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Jenny, you MUST know grace,
Posted on Sun, 27 Jul 2025
Jenny, you MUST know grace, to write how you do! I like very much
"weaving lyrics...beating natures / pulse" which made me think of the flutter of wings being like a pulse and the flight-paths of birds being invisible veins in the heart of...
That's a lovely story :0) Apart from the Earthquake. Mariyka is a true heroine with such gumption! I imagine her happily dancing the nights away with her happy and hunky husband. Hopefully, if she cared so little for conventions that she sat on...
You taught me about the story, too. Those Greek gods were so tetchy!!! Hollyhocks were one of the first things I managed to grow - one grew as high as Mum's bedroom window :0) Now I like the single ones best though as bees can get inside
the desolation of his job taking up so much of his life, trying to support his perfect wife and child, so perfect they seem almost unreal/unrelated to him, and his past, memories always corroding. This is so sad to read
Loved this :0) What a perfect Happy Ending! Maybe their love endured BECAUSE the author could not understand any Greenland language. Guessing the igloo builder spoke and read very good English so they could read such wonderful funny stories
Maybe Billy will be able to help with Danielle's nightmare? I sympathise with her Mum, it is worrying when children have bad dreams, we cannot go there to help. Tanya and Billy's Mum united in concern/suspicion about devices and the harm they...
I love this : "nobody warned us that the cheap glory of those days would climb to a peak and then simply ebb away and die, fading forever into forgotten history", all the lives Earth has had, each an uncurling wave of the sea. "cheap glory" that...
Jenny, you MUST know grace,
Posted on Sun, 27 Jul 2025
Jenny, you MUST know grace, to write how you do! I like very much
"weaving lyrics...beating natures / pulse" which made me think of the flutter of wings being like a pulse and the flight-paths of birds being invisible veins in the heart of...
Read full commentPosted in A Poet's Greek Mythology
That's a lovely story :0)
Posted on Mon, 28 Jul 2025
That's a lovely story :0) Apart from the Earthquake. Mariyka is a true heroine with such gumption! I imagine her happily dancing the nights away with her happy and hunky husband. Hopefully, if she cared so little for conventions that she sat on...
Read full commentPosted in There’s a Guy Works Down the Chip Shop Swears He’s Engels
I would be the same as Rachel
Posted on Sat, 26 Jul 2025
I would be the same as Rachel, so really enjoyed your story
should this be stroking, in the last few lines? "Striking the bird's head, the broken wing."
Read full commentPosted in The face is what forbids us to kill
I hope your bees come back.
Posted on Thu, 24 Jul 2025
I hope your bees come back. And you are having cooler weather now, it is starting to feel like almost Autumn, here
Read full commentPosted in Hollyhock Tears Or Whispers Of Gods.
You taught me about the story
Posted on Thu, 24 Jul 2025
You taught me about the story, too. Those Greek gods were so tetchy!!! Hollyhocks were one of the first things I managed to grow - one grew as high as Mum's bedroom window :0) Now I like the single ones best though as bees can get inside
Read full commentPosted in Hollyhock Tears Or Whispers Of Gods.
the desolation of his job
Posted on Thu, 24 Jul 2025
the desolation of his job taking up so much of his life, trying to support his perfect wife and child, so perfect they seem almost unreal/unrelated to him, and his past, memories always corroding. This is so sad to read
Read full commentPosted in The Vale - Part 3
Loved this :0) What a perfect
Posted on Thu, 24 Jul 2025
Loved this :0) What a perfect Happy Ending! Maybe their love endured BECAUSE the author could not understand any Greenland language. Guessing the igloo builder spoke and read very good English so they could read such wonderful funny stories
Read full commentPosted in You are surprised as a published writer…
I like the bad luck element
Posted on Tue, 22 Jul 2025
I like the bad luck element very much, and looking forward to the next part
Read full commentPosted in "Art of Trouble" 2
Maybe Billy will be able to
Posted on Wed, 23 Jul 2025
Maybe Billy will be able to help with Danielle's nightmare? I sympathise with her Mum, it is worrying when children have bad dreams, we cannot go there to help. Tanya and Billy's Mum united in concern/suspicion about devices and the harm they...
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (4)
I love this : "nobody warned
Posted on Wed, 23 Jul 2025
I love this : "nobody warned us that the cheap glory of those days would climb to a peak and then simply ebb away and die, fading forever into forgotten history", all the lives Earth has had, each an uncurling wave of the sea. "cheap glory" that...
Read full commentPosted in The Vale - Part 1 (d)
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