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My stories have been read 62536 times and 102 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Gold cherry

calm before

trunk tethered galaxies of leaves wild weaves, wind owned. Waist high, light grained grasses spray. Green-good air an open mouth, bird-fled, waits...
Cherry

a sort of green

in autumn small, three-toed green, lizard dry stampedes down the steps' side dark green cloaking concrete with rustling possibilities or, lushly...

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272 of my comments have received 277 Great Feedback votes

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"a version of me who is

Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019

"a version of me who is anonymous 

to myself" I really liked that, feeling of being clean, or maybe unscarred?

"persistent nag of death;"reminder to carve out some meaning"  Yet everything we think and write falls like leaves to the...

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Posted in Morning

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These are great Rhiannon :0)

Posted on Mon, 19 Aug 2019

These are great Rhiannon :0) Once when I was helping out on a school trip there was a little girl getting frightened, so we held hands and I asked her what we should talk about? She said her house, then told me all about her bedroom, and soon she...

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Posted in KidsSpeak

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"flickering beacons of

Posted on Fri, 16 Aug 2019

"flickering beacons of luminescence"

that brings out the loneliness

eek a wasp has just landed on the screen!

I would not have guessed it was about insomnia. Though I share completey the feeling of vulnerability, don't feel I...

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Posted in Jellyfish

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NO! If you think of your poem

Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019

NO! If you think of your poem like a lump of rock - I can pick it up and see some quartz sparkling but someone else picks it up from a slightly different angle  and sees some copper veins, and another person maybe sees a face in the bumps and...

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Posted in Cathedrals

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"quiet mines the years" I

Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019

"quiet mines the years" I thought at first this was about a cliff but now think it is a relationship? Makes me think of two people in armchairs on opposite sides of a room, not speaking, one looking at the profile of the other in the light, and...

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Posted in Cathedrals

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sunshine, showers short, and

Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019

sunshine, showers short, and rainbows,
cuckoo calls and swooping swallows.

fresh and shining shade,
glowing green of woods and glade

How precious a home,
a haven that’s warm

of mosses, saturated, soft;...

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Posted in Through the year month by month

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I love the description

Posted on Wed, 14 Aug 2019

I love the description "withers and fills" . Scrolling back up top to the top of the poem, was surprised how short it is as it is so full of images

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Posted in prairie river flowing

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"soul sweeping"

Posted on Thu, 15 Aug 2019

"soul sweeping"

"darkness risen as smoke"

"gripped and twined and kept by roots"

"leaching your black industry/into channels of sand and clay"

so many brilliant lines! Please put this on soundcloud!

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Posted in Crematorium

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wow! what a brilliant

Posted on Wed, 14 Aug 2019

wow! what a brilliant wonderful amazing reader you are! I could listen to you reading all day :0) I'm really glad you posted this one! Please do a Craven Danger one with lots of dialogue?

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Posted in Lincoln's Crumpled Paper IP

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The weight on your shoulder,

Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019

The weight on your shoulder, that is the most precious feeling, isnt it? I didn't feel I was a mother till I felt that, like somehow I was balanced. And the sense of unbalance you brought to the story was so strong, like the narrator couldn't be...

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Posted in Katy, A Ghost Story (IP)

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