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Within 15 minutes of the Head
Posted on Thu, 19 Jul 2018
Within 15 minutes of the Head talking she on the verge of a full house.
should that be he's ? Marking a teacher :0)
I liked the Cheese Club nods. And the school without running water sounds like something Dickens...Read full comment
This is going to be a
Posted on Sun, 15 Jul 2018
"The one thing I’ve learned ... is the consequences of things. Equal and opposite and all that. .... Everything and nothing matters all at the same time. "
This is going to be a brilliant read! I envy your pupils.
A teacher can save...Read full comment
Brilliant choice. I like the
Posted on Wed, 13 Jun 2018
Brilliant choice. I like the rhymes, how they're not obvious, they sort of pull at you like light on moving water. As the poem is moving. To start with all I noticed was how beautiful the sound is. But the meaning is beautiful too when I read it...Read full comment
Posted in Mirror World
The most helpful advice I got
Posted on Wed, 20 Jun 2018
The most helpful advice I got, though I couldn't understand it at the time, is to realise you have choices. It's only so bad if you feel trapped.
The sleep thing is interesting to me. It seems accepted that insomnia is a result of...Read full comment
Posted in The Iceberg
It seemed somehow menacing
Posted on Thu, 28 Jun 2018
It seemed somehow menacing from the first sentence. I like the wonderful sound details of the familiar, "dragged it gently along the terrace" "cool little bubbles popping" "the bottle making a small guzzling sound" "wings beating out a faint...Read full comment
Posted in The End of the Evening