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This is magic! I do hope it
Posted on Sat, 27 Mar 2021
This is magic! I do hope it is where you live?
I love the first part, the crazy dance (rooks always seem a bit crazy) I imagined a scene which has played for centuries on those hills? A wonderful timeless quality.
I liked how you...Read full comment
Posted in Pastiche
Your poem made me very glad
Posted on Fri, 26 Mar 2021
Your poem made me very glad not to need to be going anywhere :0) It has a bustly feel - I like how you slow it right down with the "op" sounds and then the easing with s sounds at the end. There is always so much craft in your writing! I'm amazed...Read full comment
Posted in Looking down on the city’s departures …
I like the belligerence of
Posted on Tue, 23 Mar 2021
I like the belligerence of the first line :0)
I have been called this several times at work in the past :0) First time, I didn't realise it was not a compliment. Because fruit cake is wonderful (not mine though as it always sinks)
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Posted in I am a Fruit Cake
I cannot tell you how very
Posted on Sun, 21 Mar 2021
I cannot tell you how very much I loved this!
I am so sorry for your loss, Penny. You sound like the best person a dog could live with, Frankie was surrounded by love and respect all his life.
My dog passed 21 years ago and I miss...Read full comment
Posted in "The Canine's of My Life"
Oh! I loved this :0) You are
Posted on Sat, 20 Mar 2021
Oh! I loved this :0) You are a great story maker!!! Perfidia Mishapsham is a BRILLIANT name :0)
Are these typos?
Willow jumped thru her pet door..... she waked further into the garden...Read full comment
Posted in "Willow's Tail" 2
Agree with Jenny and Paul,
Posted on Sun, 14 Mar 2021
Agree with Jenny and Paul, this is one of my favourites of yours, too. Full of movement, informative, gorgeous language making rich and lovely images. One to read a lot of times, just because it is so beautiful, it makes me happy
ps I didn...Read full comment
Posted in Confessions Of An Alder Tree
I like this very much, coming
Posted on Sun, 14 Mar 2021
I like this very much, coming after Lydeford Gorge made me think of a ghost?
"swirl of billowing white silk floating," I love this!!!
Please could you explain what is devoured by trees? Am too thick, have read several times and can'...Read full comment
Posted in Escape To Freedom
Enjoyed this very much, a
Posted on Wed, 10 Mar 2021
Enjoyed this very much, a great 50th piece :0) I can identify the moon and that's it, everything else is unknowable, vast. Your poem made me think of a huge jewellery box, full of silver chains of orbits and crystal celestial orbs and medallion...Read full comment
Posted in Black Holes and Revelations