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Cherry

airmail from the amazon (august 2018)

surrounded by green everywhere I walk through Life, breathe leaf breath only the wind comes guiltless messenger of our destruction
Cherry

the train leaving now

In my rush to get to the right platform looking for signs to where I want to go it's easy to miss changing announcements so when a train pulls in,...
Cherry

rock

I remember the barnacles that scratched when I clung to your steep side as waves crashed; they found you first on your journey through life -...
Cherry

pondering

jelly ellipsis or small eyeballs with tiny pupils, or thought bubbles, each containing a full stop No! A full beginning a drip of ink After some...
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First Walk Of April

Step on a moon stone to cross the stream - Van Gogh’s Starry Night - willow flowers pollen halo’d in swirling water.dark. Sun-coin's cloud-pursed. In...

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272 of my comments have received 277 Great Feedback votes

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I liked this very much, too.

Posted on Wed, 15 Jan 2020

I liked this very much, too.

It's awfully easy to write about being depressed, but very hard to write about it in a way anyone will want to read. Which I did, empathising all the way through, feeling for the narrator, but not being dragged...

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Posted in £2.85

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This bit, in the middle of

Posted on Mon, 13 Jan 2020

This bit, in the middle of all the trance inducing greenery like a dagger in a soft hand:

every decency,

every abomination is homogenised - 

this slavery of a belief 

that is the condemnation of the abused.

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Posted in Lime Tree

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You evoke a very strong

Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2020

You evoke a very strong feeling of uneasiness:

she will show you

that you are no hunter at all -

you are the little lamb that knows

the cold sharp of terror, that knows you have,

unnoticed,

drifted from...

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Posted in Wolf moon

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I like the idea of willows

Posted on Wed, 08 Jan 2020

I like the idea of willows talking to the moon and hiding nests off moon pearly eggs :0)

 

 

 

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Posted in There is hope here

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I like the waterfall "c"

Posted on Wed, 08 Jan 2020

I like the waterfall "c" sounds, in cleft and cliff and crystal - you didn't need to say the sound as the sight words give it, really clever! The last line, every word seems stressed so it is full of the power of a mass of water.

The woods...

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Posted in Water-Break-its-Neck, Radnor Forest

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beautiful Rhiannon, I

Posted on Thu, 15 Nov 2012

beautiful Rhiannon, I particularly like how you use the form to build images then melt them away. Not just clever but creating emotional impact as well. I particularly like the last stanza with its vital surge in the middle like a wave and then...

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Posted in Poignant ice tribute to Titanic victims (Belfast, 21/10/12)

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 I feel for you.

Posted on Mon, 06 Jan 2020

 I feel for you.

Everything tells you to HELP   but if everything you are is rejected what is the right thing to do? I was lucky because my brothers did/do everything. You HAVE TO HAVE A BREAK  or you will break yourself! I am so sorry to...

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Posted in Catharsis

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Luigi I have lost count of

Posted on Sun, 05 Jan 2020

Luigi I have lost count of the things I have learned from reading your poems. I am glad you got a cherry, you ARE  wise, and witty also! No reflection necessary

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Posted in Reflected Glory

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I could not look at the

Posted on Fri, 03 Jan 2020

I could not look at the pictures. You are so brave to have and made this strong message from them. Beautiful but still holding the horror

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Posted in You can’t cling to something once it has gone.

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Enjoyed this very much, do

Posted on Thu, 02 Jan 2020

Enjoyed this very much, do not remember having read a poem about doors before, clever idea of New Year being a door into the next year

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Posted in New Year’s Eve at the Meiji Shrine, Tokyo.

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