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I have 179 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 601201 times and 283 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1932 of my 5,899 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1990 votes

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time travelling

at woods' edge shadow-silt nestles lumps of amber air floating ballrooms where midges dance brief lives away since before words on one side sun warm...
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first day in senior school

Rain heavy air, clear, fresh colours drenched. I walk through clinging grasses like hands welcoming. Summer condensing on twig ends in rowan berries...
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calm before

trunk tethered galaxies of leaves wild weaves, wind owned. Waist high, light grained grasses spray. Green-good air an open mouth, bird-fled, waits...
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a sort of green

in autumn small, three-toed green, lizard dry stampedes down the steps' side dark green cloaking concrete with rustling possibilities or, lushly...

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1932 of my comments have received 1990 Great Feedback votes

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That bit with the band

Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024

That bit with the band members was so uncomfortable to read, like rubbing against the grain on splintery wood. I hope Spencer doesn't change, become like them, as they are the first "men" he has interacted with. Does he get to choose who he...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 30

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Your employer should really

Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024

Your employer should really take care of YOU more, that sounds horrible and stressful. As you say, one would think, with the terrible lack of experienced essential workers like you, that they would bend over backwards to keep you. I bet those...

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Posted in ‘D Day’ : Leap Into The Unknown! (Community Care!? Actually) by Alfred N. Muggins (current affairs observer, and undercover reporter!)

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That was great, how you start

Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024

That was great, how you start with the red ring wellies give bare legs! Argh! I had forgotten those, but they were such a big consideration in Summer, weren't they? The Little Mermaid not being able to walk on her new feet would have understood....

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Posted in Tang Hall Beck

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Loved this. Eric's PTSD, how

Posted on Fri, 19 Jul 2024

Loved this. Eric's PTSD, how he "never rang the bell to stop the bus outside Iceland". Your poem, how the theme interweaves past and present, country and shop, then comes together at the end with fishfingers coming from both kinds of Iceland,...

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Posted in Eric’s War

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It has been a long time since

Posted on Fri, 19 Jul 2024

It has been a long time since I went anywhere like this, but your fabulous description took me back instantly :

Dogs under tables,

crumbs drizzling,

sought by tongues.

I hear the clatter of

crockery; voices...

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Posted in Rain at the Forest Cafe

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Oh Luigi, I hope this doesn't

Posted on Thu, 18 Jul 2024

Oh Luigi, I hope this doesn't happen often! I cook for just me quite a bit as I am the only vegan in our house. If you have an onion, a carrot, tinned tomatoes and baked beans, you might rinse out the sugary sauce the beans come in, and cut up...

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Posted in Cooking for One

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Hullo Paul :0)

Posted on Sat, 22 Jun 2024

Hullo Paul :0) Have huge worries too, not just about genuine green land being built on, but also that the necessary affordable homes are no more likely to be built now than before, because they do not provide the same level of profit?
It is...

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Posted in "For, being green, there is great hope" (quote from Shakespeare's HENRY VI PART 2, ACT 3 SCENE 1)

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Thankyou for sharing this

Posted on Wed, 10 Jul 2024

Thankyou for sharing this moment, Maxine :0) That was an interesting journey you had today, the stillness to appreciate beautiful designs of spider webs and the next, shock of one-wheeled motorbike racing off!!!

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Posted in The Creator.

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Rhiannon, that sounds

Posted on Thu, 11 Jul 2024

Rhiannon, that sounds horrible! Remember you writing about tooth trouble in Covid, too. Though your poem is fun to read and makes light of what must have been a very grim experience, really glad you are pain free now!

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Posted in Extract!

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I hope you had a lovely

Posted on Thu, 11 Jul 2024

I hope you had a lovely Birthday Jenny, and that this year for you is much, much, much better than last year! I loved the rich images and positivity in this poem, it is GREAT to read this new wonderful writing from you!

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Posted in Holding Onto My Desires And Dreams

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