Breeze!

By Rhiannonw
Mon, 27 Jul 2026
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Welcome breeze
shaking trees
blows in clouds
with shade
– soon showers?
fresh, refreshing
cooler air –
where
is my jumper or gilet,
long neglected summer-wear!
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I liked this very much,
I liked this very much, slight as a breeze, but with the sense of hope for change
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I wish I could send you some
I wish I could send you some from here :0) Our yard is inches deep again!
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"Welcome breeze
"Welcome breeze
shaking trees.."
I find myself celebrating cloud cover at the moment. The fall of rain comes to the popping of champagne corks just now!
There's a lovely rhythm to this poem, Rhiannon.
Here's to future precipitation!
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