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made me think of stars being
Posted on Tue, 20 Apr 2021
made me think of stars being like fluffy white dandelion seeds sailing into the night, foretelling that you will find a loving partner, and then the last three words bring it all together, very peaceful, romantic poem :0)
You evoke a sense of such richness, sumptuousness of nature when it's as it should be, untouched by us. We have had no frogspawn for two years, so it is comforting to know this place still exists, and your wonderful...
I remember reading other poems of yours about family treasures. It is a strange jump out of the present, like pulling a thread out of place in a huge shawl, going back drawn by one tiny detail, wanting the whole round solidness, but memory is...
It's hard leaving feedback for your poems? Every time I read them I find something new, my understanding must grow, while I am away. Congratulations on POW, on finding a way to bring comfort through beautiful words. I felt such peace at the end,...
you express that feeling very well, sort of like waiting for a wave to fall but it doesn't and it doesn't. I like how you embrace the whole of humanity at the beginning, too
made me think of stars being
Posted on Tue, 20 Apr 2021
made me think of stars being like fluffy white dandelion seeds sailing into the night, foretelling that you will find a loving partner, and then the last three words bring it all together, very peaceful, romantic poem :0)
Read full commentPosted in Before We Kissed Goodnight
Oh, this is so good!
Posted on Mon, 19 Apr 2021
Oh, this is so good!
You evoke a sense of such richness, sumptuousness of nature when it's as it should be, untouched by us. We have had no frogspawn for two years, so it is comforting to know this place still exists, and your wonderful...
Read full commentPosted in Heron-haunted Pool
exquisite! trying to think of
Posted on Mon, 19 Apr 2021
exquisite! trying to think of the perfect word to match those you have chosen
this are as unfussy, delicate and gorgeous as the flowers you depict
I like the fritillary one best. I keep trying to grow them, last year they all...
Read full commentPosted in White stars and meadow bells
I remember reading other
Posted on Mon, 19 Apr 2021
I remember reading other poems of yours about family treasures. It is a strange jump out of the present, like pulling a thread out of place in a huge shawl, going back drawn by one tiny detail, wanting the whole round solidness, but memory is...
Read full commentPosted in Memory Box
Palimpsest streets, had to
Posted on Mon, 19 Apr 2021
Palimpsest streets, had to look that up, is great
I remember someone here kindly saying it wasn't my fault I was English :0)
I liked this poem, poking fun, but with respect
Posted in Land of the Rising Batter
what a lovely surprise to
Posted on Sun, 18 Apr 2021
what a lovely surprise to find another installment! Thank you so much for posting it, these characters are brilliant !
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 3
You have raised the standard!
Posted on Wed, 14 Apr 2021
You have raised the standard!
To touch so many people through writing as you, I cannot do that? You do it over and over again, you are one of the very best :0)
Read full commentPosted in Setting Sons
It's hard leaving feedback
Posted on Wed, 14 Apr 2021
It's hard leaving feedback for your poems? Every time I read them I find something new, my understanding must grow, while I am away. Congratulations on POW, on finding a way to bring comfort through beautiful words. I felt such peace at the end,...
Read full commentPosted in Setting Sons
The comma after understanding
Posted on Thu, 15 Apr 2021
The comma after understanding is like a deep breath of relief :0) You convey the tension of the atmosphere before very well
Read full commentPosted in Storm clouds rolling in
you express that feeling very
Posted on Mon, 12 Apr 2021
you express that feeling very well, sort of like waiting for a wave to fall but it doesn't and it doesn't. I like how you embrace the whole of humanity at the beginning, too
Read full commentPosted in Suddenly, not there …
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