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First Walk Of April

Step on a moon stone to cross the stream - Van Gogh’s Starry Night - willow flowers pollen halo’d in swirling water.dark. Sun-coin's cloud-pursed. In...
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herring gull gallantry

If you wait till half past six there's cheap bread at the Co op or donuts for 16p. So now, after chores are done I put on my coat (it's still cold...

not just a citrus

Sunny smelling mangoes and carrots for a snowman's nose rough and griity builders' sand or some ducks from knees to toes. Pumpkins carved on...
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between

hills are mirrors reflecting dreams bullet hole sun through sky window air comes in shards blown out, cutting rainbow bridges instants of sea...
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gorse

wild yellow, bold, bee-full, gladsome glory yellow glowing gifts grow, spirit lifting sweet, small yellow flames, lip-soft, scented, bright tip dull...

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447 of my comments have received 454 Great Feedback votes

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I loved this bit too.

Posted on Thu, 20 Aug 2020

I loved this bit too.

Don't know how bothered you are about horsey stuff? Do you think they should water Buck before swimming in the hot spring? And last bit, he's been galloping away from a bear and all he gets is hobbled?

Even...

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I love the idea of the men

Posted on Tue, 18 Aug 2020

I love the idea of the men singing in secret. And that, left to itself, with no PE lessons the field is full of birds, who also sing. As if singing is mens' natural state

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Oh, this is AWEFUL!!! Because

Posted on Thu, 06 Aug 2020

Oh, this is AWEFUL!!! Because you have made Emmett and Abi so real, it's horrible to think of them like this, Abigail having to watch stuff. This bit at the end is AMAZING!!!

'I cain't take bein' this scared,' he said. 'I cain't take it...

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Please could you explain the

Posted on Mon, 17 Aug 2020

Please could you explain the significance of listening to white noise between questions? How does Elizondo know about him having Rueda's phone?

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Posted in "Señor Bean" [Mr Martínez: Eleven]

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You ARE   a great poet

Posted on Mon, 17 Aug 2020

 You ARE   a great poet, because you love words and it shows

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Posted in Thinking Out Loud

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The feeling of togetherness

Posted on Sun, 16 Aug 2020

The feeling of togetherness is wonderful in your poem, very interesting to compare with the sort of poem people write at the beginning of a relationship.

I love the first stanza!  "Perseverance hand in hand" is brilliant :0) The image...

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My son asked me what the

Posted on Wed, 12 Aug 2020

My son asked me what the difference was between a vagabond and a nomad? I guess Martinez must look like a vagabond for the cafe owner to be like this. An ominous episode! I don't mind nothing big is happening? They come in small chunks, each one...

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Posted in "The Only Honest Answer" Mr Martínez Nine

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"weeping days of crushed rose

Posted on Thu, 06 Aug 2020

"weeping days of crushed rose petals" beautiful!

 

I hope you are feeling a bit better? Have just read your other poem, and understand better after reading this. No wonder Summer is difficult for you! And now all these...

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Posted in From A Window

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Hi Jenny. Hug from me too :0)

Posted on Fri, 07 Aug 2020

Hi Jenny. Hug from me too :0) Missing my Dad just now. Even when I knew there was nothing he could do about something, just his caring made it seem not so bad. But I am glad he is spared what's happening these days.

There is so much of...

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Posted in Needing Hugs

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I liked the message in your

Posted on Mon, 03 Aug 2020

I liked the message in your poem very much. It is a deep meaning :0) More deep than any description of sea monsters could be! Has made me happy

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Posted in Sea Monsters

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