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a sort of green

in autumn small, three-toed green, lizard dry stampedes down the steps' side dark green cloaking concrete with rustling possibilities or, lushly...

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485 of my comments have received 494 Great Feedback votes

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this one made me think of

Posted on Sun, 10 May 2020

this one made me think of white witches, wanting to make something good , using nature and time, to heal. I like the smoothing of water vowels too :0)

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Posted in Stone

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She is washing her paws, so,

Posted on Fri, 08 May 2020

She is washing her paws, so, I found the feeling of brittle tension you have made very strong (though seeming delicate, as does a spider web.) Also the respect mixed with revulsion. And "you are not a god, Arachne" a put down to disguise fear ?...

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Posted in Arachne

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Every time I try to write a

Posted on Fri, 08 May 2020

Every time I try to write a comment on this Tina walks on the keyboard. Perhaps it is because she is advertisng her spider catching skills :0) I will have another go. I thought this was great!

I am scared of spiders, too. But found this...

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Posted in Arachne

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I'm sorry, I didn't mean to

Posted on Wed, 06 May 2020

I'm sorry, I didn't mean to be rude. I find them scary, like hag fish. You describe their lives so well, particularly the mysterious revelation that compels them to go back to where they started

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Posted in Lampreys

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"what you understand is

Posted on Wed, 06 May 2020

"what you understand is darkness" Powerful! Those first four lines are so sad. No possibility of nature v nurture

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Posted in Lampreys

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covagants :0) Or is

Posted on Tue, 05 May 2020

covagants :0) Or is that mixing root languages?

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Posted in A Literary Squirrel

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a feeling of glory, golden,

Posted on Mon, 04 May 2020

a feeling of glory, golden, then gone. Splendour is the word

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Posted in Canal Walk in Summer

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"shoal-less silvered fish"

Posted on Sat, 02 May 2020

"shoal-less silvered fish" that's so scary/lonely, reminded me of in films when the tether breaks on a spacewalk. "silvered" makes it magic, and sad. And I love the alliteration! This line will be my mind-worm for today I think!

I...

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Posted in A Universe

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I find this too! People are

Posted on Fri, 01 May 2020

I find this too! People are more likely to smile and say something even than before, to make up for going round, or saying thankyou if I go round. And people talk in the queue outside shops, where before they would just go in. Maybe to make up...

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Posted in Friendly Separation

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This is how I imagine being

Posted on Fri, 01 May 2020

This is how I imagine being in a bobsleigh, exhilarating and liberating, with the potential for terrible injury if the person it is about finds you out. Particularly liked

"she’ll squeeze your life

Til the dreams fall out"

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Posted in Penelope is not your Friend

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