208 of my comments have received 211 Great Feedback votes
"I love it"
Posted on Fri, 07 Jun 2019
"I love it"
your poem holds this as its essence, it's so pared down like your feeling was transported out of you without any interference, there's a pure joy in here. Like Jenny, I've known this too, where you feel a huge strength and...Read full comment
Posted in Plaza
it made me hurt in sympathy,
Posted on Mon, 03 Jun 2019
it made me hurt in sympathy, reading. The st of stabbing and stitching, the idea of someone writing their name inside you. "Every door slammed quietly/inside" how you shut yourself in so deep trying to escape feelingRead full comment
Posted in Dark Rooms
to start with I thought wow
Posted on Wed, 29 May 2019
to start with I thought wow what gorgeous photos, how could you make a poem to match, but you HAVE, as the photos are still but the poem is full of movement, just as we look around, you show the cow parsley, the buttercups. Then the movement of...Read full comment
Posted in Scenic Variations of the Wye
I love this! You are
Posted on Thu, 23 May 2019
I love this! You are brilliant.
The ogg sounds are like water filled footprints, sucking at the rhythm
Then "idle" mixed with the "S" of secluded makes me think of intruders sliding off, like in fairy tales, the place magically...Read full comment
Posted in Bog Brilliance
wow, that's st francis of
Posted on Tue, 21 May 2019
wow, that's st francis of assissi level!!!
do you find hover flies love your lilles? I had some oriental (I think the beast from the east ate them as gone without trace now) and one had 12 hoverflies either on it or very near? Don't know...Read full comment
Posted in I Didn't Kill the Scarlet Beetles
Enjoyed this so much! I had a
Posted on Wed, 22 May 2019
Enjoyed this so much! I had a bond like that with my dog. the sense that your world is alright because your dog is alright, whatever happens outside you can take it. And the stealthy rhymes, never forced.Read full comment
Posted in Anthony and Cleopatra
this would make a great film
Posted on Sun, 12 May 2019
this would make a great film :0) What does it say about Bill that he so wanted to be on the winnng side that he got someone who had earned their place to leave? I dread to think what Jennifer thought of him! It feels like a Machiavellian fable...Read full comment
Posted in The Cinderella Team
I hope this is not inspired
Posted on Sat, 11 May 2019
I hope this is not inspired by you working in a horrible new job?
"The world gave away free stuff and it was the best stuff anybody could ever get their hands on but it wasn’t enough. There was a bit more that we all needed and for some of...Read full comment
Posted in I Woke Up (in inverted commas)