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It had cheered us up, before. We called it The Secret Beach because always empty, small, down old stairs from the road. That day, we were both scared...
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This is so beautiful, Jenny!
Posted on Fri, 28 Feb 2025
This is so beautiful, Jenny! I can watch them for ages, but could never have thought up this amazing poem, you have really caught their grace and insouciant fragility, as well as their environment. Brilliant
You show in your poem how beautiful twilight can be. In the woods sometimes there is a pink glow then, magical like a time to pass between worlds, like you do here, going through the worlds of music and wonderful writing
it makes me sad and scared for us, that children grow up now never hearing birds or wind in trees, only the hostile man-made sounds from which it is um natural to seek escape. How much human interaction must be lost, too. Your poem goes so well...
This made me think of all those people who come after great leaders, the people who make compulsory stuff the leader never said. For example the role of women, or if women even have souls. How the original wisdom can be so twisted tight that it...
That was uncomfortable to read - very glad the teacher came out. But I would think the scar of being watched through the window, alone, must last forever.
Thank goodness for that whisper! Mr Portleven must have been terrified the few seconds till you ducked. What a sadist! and for you, knowing that he was mad enough to do that, to have to show respect to someone who could have killed you with such...
This is so beautiful, Jenny!
Posted on Fri, 28 Feb 2025
This is so beautiful, Jenny! I can watch them for ages, but could never have thought up this amazing poem, you have really caught their grace and insouciant fragility, as well as their environment. Brilliant
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You show in your poem how
Posted on Tue, 25 Feb 2025
You show in your poem how beautiful twilight can be. In the woods sometimes there is a pink glow then, magical like a time to pass between worlds, like you do here, going through the worlds of music and wonderful writing
Read full commentPosted in In Twilight Years
it makes me sad and scared
Posted on Tue, 25 Feb 2025
it makes me sad and scared for us, that children grow up now never hearing birds or wind in trees, only the hostile man-made sounds from which it is um natural to seek escape. How much human interaction must be lost, too. Your poem goes so well...
Read full commentPosted in Awake??
You make such good points
Posted on Tue, 25 Feb 2025
You make such good points here, Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Awake??
Loved "Taint the brush in
Posted on Tue, 25 Feb 2025
Loved "Taint the brush in mystery", you conjure up riches and magic beautifully all through
Read full commentPosted in Deep in the Land of REM
This made me think of all
Posted on Tue, 25 Feb 2025
This made me think of all those people who come after great leaders, the people who make compulsory stuff the leader never said. For example the role of women, or if women even have souls. How the original wisdom can be so twisted tight that it...
Read full commentPosted in The Devil Walked Out
Brilliant IP response!
Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2025
Brilliant IP response!
Read full commentPosted in Like dolphins can swim
That was uncomfortable to
Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2025
That was uncomfortable to read - very glad the teacher came out. But I would think the scar of being watched through the window, alone, must last forever.
Read full commentPosted in Nicola's Privilege
This is Story of the Week,
Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2025
This is Story of the Week, Congratulations!
Read full commentPosted in The Sogginess of the Long-Distance Runner
Thank goodness for that
Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2025
Thank goodness for that whisper! Mr Portleven must have been terrified the few seconds till you ducked. What a sadist! and for you, knowing that he was mad enough to do that, to have to show respect to someone who could have killed you with such...
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