Di_Hard
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128 of my 1,170 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 129 votes
My stories
February low tide
He comes in, rosy cheeks smooth-cool to mine as the inside of half cockles we used to collect on the beach as big as his hands, then. The shells we...
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finding peace
As I fish fur from my coffee mug the rhythm of your purr's like the chug of the ferry bringing people home or strangers, who from far places come...
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left over
these are the left over years life reduced, the womb dry. If I were a vegetable I would be limp but I am stiffening, from the fingers in and my...
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Sum of the storm
wind worm winds through rough woos trees, shatters these breathing roofs; leaves scatter. In the aftermath trunks, reaching equal signs cross blank...
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time travelling
at woods' edge shadow-silt nestles lumps of amber air floating ballrooms where midges dance brief lives away since before words on one side sun warm...
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this is beautiful all through
Posted on Thu, 19 Jul 2018
this is beautiful all through, no favourite bits, it's perfect
Read full commentPosted in DISCOVERY
This is going to be a
Posted on Sun, 15 Jul 2018
"The one thing I’ve learned ... is the consequences of things. Equal and opposite and all that. .... Everything and nothing matters all at the same time. "
This is going to be a brilliant read! I envy your pupils.
A teacher can save...
Read full commentPosted in I'm Not Disappointed, I'm Just Angry (Introduction)
That's a great, sensitive
Posted on Mon, 09 Jul 2018
That's a great, sensitive point of view. Thankyou for posting. I live here and am struggling to know how to handle this let alone write about it
Read full commentPosted in Be Careful What I Say.......
Brilliant choice. I like the
Posted on Wed, 13 Jun 2018
Brilliant choice. I like the rhymes, how they're not obvious, they sort of pull at you like light on moving water. As the poem is moving. To start with all I noticed was how beautiful the sound is. But the meaning is beautiful too when I read it...
Read full commentPosted in Mirror World
The most helpful advice I got
Posted on Wed, 20 Jun 2018
The most helpful advice I got, though I couldn't understand it at the time, is to realise you have choices. It's only so bad if you feel trapped.
The sleep thing is interesting to me. It seems accepted that insomnia is a result of...
Read full commentPosted in The Iceberg
It seemed somehow menacing
Posted on Thu, 28 Jun 2018
It seemed somehow menacing from the first sentence. I like the wonderful sound details of the familiar, "dragged it gently along the terrace" "cool little bubbles popping" "the bottle making a small guzzling sound" "wings beating out a faint...
Read full commentPosted in The End of the Evening
I like the idea of a better
Posted on Fri, 29 Jun 2018
I like the idea of a better self being like a lost toy.
I don't know if you meant it to, but I find this a hopeful poem, reminds me of cutting off the mouldy bits of plants and suddenly they look so much better and you notice there were...
Read full commentPosted in No Better Past (IP)
this is beautiful! All the sh
Posted on Mon, 25 Jun 2018
this is beautiful! All the sh and th and oo sounds, made me think of softness but then the sh sound becomes the noise of a weapon "shaft’s full shining power" and it ends not soft at all with "bombarding light"
And it was so satisfying to...
Read full commentPosted in Brightness without burning
Thankyou so much Insert. I
Posted on Sat, 23 Jun 2018
Thankyou so much Insert. I wasn't sure. Thankyou for the cherries, too
Have been thinking about crisps for ages since hearing the packets will be here in 1000 years but couldn't think how to do it till read the poetry monthly idea. It is...
Read full commentPosted in In your shoes
or Bleak House...
Posted on Thu, 14 Jun 2018
or Bleak House...
Read full commentPosted in Vamos España
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