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I have 180 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 737768 times and 288 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2114 of my 6,208 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2179 votes

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Poem of the week

to pick up time

never done, the sea is a bed remaking itself over and over, so light never sleeps on the salt shot silk of its sheet and thoughts are beached shells...
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Gold cherry
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Hand Washing, Glasgow Central

Unfortunately, our ferry got in late because of the wind, so we missed the train we needed, to get to his appointment, but fortunately I had...
Gold cherry
Poem of the week

Getting Ready

Gone the rag sound of a bird alone dropped on naked silence between dumpsters' grinding regurgitations from horizon's bridge and fuzzy pulse of cars...
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Cherry

deer

i used to cross slow growing moss swells by tree masts, tossing, lichen rigged, see in the distance dragon wings, folded into hills. But now, words'...
Cherry

part 7

W hen she woke up, Mary did not feel tired anymore. Ever since she had had to stay at Jake’s house, it had taken ages to go to sleep. Night time was...
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2114 of my comments have received 2179 Great Feedback votes

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Oooh, sensing Polly might

Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025

Oooh, sensing Polly might have magical powers?
11 disappearances is a lot! I'd worry about that, too!
Billy's character is great, am looking forward to seeing how he handles the baddie :0)

not sure about some bits "It was fine...

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (3)

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"The course of true love

Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025

"The course of true love never did run smooth", as Shakespeare might have said of Perfidia's experiences in this latest instalment of Penny4athought's wonderful WIP, which is Pick of the Day! Please do share if you can

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Posted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 30

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You convey his fear very well

Posted on Sat, 12 Jul 2025

You convey his fear very well. You have "Will he ever forgive myself if I don't jump?" which made me wonder if you have tried skydiving? I would be much too scared

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Posted in Here I am

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Beautiful, Rhiannon. You are

Posted on Thu, 10 Jul 2025

Beautiful, Rhiannon. You are so clever to fit the original meaning into new words, and still have rhyme, I don't know how translators manage this, but you have, here, so well. I love "stirring your joy again, again"

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Posted in Daffodil

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This really does have the

Posted on Thu, 10 Jul 2025

This really does have the sense of being in a dream, everything too sudden and total. Will try to remember to face tigers. I liked very much the stripes, of light and shadow, of forgotten and unforgotten, of waking and unwaking. "primal fears and...

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Posted in I Dreamt of Tigers

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Have just heard on the news

Posted on Mon, 07 Jul 2025

A few days after you posted this, have just heard on the news about mothers, pregnant women and children queueing for supplements to help with the malnutrition caused by Netanyahu's blockade. Bombed. One of the 8 children killed is a little one...

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Posted in Fifty Shades of Death

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chilling to read, great

Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2025

chilling to read, great writing

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Posted in The Patrolman - 29

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Brilliant :0) Glad Farzanah

Posted on Wed, 09 Jul 2025

Brilliant :0) Glad Farzanah was ok, hope she is, still. If I were a high up in her country, would be working my socks off to get a bomb finished before that happened again. Hope Sofi's back is better by now, and that hasn't put her off hydrangeas...

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Posted in If I Were a Fish

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From fireflies to fig sap,

Posted on Tue, 08 Jul 2025

From fireflies to fig sap, imagining Marlene Dietrich in a bus shelter to beating Lyme's disease, Turlough's diary entry for June is a great read, which is why it is Pick of the Day! Please do share if you can

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Posted in Marlene Dietrich’s Gappy Teeth

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This part struck me most

Posted on Mon, 07 Jul 2025

This part struck me most strongly, as not talked about on the news etc
"Yes, mothers often pay the price
with holy wartime sacrifice:
in flight, miscarried embryos!
Quite slow as ethnic cleansing goes,
but...

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Posted in Fifty Shades of Death

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