, too, so you can...
Read full commentPosted in A Moment To Ponder
I think of writer's block
Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025
I think of writer's block being like a desert peopled with shadows, but your words here are like rain, enabling millions of flowers to spring up from dry sand
Read full commentPosted in When All Seems Lost
Agree with Jenny, I really
Posted on Sun, 24 Aug 2025
Agree with Jenny, I really like how you are developing Constable John's character in this part
Read full commentPosted in Denied (Episode 22 - The Further Chronicles of a Young Lady (and her Maid))
You are keeping up the pace
Posted on Sun, 24 Aug 2025
You are keeping up the pace really well! I like how Jade is thinking of possibilities that had not occurred to Thomas as perhaps he has the potential to be a bit frustrating, always used to being in control. However maybe he will be good for Jade...
Read full commentPosted in "Art of Trouble" 5
Love both the word-sound and
Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025
Love both the word-sound and meaning of
"be more than beckoned to
by an Ice-cream van tinkle
or a sprinkle of glitter"
there must be so many, many questioning "why do we do, what we do?" these terrible days
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