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a sort of green

in autumn small, three-toed green, lizard dry stampedes down the steps' side dark green cloaking concrete with rustling possibilities or, lushly...

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322 of my comments have received 326 Great Feedback votes

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It is so strange how memories

Posted on Tue, 19 Nov 2019

It is so strange how memories from long ago can suddenly be the central subject of a dream, as if sleeping is like a fruit machine and the memories are the fruit, some stay the same, like where you are from, but others can whizz round and round...

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Posted in A Mid Night Dream

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The idea of being the moon's

Posted on Sun, 17 Nov 2019

The idea of being the moon's puppet is scary. But also the implication that when bleeding stops the strings are cut, leaving us adrift as if lost in a desert.

As always with your poems I feel enriched with gorgeous images. I love "frozen...

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Posted in Repression

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"knives of light"

Posted on Thu, 15 Nov 2018

"knives of light"

"Their torches cut through each other and bound intermittently, a single phosphorous beacon within the inky void"

"Time was a fallacy; he was stepping in and out of decades unhindered and in each one he was blind,...

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Posted in Aura (20)

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Well done capturing such a

Posted on Mon, 11 Nov 2019

Well done capturing such a tiny elusive creature :0) I liked your contrast of the carefree bird and all the effort and stress of taking its photo, but you did it! And now the reader gets a wonderful snapshot of photographer/poet and treecreeper :...

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Posted in An Obliging Treecreeper

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I like this very much, lots

Posted on Sat, 02 Nov 2019

I like this very much, lots of great descriptions like knot of lanes, but also the closed in feeling of being in a car in ther dark, trying to find your way back, but then breaking through into the present, like you have come out of a spell. It's...

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Posted in Communion

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this is lovely, I like the

Posted on Mon, 04 Nov 2019

this is lovely, I like the repeated sounds like the repeated pattern of the petals, seems so perfect and fresh

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Posted in November Bloom

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Great poem for All Souls

Posted on Sun, 03 Nov 2019

Great poem for All Souls

Particularly liked this :

"laughed out our aliveness in hungry gasps"

and

"We haunted their dusks in the hush 

behind its iron gates under the beeaches"

 

 

 

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Posted in Graveyards

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I love your walking poems,

Posted on Sat, 02 Nov 2019

I love your walking poems, like Insert feel the tourist board should take you on, you certainly make me long to go to the borders!

This poem made me think of the worry of flooding, the relief of seeing the extra water nearly away to sea. I...

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Posted in Travelling down the Wye Valley 28/10/19

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so many beautiful lines about

Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019

so many beautiful lines about strength of spirit, you are brilliant at making words ten times more powerful by being together

"liquid past"

"pierce of clarity"

"craved truths,"

 

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Posted in Ecstasy

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Luigi, I am very glad I read

Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019

Luigi, I am very glad I read your poem! I particularly like the sense of enjoyment you share, as in your first 3 lines. The exuberant exclamation mark :0) And I loved these lines too

"winged nomads,
unrestrained free spirits
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Posted in Geese

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