While flowers and fruit and leaves fall, birds rise calling dawn from horizon's broken shell; song from bare branches brightens silent cold; and soon...
we make our faces look plastic like dolls we had as children, un aging if we can afford to pay in plastic. Package fruit so it won't go black as air...
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Brilliant to find another
Posted on Sat, 05 Aug 2023
Brilliant to find another part of this story! Perfect for reading on a Saturday afternoon :0) How on Earth are you keeping it going alongside the Sir Harry one?
Should this be disturbed? "Willow was pleased she’d disturbance that cat’s...
To find someone you can make laugh, who makes you laugh too, that is the most special relationship there can be, I think. So the beginning of your poem was so uplifting, joyous. Making the end like when music is suddenly cut off, the loss and...
guessing it is the magic of bird poo :0) I was wondering to myself why so many things producing berries which birds like to eat (raspberries, brambles, ivy, cotoneaster...) just happen to spring up beside places birds like to sing from, like...
Rhiannon's lovely poem could be a UK version of "When Life gives you lemons, make lemonade." This bright side to a wet Summer is Pick of the Day! Please do share and retweet if you can
how terrifying! I would have been the same! (interesting how the bees stopped buzzing before you heard it, maybe they felt the vibrations do you think?) There is such a wrongness about sounds like that, as if they are tearing something that will...
I am sorry it didn't work out this year. My flowerbed was not so good, either. As Rhiannon says, weather is maybe the cause, though wildflowers do not like to be told what to do I have found :0) So, when they DO flower it is even more special!...
Agree with Jenny, very exciting! Poor Emily though! Really creepy thinking someone you had gone to for help was watching your home on their computer! And the conversation between Thies and Stacy and Brent is great too
I did feel for you, listening to a news program about America the other day. Our lot are pretty grim, too, falling over themselves to say how they want to put off transitioning to renewables, in between updates of forest fires. A heartfelt poem,...
"and flower buds – to burst,
shedding pollen
which fertilizes so that seeds and fruit
can be dispersed"
great rhythm and rhyme, and your science background adding another ingredient :0) I like how you go through the...
Brilliant to find another
Posted on Sat, 05 Aug 2023
Brilliant to find another part of this story! Perfect for reading on a Saturday afternoon :0) How on Earth are you keeping it going alongside the Sir Harry one?
Read full commentShould this be disturbed? "Willow was pleased she’d disturbance that cat’s...
Posted in Willow's Missing Tail" 10
To find someone you can make
Posted on Sat, 05 Aug 2023
To find someone you can make laugh, who makes you laugh too, that is the most special relationship there can be, I think. So the beginning of your poem was so uplifting, joyous. Making the end like when music is suddenly cut off, the loss and...
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guessing it is the magic of
Posted on Thu, 03 Aug 2023
guessing it is the magic of bird poo :0) I was wondering to myself why so many things producing berries which birds like to eat (raspberries, brambles, ivy, cotoneaster...) just happen to spring up beside places birds like to sing from, like...
Read full commentPosted in The Vigorous Fig
Rhiannon's lovely poem could
Posted on Thu, 03 Aug 2023
Rhiannon's lovely poem could be a UK version of "When Life gives you lemons, make lemonade." This bright side to a wet Summer is Pick of the Day! Please do share and retweet if you can
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how terrifying! I would have
Posted on Wed, 02 Aug 2023
how terrifying! I would have been the same! (interesting how the bees stopped buzzing before you heard it, maybe they felt the vibrations do you think?) There is such a wrongness about sounds like that, as if they are tearing something that will...
Read full commentPosted in Under Late Spring Sky
I am sorry it didn't work out
Posted on Wed, 02 Aug 2023
I am sorry it didn't work out this year. My flowerbed was not so good, either. As Rhiannon says, weather is maybe the cause, though wildflowers do not like to be told what to do I have found :0) So, when they DO flower it is even more special!...
Read full commentPosted in Under Late Spring Sky
Agree with Jenny, very
Posted on Sun, 30 Jul 2023
Agree with Jenny, very exciting! Poor Emily though! Really creepy thinking someone you had gone to for help was watching your home on their computer! And the conversation between Thies and Stacy and Brent is great too
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I did feel for you, listening
Posted on Sat, 29 Jul 2023
I did feel for you, listening to a news program about America the other day. Our lot are pretty grim, too, falling over themselves to say how they want to put off transitioning to renewables, in between updates of forest fires. A heartfelt poem,...
Read full commentPosted in "Murky Waters"
"and flower buds – to burst,
Posted on Fri, 28 Jul 2023
"and flower buds – to burst,
Read full commentshedding pollen
which fertilizes so that seeds and fruit
can be dispersed"
great rhythm and rhyme, and your science background adding another ingredient :0) I like how you go through the...
Posted in chlorophyll
Jenny's lyrical poem about a
Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023
Jenny's lyrical poem about a writer's inspiration is Pick of the Day! Please do share and retweet if you can
Read full commentPosted in When All I Need Is Artistry
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