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This needs a bit of effort,
Posted on Fri, 24 Aug 2018
This needs a bit of effort, like opening a geode, then more and more bits start to sparkle
"snakes that lie in wait"
"To chase raw deliverance and
Shun the safety of the paved way"
"Both cowardly and brave
To...
Read full commentPosted in The Dirt Road
This is one of your
Posted on Sat, 25 Aug 2018
This is one of your alliteration masterpieces! Using the sounds and rhythm as a way to say the same thing as the words' meaning, it's so clever! I think this is one of my favourites of yours so far :0)
Read full commentPosted in Sharing
Enjoyed this. Lots of great
Posted on Wed, 15 Aug 2018
Enjoyed this. Lots of great descriptions, particularly liked falling on the sofa in a dingy heap, and how his wet shoes sounded like squishing bugs.
Where you first mention students, do you need "the"?
Read full commentPosted in The Last Case of Dr. Jonah Wexley Abbott (Pt. 1)
you have great skill making
Posted on Wed, 15 Aug 2018
you have great skill making lots of facts easy and enjoyable to read. I had no idea Norway had a potato famine.
I liked the way you mixed a wider history in with your family's history, too. And that you have been able to write something...
Read full commentPosted in The Shipping Line Clock
Great rhythm you have cought
Posted on Tue, 14 Aug 2018
Great rhythm you have cought the music of the storm and made it into words
Read full commentPosted in Storm
lots of good lines, what a
Posted on Sat, 11 Aug 2018
the first bit - what a way to describe how someone sounds!
also very much liked :
"Tonight grows older
than I can handle"
Read full commentPosted in I AM HOMELESS
gosh, the stress!
Posted on Mon, 23 Jul 2018
gosh, the stress!
Read full commentPosted in Saturday Part One.
Happy Birthday for September
Posted on Thu, 19 Jul 2018
Happy Birthday for September :0)
Read full commentPosted in DISCOVERY
Within 15 minutes of the Head
Posted on Thu, 19 Jul 2018
Within 15 minutes of the Head talking she on the verge of a full house.
should that be he's ? Marking a teacher :0)
I liked the Cheese Club nods. And the school without running water sounds like something Dickens...
Read full commentPosted in I'm Not Disappointed, I'm Just Angry Chapter 4
this is beautiful all through
Posted on Thu, 19 Jul 2018
this is beautiful all through, no favourite bits, it's perfect
Read full commentPosted in DISCOVERY
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