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I have 180 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
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Cherry

part 6

Mary went 5 more steps, then turned back. The car lights had gone! She gasped, and Karen’ s voice came at once “Mary! What’s taking you so long? If...
Cherry

part 5

The car bump ing as Karen drove off the ferry woke Mary from a bad dream - a huge spiderweb dangling with bundles like sad grey fruit, soft and...
Cherry

part 4

But Mary had no room for words. Her fear was big as a mountain. Tears spilled and a huge sob, like a tidal wave came up from her chest. The seagull...
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Cherry

part 3 (redrafted)

Mary's heart was going "Boom, boom, boom" shaking her ribs. It was the only sound she could hear. Then Jake was there, shouting, "Can I have icecream...
Cherry

part 2

Mary couldn't help laughing too, the first proper laugh since that Tuesday after school when she had not been allowed to go with Mum, then everyone...
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2015 of my comments have received 2077 Great Feedback votes

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BEAUTIFUL smile! And I am

Posted on Mon, 17 Feb 2025

BEAUTIFUL smile! And I am glad that there was no comb to hand :0) What a turbulent lot of learning, though! How wonderful to have kept a friend all through your life. And to remember and recognise, now, your Father's relief that you had made a...

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Posted in Five schools

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Gorgeous! I love all your

Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2025

Gorgeous! I love all your wild, transient framings of the solidness of cows

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Posted in Cows - lost, refound, tinkered with.

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This wonderful IP response

Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2025

This wonderful IP response from Caldwell is Pick of the Day! Please do share if you can

the photo is from here :
https://commons....

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Posted in Head Boy

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very sad to hear there are

Posted on Thu, 13 Feb 2025

very sad to hear there are only a few chapters left!!!!!

have just thought - do Cybermates have the free will to choose their sexuality? Could Spencer decide if he is gay?

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Posted in Parcel for you - Part 52

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I like very much how your

Posted on Sat, 15 Feb 2025

I like very much how your poem explains your gorgeous photo! This time of year somehow (maybe wishful thinking) even dreary days seem luminous and there is that excitement from all the buds waking up, but you are so right, the grey skies seem...

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Posted in February Variety

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BRILLIANT! Cedric is a

Posted on Thu, 13 Feb 2025

BRILLIANT! Cedric is a FABULOUS creation :0) And I love how you introduce him. And how he and Spencer must have been drawn by the electricity to Curry's :0) When I was young and could still hear it, I HATED that high whine that came from...

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Posted in Parcel for you - Part 52

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Glad everyone is going to be

Posted on Fri, 14 Feb 2025

Glad everyone is going to be ok. Very lucky this is all happening in a country with free health care! What a lot of trauma Josiah has been through. Your conversations between the policemen are fabulous

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Posted in Working My Way Back to You (Dead Reckoning series - Part 48)

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Wow! I realised, reading

Posted on Fri, 07 Feb 2025

Wow! I realised, reading today's part, that I must have missed one, and WHAT a part to have missed! This was really exciting, but very clear all through, wonderfully done! i loved the bit where Frank waves cheerily, thinking he and his mate can...

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Posted in Mother and Child Reunion (Dead Reckoning series - Part 47)

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This made me think of when we

Posted on Wed, 12 Feb 2025

This made me think of when we get someone else's delivery by mistake, and a courier comes to take it away :0) Mix up in the weather department. You caught the sudden magic really well. All your wildlife must have been very glad to see the ground...

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Posted in Snow

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I love the movement this!

Posted on Wed, 12 Feb 2025

I love the movement this!

"Where waves and whales and sailing ships

Collide and slide in tangled whirls

With herring gulls, white horses' manes

‘til the sea I saw is seen no more"

all your sounds and the rhythm...

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Posted in Fathoms Above

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