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Hi Tom, it is very good of
Posted on Sun, 06 Feb 2022
Hi Tom, it is very good of you to come back and I too would like to apologise as I thought I had immediately deleted my comment - I should not have taken such umbrage! Sometimes I find it hard to know how things are meant if there is no voice or...
Read full commentPosted in February Rainbow
Posted on Sun, 06 Feb 2022
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This is the best thing I can
Posted on Fri, 31 Dec 2021
This is the best thing I can remember reading about recent times. This part specially
"I share the socially distanced lower deck with 2 passengers and the dangling Covid 19 placards. 'Only travel if your journey is essential.'
Back...
Read full commentPosted in Va Va Voom
So much to wonder at in this
Posted on Tue, 08 Feb 2022
So much to wonder at in this first reading, though will have to come back tomorrow and have another go to get deeper.
I love "running" being on two lines, reinforcing the impression of endurance, distance, breathlessness, tiredness....
Read full commentPosted in Outline of a Man
I loved this one :0) In your
Posted on Tue, 08 Feb 2022
I loved this one :0) In your wise and wonderful poem you have described a whole philosophy :0)
Read full commentPosted in One-leaf therapy
That's so lovely! How you
Posted on Sat, 05 Feb 2022
That's so lovely! How you have found so much richness only in this one kind of flower, it's just gorgeous. Has made my day to read
particularly liked
Florets stand tightly; though delicate
to the touch, magnetic...
Read full commentPosted in Stirring Of The Senses
The rhythm of this made me
Posted on Fri, 04 Feb 2022
The rhythm of this made me think of Rain Street, though it feels a bit like Old Main Drag, too, the drowned dreams
Read full commentPosted in Her Troubles
I bet your editor regretted
Posted on Sun, 30 Jan 2022
I bet your editor regretted giving you a word limit! You have done an expert job enlisting every sense to describe your visit. I particularly liked all the food. And you tell about the contrasts so well, the warmth of the lady who invited you...
Read full commentPosted in Maglic Moments
You have made the river scary
Posted on Tue, 25 Jan 2022
You have made the river scary and beautiful, evoking age glamour and power. Also, this line where you have "hue" does the true poet thing (for me) of making the sound of the words describe the meaning
Tranquil, soothing and deep blue...
Read full commentPosted in Lady Danube
Enjoyed your description of
Posted on Tue, 25 Jan 2022
Enjoyed your description of your walk, particularly the introduction of a companion
"‘Don’t slip!’ … I slipped! …" which added to the sense of being there. Am glad you landed gracefully, something I aspire to but do not achieve, despite...
Read full commentPosted in Roam with me to the footbridge by the ford
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