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Cherry

part 6

Mary went 5 more steps, then turned back. The car lights had gone! She gasped, and Karen’ s voice came at once “Mary! What’s taking you so long? If...
Cherry

part 5

The car bump ing as Karen drove off the ferry woke Mary from a bad dream - a huge spiderweb dangling with bundles like sad grey fruit, soft and...
Cherry

part 4

But Mary had no room for words. Her fear was big as a mountain. Tears spilled and a huge sob, like a tidal wave came up from her chest. The seagull...
Cherry

part 3 (redrafted)

Mary's heart was going "Boom, boom, boom" shaking her ribs. It was the only sound she could hear. Then Jake was there, shouting, "Can I have icecream...
Cherry

part 2

Mary couldn't help laughing too, the first proper laugh since that Tuesday after school when she had not been allowed to go with Mum, then everyone...

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Just re read this, and wanted

Posted on Sun, 29 Aug 2021

Just re read this, and wanted to say how beautiful it is. Gentle. Wise. I love it

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Posted in Going With The Flow

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I wonder if it is like the

Posted on Fri, 08 Oct 2021

I wonder if it is like the difference between a solo singer's voice and a choir? Both are beautiful and powerful. I loved your description in the first part

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Posted in October

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I had always thought it was

Posted on Thu, 07 Oct 2021

I had always thought it was to make sure we stay right where they want us? 

I think cats need suspense - If a cat sits next to a likely looking hole is a mouse going to come out of that hole? If a cat lies down suddenly in the middle of...

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Posted in More About Cats

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Agree with Jenny! Specially

Posted on Thu, 07 Oct 2021

Agree with Jenny! Specially the beginning. Just the rhythm of this :

"India was snoozing peacefully in her crate, warmed by a handy shaft of autumnal sunshine shining through the kitchen window.  She heard, but tried to ignore, the pad,...

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Posted in From A Dithtanthe!

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Brilliant Luigi!!!  

Posted on Thu, 07 Oct 2021

Brilliant Luigi!!!

 

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Posted in Choice

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You are a brilliant poet, can

Posted on Sat, 02 Oct 2021

You are a brilliant poet, can pin down the mist of moods, almost in a sort of collage of trivial things to make something so intimate.

 I wish you a happy day tomorrow.

I hope this is not insensitive and ignorant, if you find sugary...

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Posted in When I'm sad I eat sweets

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Oh Penny, this is great! I so

Posted on Sat, 02 Oct 2021

Oh Penny, this is great! I so hope you can keep spinning your story for many many more episodes. The panda details were lovely :0) And the tiny snippets of the person behind all these challenges, and Max, you are revealing them just the right...

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 19

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"this cold flesh wrapped"

Posted on Thu, 30 Sep 2021

"this cold flesh wrapped"

"suddenly stirs...slips out of sight"

"now swerving into deeper silence"

 "feverishly searching / coiled shadowed plants"

"cool eyed glances"

"shyness:wishing for night time"

"...

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Lovely to see another chunk

Posted on Wed, 29 Sep 2021

Lovely to see another chunk of your wonderful story! You are handling all the strands so deftly.

Is this a typo for assessed ?  "Willow stepped out into the late afternoon sunlight and accessed the crowd"

It makes my day to...

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 18

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Really clever, weaving a

Posted on Wed, 29 Sep 2021

Really clever, weaving a great description of the caddis fly's environment into a political point, making the metaphor work so well without a hint of rant. Brilliant POD

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Posted in I, Caddis

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