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to bee

By Di_Hard on Thu, 17 Jun 2021

In shade most of the year, infront of a curving wall not quite road nor verge at tarmac's edge a large fuscia bush drops stiff silk particoloured red...

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giving ground

By Di_Hard on Sun, 13 Jun 2021

we surprised each other, far in leaf-locked woods, layered tree tops tent-poling a pale cloud roof in mizzle-tingling new made air, as birdsong...

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time flies

By Di_Hard on Tue, 25 May 2021

Bodies irridescent as minds in the present can hold places we've been in Future's oily sheen, while frail wings blister space, fizz with repulsive...

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Bluebells (again)

By Di_Hard on Wed, 12 May 2021

a blackbird decants descants, pouring incandescant territory into surrounding stillness as last week's treetips' tingling aces unfurl full flushes of...

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I wonder if it is like the

Posted on Fri, 08 Oct 2021

I wonder if it is like the difference between a solo singer's voice and a choir? Both are beautiful and powerful. I loved your description in the first part

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I had always thought it was

Posted on Thu, 07 Oct 2021

I had always thought it was to make sure we stay right where they want us?

I think cats need suspense - If a cat sits next to a likely looking hole is a mouse going to come out of that hole? If a cat lies down suddenly in the middle of...

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Agree with Jenny! Specially

Posted on Thu, 07 Oct 2021

Agree with Jenny! Specially the beginning. Just the rhythm of this :

"India was snoozing peacefully in her crate, warmed by a handy shaft of autumnal sunshine shining through the kitchen window. She heard, but tried to ignore, the pad,...

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Brilliant Luigi!!!

Posted on Thu, 07 Oct 2021

Brilliant Luigi!!!

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You are a brilliant poet, can

Posted on Sat, 02 Oct 2021

You are a brilliant poet, can pin down the mist of moods, almost in a sort of collage of trivial things to make something so intimate.

I wish you a happy day tomorrow.

I hope this is not insensitive and ignorant, if you find sugary...

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Oh Penny, this is great! I so

Posted on Sat, 02 Oct 2021

Oh Penny, this is great! I so hope you can keep spinning your story for many many more episodes. The panda details were lovely :0) And the tiny snippets of the person behind all these challenges, and Max, you are revealing them just the right...

Posted in "Willow's Tail" 19

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"this cold flesh wrapped"

Posted on Thu, 30 Sep 2021

"this cold flesh wrapped"

"suddenly stirs...slips out of sight"

"now swerving into deeper silence"

"feverishly searching / coiled shadowed plants"

"cool eyed glances"

"shyness:wishing for night time"

"...

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Lovely to see another chunk

Posted on Wed, 29 Sep 2021

Lovely to see another chunk of your wonderful story! You are handling all the strands so deftly.

Is this a typo for assessed ? "Willow stepped out into the late afternoon sunlight and accessed the crowd"

It makes my day to...

Posted in "Willow's Tail" 18

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Really clever, weaving a

Posted on Wed, 29 Sep 2021

Really clever, weaving a great description of the caddis fly's environment into a political point, making the metaphor work so well without a hint of rant. Brilliant POD

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enjoyed this, and your word

Posted on Tue, 28 Sep 2021

enjoyed this, and your word play with fly at the end :0) They are amazing, aren't they? Like they make their own mosaics to live in?