Very interesting to read his story. I only really knew of him from hearing an interview about how by the time they let working class people into Oxford it was so dummed down there was no point going there, and that the elites never accepted him...
You are quite right Tom, it's just a collection of nature scenes. It's just that I realised that someone from centuries ago could have seen them, too. And while I think of the wood as a beautiful place to go and see the sun and hear the birds....
I really liked the tornado, too! And Danielle's practicality after he had been imagining cannibals, as she wonders which local island :0) Also the description of them going across the rocks is great
I think of writer's block being like a desert peopled with shadows, but your words here are like rain, enabling millions of flowers to spring up from dry sand
You are keeping up the pace really well! I like how Jade is thinking of possibilities that had not occurred to Thomas as perhaps he has the potential to be a bit frustrating, always used to being in control. However maybe he will be good for Jade...
BRILLIANT!!!
Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019
BRILLIANT!!! This is absolute magic :0)
love "pale posy bunches" "coin wings" Wow! "seed-bulge" perfect . Also "far beyond their leafing"
well, all of it, really!
Insert, i wasn't sure what the trees across the road...
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Very interesting to read his
Posted on Fri, 02 Feb 2018
Very interesting to read his story. I only really knew of him from hearing an interview about how by the time they let working class people into Oxford it was so dummed down there was no point going there, and that the elites never accepted him...
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You are quite right Tom, it's
Posted on Sun, 17 Sep 2017
You are quite right Tom, it's just a collection of nature scenes. It's just that I realised that someone from centuries ago could have seen them, too. And while I think of the wood as a beautiful place to go and see the sun and hear the birds....
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that must be the Perfect
Posted on Wed, 03 Sep 2025
that must be the Perfect Freshers' Week :0)
Read full commentPosted in Leaving home Inspiration point ( IP )
I really liked the tornado,
Posted on Tue, 02 Sep 2025
I really liked the tornado, too! And Danielle's practicality after he had been imagining cannibals, as she wonders which local island :0) Also the description of them going across the rocks is great
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (7)
Love :
Posted on Mon, 01 Sep 2025
Love :
tranquil distant hills
keeping their ancient secrets.
Spry and pure spirit of torrent,
fly across blessings bestowed
I am happy you have rain at last, and hope your garden has some soon, too, so you can...
Read full commentPosted in A Moment To Ponder
Agree with Claudine and Drew,
Posted on Fri, 22 Aug 2025
Agree with Claudine and Drew, found this very well thought out and described, really convincing
Read full commentPosted in The Patrolman - 37 (1/2)
I think of writer's block
Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025
I think of writer's block being like a desert peopled with shadows, but your words here are like rain, enabling millions of flowers to spring up from dry sand
Read full commentPosted in When All Seems Lost
Agree with Jenny, I really
Posted on Sun, 24 Aug 2025
Agree with Jenny, I really like how you are developing Constable John's character in this part
Read full commentPosted in Denied (Episode 22 - The Further Chronicles of a Young Lady (and her Maid))
You are keeping up the pace
Posted on Sun, 24 Aug 2025
You are keeping up the pace really well! I like how Jade is thinking of possibilities that had not occurred to Thomas as perhaps he has the potential to be a bit frustrating, always used to being in control. However maybe he will be good for Jade...
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