Sketching


By Frances Macaulay Forde
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I sat myself down on a low stone wall,
a semi-circle that splits St Mary’s Road in two.
I'm just visiting Midleton, you understand...
But I fancied a go at drawing that house -
number 23 – the smart one covered with ivy.
Everyone who passes offers a gentle smile,
a quickly delivered non-committal comment
about the bright, …hasn’t it turned lovely?
surprisingly beautiful - if chilly-wind, day
or, ’tis drawing, is it? Grand – aye. ‘Tis grand.
The old man from 21 (yellow door) appears, out
front and exchanges quiet words with a passing
nun. Guidance or query, advice or condemnation?
I have missed you, Pádraig. Sure your face
has not been seen… and she moves on.
He takes a few ginger steps up the hill, toward
number 23, (the one I am sketching) glancing at
me measuring with my eye. He appears beside,
Sure, ye’re doing a grand job, I see… Thank you.
So you’re an artisté? No, not really, just having a go…
On holiday, are we? Sort of – here with a friend.
Where would ye be from? Perth, Western Australia.
Oh Grand! I‘ve two greyhounds – did ye know that
the best here, are from there? If I want to put him over
my dog, it be 1500 Euros and the compliment, sure t'is
You're not drawing my house... t'is a shame that...
Do you think the owners of 23 would mind my sketching?
Course not! They're away in England just now - won't even
know and besides wouldn't be concerned... so don't ye be
worried. As he wandered away, I said, G'day!
The plastic bag I am sitting on doesn’t stop the cold
and I become aware that my bum is now numb, but
the smiling lady has crossed the road in order to talk.
I don’t want to be rude in this most courteous of places
where pedestrians cross without looking, ‘cos they can.
The Yield sign, gently underlines the persona,
or my interpretation of Ireland’s people, so far.
It seems that life here, has a soft, pliant rhythm,
flowing effortlessly over the rounded green hills,
settling quietly in the misty, emotional valleys.
The traffic ambles steadfastly on its fixed way
pausing only to allow entrance to nuzzling
courtesy – ‘sure, there’s no hurry, now…’ cars.
Businesses pause, people will chat, keeping
themselves amused as they wait for service.
The Post Office queues grow longer in patience
‘Well hello there!’ bounces from one end
to the other, necks turning, as if watching tennis.
Spy the newcomer - the welcome additions to
this social gathering for stamps and pensions.
Umbrellas quietly dance in the hidden rain, falling
in secrecy – felt only now and then on a nose or hand
but wetting the road like a ghostly downpour unseen,
though presented by low smudges of gray obscuring
the sun trying to highlight the bright insistent colours.
Is it cold out? …my partner asks. (You can’t tell unless
you step out there… in the chill wind or take note
of clothing that others put on or leave off.) No, but
I’d bring the umbrella just in case… and a coat you can
always take off or not… in case it’s another soft Irish day.
Frances Macaulay Forde © 2003
PHOTO: My drawing mentioned in the poem, serves as the cover of my next book.
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Cork boi?
Midleton in Cork? Where the Jameson's from? I know it well... or perhaps I should say I was there eighteen months ago. And I could have done with an umbrella.
Turlough
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The Choctaw People
I'm a total fraud Frances. I was only in the area a couple of days on the way over to Kinsale. What I remember most of Midleton was the Kindred Spirits memorial sculpture being a very moving and emotional place, as those famine memorials always are.
Turlough
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I'm no expert, but...
I'm no expert at this but I just write all my stuff in Word documents ensuring that the formatting is constant throughout. Then, after saving them, I copy and paste onto a blank page on the ABC site. It seems to work.
Turlough
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your sketch has come to life.
your sketch has come to life. or was already alive.
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Sorry you're having problems
Sorry you're having problems Frances. I'm sorry I can't think of anything that might help. Fingers crossed that your brother knows what it could be. Like Turlough it does sound like a problem with your Word
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