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gorse
wild yellow, bold, bee-full, gladsome glory yellow glowing gifts grow, spirit lifting sweet, small yellow flames, lip-soft, scented, bright tip dull...
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view
My neighbour had seen me, slow pulling my shopping up the road had waved and cheerily bellowed "Can you not go faster?" Below his renovated house,...
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untravelling path
a memory of walking worn between trees into moss and fallen leaves. A parting as through hair, to tame or make bindable a growing thing shod foot...
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driverless
the more people run away the less there is to escape to the more beauty we buy the less room we have for truth we fuel our vehicles with tomorrows...
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RV
While flowers and fruit and leaves fall, birds rise calling dawn from horizon's broken shell; song from bare branches brightens silent cold; and soon...
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love all your word sounds -
Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2024
love all your word sounds - that last part specially, and the rhythm you create it is like billowing flames suddenly darting out as the wind changes. The poem gets more energy as it progresses, evoking the fear of uncontrolled fire, and then the...
Read full commentPosted in Firewall – Dental Portcullis!
This is beautiful. "I let it
Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2024
This is beautiful. "I let it hold me in its stirrings" is perfect for that need to look deep into flames, not look away, as if in respect for what is happening to the trees, their long lives.
" everything
that was long and lost....
Read full commentPosted in Watching the Fire
I am so sorry to hear that! I
Posted on Tue, 05 Nov 2024
I am so sorry to hear that! I hope it has been recognised to be through no fault of your own
Read full commentPosted in On the Shelf Again, so to speak! By Alfred N.Muggins
That IS an interesting twist!
Posted on Sun, 03 Nov 2024
That IS an interesting twist! Poor Martha! Just when it seemed super complicated already!
Read full commentLoved "fur" elise doorbell :0)
Posted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 22
To start with, it seemed the
Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2024
To start with, it seemed the dream country, somewhere anyone could earn a living by writing. But if all the writing is rubbish there, (because no one has to try, maybe?) why would anyone want to read? Even a good writer's mind might become...
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OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!! What a
Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2024
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!! What a plot twist! Didn't see that one coming :0) Masterful storytelling!
Read full commentPosted in Strange Brew (Dead Reckoning series - Part 33)
Fabulous rhymes Luigi! Very
Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2024
Fabulous rhymes Luigi! Very enjoyable altogether :0) Gave me a strange impression of camels loaded up with cock-tail cabinets trekking across the desert
Read full commentPosted in Djinn and Tonic
You make a really good point,
Posted on Sat, 26 Oct 2024
You make a really good point, without letting your emotions overcome you, which is more than I have been able to do, the times I have tried the last few months!
Read full commentPosted in If Netanyahu and the Israelis should invade Britain? (Don’t panic! It’s only History repeating itself!) by Alfred N.Muggins
"In the middle of the box was
Posted on Wed, 30 Oct 2024
"In the middle of the box was a circular glass lens, a black pupil surrounded by a luminous red iris." made me think of Sauron, not Hal :0) Glad the narrator made it out! And that Fritz was not Sauron, that he gave all his former students choice...
Read full commentPosted in Who Wants to Live Forever?
I am looking forward to the
Posted on Sun, 27 Oct 2024
I am looking forward to the crescendo! It will be sad if there are to be no more outings for Perfidia, she is a BRILLIANT character - don't suppose she could set up a detective agency of her own, with Chaos? Would love to see her outwitting some...
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