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from a house roof chimneys like trumpet valve keys release a soaring solo seagull's heartbeat into untouched silence beside this pavement wind-lipped...
Rain pulses on a tarmac eel grey muscles sleeking down to town. Dock leaves’ green fanfares burst from dark mud and trees seethe with finches’ cheeps...
That is so sad. But adds to my admiration for your Dad. Was this when record players were becoming popular? Maybe people did not feel it was so bad if they could have music in another way? Only less about gatherings and sharing
The Hall is exactly like the one at my son's school was here :0) Though no ropes from the ceiling, or stage. I got my son to read all your lessons so far and he enjoyed them very much too. Though Scottish Dancing was NOT the same for him at all,...
Am enjoying this very much, I love historical novels but sometimes they can be a bit dry, unlike your story, which feels like you are there! Your description of Emily's dressing room is wonderful. And Emily's mother taking her to see the...
You have written of this before? More details here, a great description of a way of life gone now. Maybe the iron chains added to the flavour :0) As always I am boggled by your crystal clear memory, and how you bring the reader with you from the...
The suitcase in your photo is gorgeous! I love the idea of you keeping suitcases belonging to your Mum and Dad, as if they are travelling in time. It would be lovely if, time travellers, the suitcases might in some way transmit back the delight...
Very few people could come up with the complete lore for a character they have created, from a small sound in the night :0) What an INCREDIBLE imagination you have! I will never think of foil wrapping paper the same way
I am so impressed at how you
Posted on Sun, 25 May 2025
I am so impressed at how you are making all your research come alive!
ps
Uncle Hugo had arrived home late. His virtuous demure hadn't changed
should this be virtuous demeanour?
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Six
a romance :0)
Posted on Mon, 26 May 2025
a romance :0)
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Seven
That is so sad. But adds to
Posted on Fri, 23 May 2025
That is so sad. But adds to my admiration for your Dad. Was this when record players were becoming popular? Maybe people did not feel it was so bad if they could have music in another way? Only less about gatherings and sharing
Read full commentPosted in 10 Life Lessons. Number 8.
The Hall is exactly like the
Posted on Wed, 21 May 2025
The Hall is exactly like the one at my son's school was here :0) Though no ropes from the ceiling, or stage. I got my son to read all your lessons so far and he enjoyed them very much too. Though Scottish Dancing was NOT the same for him at all,...
Read full commentPosted in 10 Life Lessons. Number 6.
Every sense covered! Great
Posted on Wed, 21 May 2025
Every sense covered! Great descriptions, and I learned a little too, Thank you
Read full commentPosted in African Memories
Am enjoying this very much, I
Posted on Tue, 20 May 2025
Am enjoying this very much, I love historical novels but sometimes they can be a bit dry, unlike your story, which feels like you are there! Your description of Emily's dressing room is wonderful. And Emily's mother taking her to see the...
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part One
what an intriguing start!!! I
Posted on Mon, 19 May 2025
what an intriguing start!!! I am looking forward to the next part so much :0)
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs
You have written of this
Posted on Sat, 17 May 2025
You have written of this before? More details here, a great description of a way of life gone now. Maybe the iron chains added to the flavour :0) As always I am boggled by your crystal clear memory, and how you bring the reader with you from the...
Read full commentPosted in The Rest of My Life: First Day...
The suitcase in your photo is
Posted on Fri, 16 May 2025
The suitcase in your photo is gorgeous! I love the idea of you keeping suitcases belonging to your Mum and Dad, as if they are travelling in time. It would be lovely if, time travellers, the suitcases might in some way transmit back the delight...
Read full commentPosted in Without Wheels
Very few people could come up
Posted on Fri, 16 May 2025
Very few people could come up with the complete lore for a character they have created, from a small sound in the night :0) What an INCREDIBLE imagination you have! I will never think of foil wrapping paper the same way
Read full commentPosted in The Crinkler
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