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This is so energetic! Have
Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021
This is so energetic! Have listened to the (I am guessing) Rimsky Korsakov variation on Spottify, and you have captured the intensity and eeky vibe really well. But it's wonderfully vivid too, all your words seem clear because dissonant (am not...
Read full commentPosted in Another Night On a Bare Mountain
THANKYOU :0) That's a
Posted on Thu, 22 Jul 2021
THANKYOU :0) That's a brilliant surprise! Am going for a walk now, will tell the daddy long legs they got pod :0)
Read full commentPosted in later
There's so much skill in this
Posted on Thu, 22 Jul 2021
There's so much skill in this, I think someone listening to the sound alone, without knowing English, would understand the message. It must be a masterclass in internal rhymes, and you have done that thing I have seeen in other poems of yours,...
Read full commentPosted in Fork Ahead!
Your poem brought back
Posted on Thu, 15 Jul 2021
Your poem brought back memories as I grew up a few miles from Guildford :0) Haven't been there for a very long time, though, don't remember either place you mention, was more C&A and Our Price, which disappeared in an earlier wave of closures...
Read full commentPosted in Daydreaming on Guildford High Street
As Jenny says, thankyou for
Posted on Wed, 14 Jul 2021
As Jenny says, thankyou for creating this feeling of space and movement, light and beautiful sound. Particularly liked:
"A car sweeps past,
a butterfly, white, dances
across the hedge-wall,"
also, the last line, the...
Read full commentPosted in A sleepy mid-July mid-afternoon
I canot tell you how
Posted on Wed, 14 Jul 2021
I canot tell you how wonderful I found this, Jenny! I think this is what "Happy Ever After" means
Read full commentPosted in Coming Home
your photo shows such a sweet
Posted on Sun, 11 Jul 2021
your photo shows such a sweet face. I know how hard it is to lose a dog. Take care of yourself
Read full commentPosted in My Baby Doll - Part IV
enjoyed this very much, too.
Posted on Sat, 10 Jul 2021
enjoyed this very much, too. No wonder Schmeikel joked football had never been home.
Read full commentPosted in Ingerland My Ingerland: A Life in Fifteen Football Games
In the vaccuum of waiting for
Posted on Wed, 07 Jul 2021
In the vaccuum of waiting for inspiration, you pull all these beautiful words! The bird seems to have been conjured by your spiralling pen to circle in the sky, see the world spread with possibilities
Read full commentPosted in Daydreamer
I heard about the pods on the
Posted on Tue, 06 Jul 2021
I heard about the pods on the radio, I hope they take dogs, that is a reason people give for not going in shelters because they don't let in animals. As well as that you catch stuff, and also there are scary people staying there too. They sound...
Read full commentPosted in Where The Streets Have No Blame
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