Di_Hard

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left over

By Di_Hard on Mon, 08 Jan 2018

these are the left over years life reduced, the womb dry. If I were a vegetable I would be limp but I am stiffening, from the fingers in and my...

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Sum of the storm

By Di_Hard on Sun, 07 Jan 2018

wind worm winds through rough woos trees, shatters these breathing roofs; leaves scatter. In the aftermath trunks, reaching equal signs cross blank...

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time travelling

By Di_Hard on Sun, 17 Sep 2017

at woods' edge shadow-silt nestles lumps of amber air floating ballrooms where midges dance brief lives away since before words on one side sun warm...

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first day in senior school

By Di_Hard on Fri, 18 Aug 2017

Rain heavy air, clear, fresh colours drenched. I walk through clinging grasses like hands welcoming. Summer condensing on twig ends in rowan berries...

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Posted on Thu, 02 Jun 2022

"whirling, wild winds forge sinister spouts.

Hurtling through the raging tempest,

a house flying,"

You evoke the nightmare quality that so many wish they could wake from

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You have a wonderful stirring

Posted on Thu, 02 Jun 2022

You have a wonderful stirring rhythm and create a romantic sense of adventure. Only, at the end, you call her victim and I think of her as heroine?

It's a great accompaninment to the original story!

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Agree with Insert, it really

Posted on Wed, 01 Jun 2022

Agree with Insert, it really is! I look forward to reading one every day. I was sad that you stopped posting two at a time, but this way it will last longer :0) It is SO GOOD

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Elowen is a gorgeous name :0)

Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022

Elowen is a gorgeous name :0) I guess it's the same as Eileen or Ellen, or Helen, it just sounds so much like blue sky and dew :0)

I hope those boots don't turn out to be like the Little Mermaid's feet

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Brilliant, again. You have

Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022

Brilliant, again. You have made Kettleby's character in only a few lines. The amount of detail you have is boggling! Although, do you reckon her "new" boots fitted? Would she have had what we call boots of her own before? Or moccassins made of...

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Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022

Rhiannon, I'm sorry all my replies to you keep being in the wrong order and I cannot sort it!

I agree with both you and Jane?

While I have been with my partner for 20 years we are not married. It is a struggle and we have had some...

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I'm in awe how you create

Posted on Mon, 30 May 2022

I'm in awe how you create your sense of place, everything seems so real. All ther different tasks, the people doing them. Even to think of the smell of the flag. WONDERFUL storytelling

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Your job sounds really grim!

Posted on Sun, 29 May 2022

Your job sounds really grim! I remember feeling like this, you express how at the end of a shift I couldn't wait to go to the woods with my dog and be alive again :0)

I hope things become better for you very soon

I like "softer"...

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Oh, my eyes are getting tears

Posted on Sun, 29 May 2022

Oh, my eyes are getting tears in this is so beautiful

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She has put herself in so

Posted on Fri, 27 May 2022

She has put herself in so much danger, already! You did the groping really well, the whole thing is brilliant, everything moving so fast, and so vivid!