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I am sorry it didn't work out
Posted on Wed, 02 Aug 2023
I am sorry it didn't work out this year. My flowerbed was not so good, either. As Rhiannon says, weather is maybe the cause, though wildflowers do not like to be told what to do I have found :0) So, when they DO flower it is even more special!...
Agree with Jenny, very exciting! Poor Emily though! Really creepy thinking someone you had gone to for help was watching your home on their computer! And the conversation between Thies and Stacy and Brent is great too
I did feel for you, listening to a news program about America the other day. Our lot are pretty grim, too, falling over themselves to say how they want to put off transitioning to renewables, in between updates of forest fires. A heartfelt poem,...
"and flower buds – to burst,
shedding pollen
which fertilizes so that seeds and fruit
can be dispersed"
great rhythm and rhyme, and your science background adding another ingredient :0) I like how you go through the...
I liked your description of gallantry, drinking Maria's Rakia so Priyatelkata didn't have to :0) And the description of the lift very much too. I had only heard about teflon being a result of space travel technology so justifying the huge amount...
I liked how Sandra is concerned that Blueberry has water, even though she hates and fears the dog, showing she is not an uncaring person. And loved how Thomas's first reaction was concern for Blueberry, not his Mum :0) Which reinforced you saying...
I am sorry it didn't work out
Posted on Wed, 02 Aug 2023
I am sorry it didn't work out this year. My flowerbed was not so good, either. As Rhiannon says, weather is maybe the cause, though wildflowers do not like to be told what to do I have found :0) So, when they DO flower it is even more special!...
Read full commentPosted in Under Late Spring Sky
Agree with Jenny, very
Posted on Sun, 30 Jul 2023
Agree with Jenny, very exciting! Poor Emily though! Really creepy thinking someone you had gone to for help was watching your home on their computer! And the conversation between Thies and Stacy and Brent is great too
Read full commentPosted in "The Coffee House Spy" 11
I did feel for you, listening
Posted on Sat, 29 Jul 2023
I did feel for you, listening to a news program about America the other day. Our lot are pretty grim, too, falling over themselves to say how they want to put off transitioning to renewables, in between updates of forest fires. A heartfelt poem,...
Read full commentPosted in "Murky Waters"
"and flower buds – to burst,
Posted on Fri, 28 Jul 2023
"and flower buds – to burst,
Read full commentshedding pollen
which fertilizes so that seeds and fruit
can be dispersed"
great rhythm and rhyme, and your science background adding another ingredient :0) I like how you go through the...
Posted in chlorophyll
Jenny's lyrical poem about a
Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023
Jenny's lyrical poem about a writer's inspiration is Pick of the Day! Please do share and retweet if you can
Read full commentPosted in When All I Need Is Artistry
Jenny's lyrical poem about a
Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023
Jenny's lyrical poem about a writer's inspiration is Pick of the Day! Please do share and retweet if you can
Read full commentPosted in When All I Need Is Artistry
Wonderful, inspirational poem
Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023
Wonderful, inspirational poem! Like many others, I loved "shower of words/like cloudburst descends"
Read full commentPosted in When All I Need Is Artistry
Of course! Guessing sunny
Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023
Of course! Guessing sunny side up?
Read full commentPosted in Rakia Maria – Part Two of Two
I liked your description of
Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023
I liked your description of gallantry, drinking Maria's Rakia so Priyatelkata didn't have to :0) And the description of the lift very much too. I had only heard about teflon being a result of space travel technology so justifying the huge amount...
Read full commentPosted in Rakia Maria – Part Two of Two
I liked how Sandra is
Posted on Tue, 25 Jul 2023
I liked how Sandra is concerned that Blueberry has water, even though she hates and fears the dog, showing she is not an uncaring person. And loved how Thomas's first reaction was concern for Blueberry, not his Mum :0) Which reinforced you saying...
Read full commentPosted in Blueberry - Part Three
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