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"a happening with no music"
Posted on Sun, 13 Jun 2021
"a happening with no music" wow that's brilliant :0) Your honeysuckle is way ahead of ours, no colour showing at all yet
Teaching is a family tradition for you? She does look very determined and good humoured, like one of those toys that keep bouncing back upright. That's lovely that she saved all the money your Mum gave her, as I expect things must have been...
Haven't watched it for ages, and didn't remember it well enough so looked up on Wikipedia - had not realised that Rutger Hauer is responsible for the power and poetry of those lines - the original is cheesy dross, I hope he got huge credit for...
Agree with Penny, this is gorgeous, have read several times and it just gets better and better, "chisel kisses" is incredible! The heat, vibrancy you create is so strong, amazing poem
"a happening with no music"
Posted on Sun, 13 Jun 2021
"a happening with no music" wow that's brilliant :0) Your honeysuckle is way ahead of ours, no colour showing at all yet
Read full commentPosted in Honeysuckle On The Breeze
Made me think of you being
Posted on Sun, 13 Jun 2021
Made me think of you being like a mountain range for the insects :0)
Read full commentPosted in Sunbathing
Agree with Jenny, you have
Posted on Tue, 08 Jun 2021
Agree with Jenny, you have adapted that nursery rhyme wonderfully, with your usual genius for rhythm too so it is as good to read as the original song
Read full commentPosted in Where the lie leads
So much rich language! I
Posted on Mon, 07 Jun 2021
So much rich language! I loved "mind twirling" and
"combing beaches...finding all kinds of thingamajigs,
that would appear curiously like brief mysteries of
wonderment," what a brilliant way to describe all the little...
Read full commentPosted in In The Stillness Of Late Years
Enjoyed this story
Posted on Thu, 10 Jun 2021
Enjoyed this story
Read full commentPosted in Bring Me Sunshine
I really like all the details
Posted on Sun, 06 Jun 2021
I really like all the details in this, as Insert says, you have evoked the magic feeling of the dawn, when all sorts of things seem possible
Read full commentPosted in Garden at Dawn
Teaching is a family
Posted on Fri, 04 Jun 2021
Teaching is a family tradition for you? She does look very determined and good humoured, like one of those toys that keep bouncing back upright. That's lovely that she saved all the money your Mum gave her, as I expect things must have been...
Read full commentPosted in My ‘Mamgu’ (c.1880 - 1969)
Haven't watched it for ages,
Posted on Tue, 01 Jun 2021
Haven't watched it for ages, and didn't remember it well enough so looked up on Wikipedia - had not realised that Rutger Hauer is responsible for the power and poetry of those lines - the original is cheesy dross, I hope he got huge credit for...
Read full commentPosted in Roy Batty (Tears in Rain)
Agree with Penny, this is
Posted on Sat, 29 May 2021
Agree with Penny, this is gorgeous, have read several times and it just gets better and better, "chisel kisses" is incredible! The heat, vibrancy you create is so strong, amazing poem
Read full commentPosted in In the shadow of geraniums
you have poured your sunshine
Posted on Sun, 23 May 2021
you have poured your sunshine into everyone who reads this
Read full commentPosted in Sun-Light
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