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272 of my 1,993 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 277 votes

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not just a citrus

Sunny smelling mangoes and carrots for a snowman's nose rough and griity builders' sand or some ducks from knees to toes. Pumpkins carved on...
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Cherry

between

hills are mirrors reflecting dreams bullet hole sun through sky window air comes in shards blown out, cutting rainbow bridges instants of sea...
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view

My neighbour had seen me, slow pulling my shopping up the road had waved and cheerily bellowed "Can you not go faster?" Below his renovated house,...
Cherry

untravelling path

a memory of walking worn between trees into moss and fallen leaves. A parting as through hair, to tame or make bindable a growing thing shod foot...
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Cherry

RV

While flowers and fruit and leaves fall, birds rise calling dawn from horizon's broken shell; song from bare branches brightens silent cold; and soon...

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272 of my comments have received 277 Great Feedback votes

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Usually I think of myself as

Posted on Thu, 02 Jan 2020

Usually I think of myself as clumsy and bad at maths, but you make me feel that subconciously even I must be an engineer :0) I have heard that it is basic jobs that need no "thinking" but involve handmovement we take for granted, that no AI will...

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Posted in Enablers for the special 10

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wow Luigi, you are so full of

Posted on Mon, 30 Dec 2019

wow Luigi, you are so full of fascinating information!

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Posted in Decameron (edited)

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the movement in this is

Posted on Mon, 30 Dec 2019

the movement in this is wonderful!

taut until

they are forced to evade the sprawled

gapes of nets and whales and

other monsters, snaps of beasts

that can flinch a school from unknowing

to frantic, that...

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Posted in Mackerel

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love "fractures of storms"!

Posted on Sun, 29 Dec 2019

love "fractures of storms"!

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Posted in The bare bones of trees

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I like how you allude to a

Posted on Sat, 28 Dec 2019

I like how you allude to a controlling personality, the way in Maths there is only one right answer:

you have never lost your cold symmetry.

From a distance you appear gentler, 

rounder, but closer up I endured 

the...

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Posted in Decagon

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Oh! So many beautiful

Posted on Sun, 22 Dec 2019

Oh! So many beautiful descriptions!

"glitter still" LOVE THIS

"wind that paces and searches" buffetting consonants

"unrolls its mists" soft sounds

and this!

"I can't rejoice and I can't pray and 

I won't...

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Posted in God rest ye merry, gentlemen

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my mind is made up of Tojan

Posted on Sat, 21 Dec 2019

my mind is made up of Tojan horses - wow!

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Posted in Internal Organs

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I like this too, it is weird

Posted on Tue, 17 Dec 2019

I like this too, it is weird how colours can seem strong sometimes even when it is cloudy, as if the light is inside things instead of shining on them? I particularly like how you notice the leaves. You brought me with you into the moment

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Posted in Today

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You have caught that

Posted on Tue, 17 Dec 2019

You have caught that anticipation at the year's end perfectly, the air thick with fog like packing material. Your last two lines hopeful and the lively rhythm gives a positive feeling

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Posted in Chill

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i am sorry I did not know

Posted on Sat, 14 Dec 2019

i am sorry I did not know what to say about your poem, like a deer when it smells blood I guess, such a wrongness in it. Now you have explained I understand why. Because no one wants to be able to understand this subject, but also you long to,...

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Posted in The Worst

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