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part 3 (redrafted)
Mary's heart was going "Boom, boom, boom" shaking her ribs. It was the only sound she could hear. Then Jake was there, shouting, "Can I have icecream...
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part 2
Mary couldn't help laughing too, the first proper laugh since that Tuesday after school when she had not been allowed to go with Mum, then everyone...
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part 1
She hunched down into the car seat so her coat went up on each side like shields. It didn't stop him from kicking her, but he couldn't see she was...
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angelica (after reading Onemorething's beautiful poem)
Reality is a trap. In this garden no sun warms. Underground, worms squirm in a rootless world as tongues before words. But then, there, at the back,...
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pool, october
light-leap ripples make laughter lines tickle snake swooping willow bough's moss green crossing bright, gold leaf lined pool below, where rain, held...
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I liked particularly the
Posted on Tue, 21 Nov 2023
I liked particularly the narrator's feelings towards the truck driver. and the change in pace when you describe the crash, which comes across vividly. The graveyard as a still place, with life changing outside
Read full commentPosted in Those We Leave Behind
Really like the first two
Posted on Mon, 20 Nov 2023
That's a question I am always asking! Really like the first two lines :0) And "synapse gaps" with map. I remember being very surprised how much DNA we share with fruit flies, but the word connectome is new to me. And your illustration is very, um...
Read full commentPosted in What's going on inside?
Wonderful!
Posted on Mon, 20 Nov 2023
Wonderful!
Should :
Read full comment“We’d rather hope you’d leave it alone,” said Mr Gwydion"
be : "We rather hoped you'd ..."?
Posted in A hole in the kitchen
really enjoyed this, Thankyou
Posted on Sat, 18 Nov 2023
really enjoyed this, Thankyou
Read full commentPosted in Weary All Hill
"Dreams fade of Palestine"
Posted on Mon, 13 Nov 2023
"Dreams fade of Palestine"
Read full commentI heard on the radio someone in authority in Israel, talking about whom they would allow to govern Gaza. (I think he was one of the more moderate). He said a "pragmatic" Palestinian, which I guess means someone as...
Posted in Eastern Sky
"drip-doodling" is BRILLIANT!
Posted on Thu, 16 Nov 2023
"drip-doodling" is BRILLIANT!!!!!!
Read full commentPosted in The Love of Nature
I was looking forward to the
Posted on Tue, 14 Nov 2023
I was looking forward to the Mum encounter, and it WAS brilliant :0) She is wonderful! And till Claudine said, I hadn't thought who would have screamed, but now I am wondering. Really, really enjoyed
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you....Part 8
I loved the bit about Gordon
Posted on Tue, 14 Nov 2023
I loved the bit about Gordon in Grandpa's boot :0)
Read full commentPosted in 13/11/23
I didn't mean to clog up
Posted on Sun, 12 Nov 2023
I didn't mean to clog up comments for your brilliant, funny poem with stuff about us, I am sorry! He has to travel in, but it's only 3 days a week. Good guesswork :0) Glad you are all well :0)
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Thankyou for making me smile
Posted on Sun, 12 Nov 2023
Thankyou for making me smile all over again :0)
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