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I have 177 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 411344 times and 278 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1539 of my 5,160 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1580 votes

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starlings

a dashing sky scatter of black stars swirl, mass spread, film fine specks lead, loop, pass swoop round; rain-sound wings mimic the world's mind (...
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appeal

on amber sheen of polished wood apricots spill, cheek soft and sweet and from a terracotta pot geranium flowers lift hearts when days sink down in...
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recipe

Small birds flicker thick, make bushes quiver shimmering silence with bright chirruping. Blackberries, swollen seconds full of sun. (Try one, to...
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brambles

blackberries, swollen seconds full of sun I pick, to burst sweet on my tongue, now and now. In overgrown long disused school ground brambles slow arc...
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wings, late summer

Blue mussel shell halves sea and sky, within shining nacre clouds water colours burst bloom, rainbows prism- prison free. Eight swifts rejoicing in...

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1539 of my comments have received 1580 Great Feedback votes

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Bushels is a brilliant amount

Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2023

Bushels is a brilliant amount word, like the sound of rushing dry leaves, which might have even come from a bush! This is a lovely fresh air poem, "toes in the sand" says so much

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Posted in Summer's Last Weep

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Wow! You have brilliantly

Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2023

Wow! You have brilliantly evoked the atmospheric brutality of thunder and lightning!

"such deluge of fury rages in the here and now"
"sheet lightning searches darkness"

wonderful!

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Posted in Tempestuous Stirrings

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wonderful :0) You have the

Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2023

wonderful :0) You have the whole ebb and flow and ozone and brightness

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Posted in Around The Havens

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that definition of banquette

Posted on Fri, 08 Sep 2023

that definition of banquette is wonderfully daft :0) Would love to have seen Archibald's face

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Posted in Sailing (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 34)

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I sympathise with you SO

Posted on Mon, 18 Sep 2023

I sympathise with you SO MUCH about slugs! I hope all grows well next year :0)

I was working at Woolworths when that closed. I don't know how the same thing could happen again with Wilcos, there are fewer and fewer useful shops

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Posted in Red and Green.

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Really enjoyed this story! I

Posted on Wed, 13 Sep 2023

Really enjoyed this story! I liked very much the description of people like bees dancing. And how you chose the Empire State building, which made me think of where Jesus was meant to meet the Devil, too. And how you went smoothly from here to...

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Posted in Devil's Advocate

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what a visual poem! I am

Posted on Sat, 09 Sep 2023

what a visual poem! I am guessing you are starting to feel Autumnal with all the richness!

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Posted in Expanding The Mind

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It rained here today, too,

Posted on Sat, 09 Sep 2023

It rained here today, too, such a relief! I love all these weather poems you are doing :0)

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Posted in Heatwave

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we don't watch telly

Posted on Fri, 08 Sep 2023

we don't watch telly but ITV2's schedule might change that

7.00 - 8.00 Goats, Goats, Goats – Steve discovers that his pet goat, Algeron, is actually a hamster

8.00 - 9.00 When Ducks Attack

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Posted in Today’s TV

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wonderful lines in this poem,

Posted on Fri, 08 Sep 2023

wonderful lines in this poem, I liked very much

half heartedly eaten by unspecified moths

and

Trilbies delicate as fossilised dodo eggs

wait for heads no longer there,

destined to be undoffed for ever more.

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Posted in Clothes for Friendless Men

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