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Lethe

By Di_Hard on Fri, 02 Mar 2018

Forgetting things is so scary like standing on a bank a river is eating away at. My Dad died of dementia unable to talk. My son hates that I want to...

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It's all about bread

By Di_Hard on Sat, 24 Feb 2018

It is important to be able to look down on your enemy. Though they are not enemies rather bread and butter. That sort of spongy white pap I wouldn't...

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emperor's new clothes

By Di_Hard on Fri, 23 Feb 2018

Invisible the air is cut and sewn when whistles, chirps and warbles sweetly shear off from the rolls of space, as silk ribon freed catches light,...

Sol Monath (mud month in old english)

By Di_Hard on Wed, 21 Feb 2018

frost a cold kindness makes scars of passage reopened each day numb, unhealing. New sun brings back feeling warms clenched stone knuckles and knee...

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I like the idea of a better

Posted on Fri, 29 Jun 2018

I like the idea of a better self being like a lost toy.

I don't know if you meant it to, but I find this a hopeful poem, reminds me of cutting off the mouldy bits of plants and suddenly they look so much better and you notice there were...

Posted in No Better Past (IP)

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this is beautiful! All the sh

Posted on Mon, 25 Jun 2018

this is beautiful! All the sh and th and oo sounds, made me think of softness but then the sh sound becomes the noise of a weapon "shaft’s full shining power" and it ends not soft at all with "bombarding light"

And it was so satisfying to...

Posted in Brightness without burning

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Thankyou so much Insert. I

Posted on Sat, 23 Jun 2018

Thankyou so much Insert. I wasn't sure. Thankyou for the cherries, too

Have been thinking about crisps for ages since hearing the packets will be here in 1000 years but couldn't think how to do it till read the poetry monthly idea. It is...

Posted in In your shoes

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or Bleak House...

Posted on Thu, 14 Jun 2018

or Bleak House...

Posted in Vamos España

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I like this too, but had to

Posted on Fri, 15 Jun 2018

I like this too, but had to read it a few times to realise what you were saying. Found myself putting in line breaks? I do like the idea behind it and all the descriptions very much?

Feel you are gathering lots of whisps of thought with...

Posted in The minutes and the hours

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My partner believes dogs to

Posted on Wed, 06 Jun 2018

My partner believes dogs to be spirit guides. Duko seems to be guiding the narrator to a more peaceful place, helping him to accept a horrible truth rather than put life on hold while hoping for the impossible. I like that the two people who have...

Posted in Duka's Return

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I love the sense of movement

Posted on Fri, 08 Jun 2018

I love the sense of movement you have achieved with the rhymes and matching vowels:

"dazzling their speedy swooping/sweeping in and scooping"

And the quickness of "dart, smart, dirt, martin"

And I like the human bit in the...

Posted in Treasured Mud Oasis

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your poem has a beautiful

Posted on Sat, 02 Jun 2018

your poem has a beautiful meaning, too.

Posted in Number Spellings!

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This is beautiful! So fluid,

Posted on Wed, 30 May 2018

This is beautiful! So fluid, the way the song pulses and the heart pumps to keep the wings moving quickly. Also, couldn't think how you make it clear that the last line is about coming back to earth, and wonder if it is the D's, which have a...

Posted in May Sky Melody

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you have caught the feeling

Posted on Fri, 25 May 2018

you have caught the feeling of thunderstorms so well! Have a feeling bulls and thunder gods go together which makes it even more tingly