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highland games 2018 (again)
sound wells up from the town molten silver bright unpools between old buildings, gold in afternoon sun, warm. Home. Thrill swells - All have come...
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W_W
Some times there is a flicker in the passing pages of years, a golden sparkle and bright colour reaches out from the black and white makes a reader...
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a break from hoovering
wriggle bummed bees busy browsing discourse on roses, pore over cool pale petal pages of pollen gold-illumined manuscripts gathering anthologies of...
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In your shoes
The bag's bright pink, prawn cocktail in clear script. We don't have prawns now the sea is plastic soup. You wear shoes so your feet don't touch the...
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renewable 2 (second go at this)
behind a moss furred wall woods slope down and bluebells shimmer peacock hued through bright green shade cool incense filled and in the field airy...
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I think of writer's block
Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025
I think of writer's block being like a desert peopled with shadows, but your words here are like rain, enabling millions of flowers to spring up from dry sand
Read full commentPosted in When All Seems Lost
Agree with Jenny, I really
Posted on Sun, 24 Aug 2025
Agree with Jenny, I really like how you are developing Constable John's character in this part
Read full commentPosted in Denied (Episode 22 - The Further Chronicles of a Young Lady (and her Maid))
You are keeping up the pace
Posted on Sun, 24 Aug 2025
You are keeping up the pace really well! I like how Jade is thinking of possibilities that had not occurred to Thomas as perhaps he has the potential to be a bit frustrating, always used to being in control. However maybe he will be good for Jade...
Read full commentPosted in "Art of Trouble" 5
Love both the word-sound and
Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025
Love both the word-sound and meaning of
"be more than beckoned to
by an Ice-cream van tinkle
or a sprinkle of glitter"
there must be so many, many questioning "why do we do, what we do?" these terrible days
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I love "Clustering in clouds
Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025
I love "Clustering in clouds that shade" and "welcome showers"
Read full commentPosted in That all-important molecule!
I liked very much the fort,
Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025
I liked very much the fort, and your descriptions of wildflowers. Your way of his passing the time on his walk, thinking, was great :0) And the casual way at the end, you mention he often sees people who might not be there, adds to his quality of...
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy - The Immortal Witch (6)
I like how you are
Posted on Sat, 16 Aug 2025
I like how you are introducing all the characters from the first part. And Marcus Whale is great - scary, wild, hurt, always on the outside. Did the dog want to stay in the lift, or go out if the doors opened somewhere interesting? There is a...
Read full commentPosted in The Vale - Chapter 6
I read your poem first, then
Posted on Sun, 17 Aug 2025
I read your poem first, then went to the link. Had not realised that kind of music was Jazz, although I have heard it before, always thought it was related to Tango. How amazing he could do that with only two fingers on one of his hands! And that...
Read full commentPosted in Django, Gitáno Gitaristo (Django, Gypsy Guitarist)
Another wonderful instalment
Posted on Sun, 17 Aug 2025
Another wonderful instalment :0) Gwladys is BRILLIANT!
ps you have him sleeping in the woods under the "starts"?
Read full commentPosted in Lofted (Episode 21 - The Further Chronicles of a Young Lady (and her Maid))
This is so lovely, Jenny
Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2025
This is so lovely, Jenny
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