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I liked the first poem too,
Posted on Mon, 11 Apr 2022
I liked the first poem too, at this time of year when trying to remember what it is like to be warm all through by the sun it was a great reminder of riches. Maybe a Midas reminder. The second one made me think of people thinking they are heroes...
I loved this :0) I feel like I have been inside your mind, too now, it was so honest. You write with such empathy, understanding for the animal characters living with you. How you describe your dog not having many pees, or barks left, I know that...
wow! you have humming birds?!?!!! I was enjoying this very much till that bit but now I'm almost too jealous even to say ruby pools is gorgeous way to descrtibe petunias
I love the idea of thoughtful, gentle people being like daisies. Made me think of flowers in unmown grass, shining like acts of kindness, small but adding together into something wonderful
I had to read this a few times to get the sense out of it as the sounds are such fun! Lazlo Biro is the most brilliant name :0) And how you have the i/y sounds in the middle of each line from Biro and stylus is so clever. It is very, very...
I loved the idea of a drooping tank :0) I couldn't find the image, though there was lots of stuff about tanks being pulled by tractors? Something I heard on the radio was that Russian army's problem was mud. If one reason for taking Ukraine is...
this made me think of special days' memories being like collecting lavender and rosepetals to put in drawers, so sweet and fresh and "potent" as you say, that, long after, clothes of today are scented, by them. Again, you have evoked such a...
This is full of beautiful things, from the rainbow of prisms at the beginning, majesty of whales, to the peace of a sunlit valley, like a poem verson of "Wonderful World" song, positive and heartening
I liked the first poem too,
Posted on Mon, 11 Apr 2022
I liked the first poem too, at this time of year when trying to remember what it is like to be warm all through by the sun it was a great reminder of riches. Maybe a Midas reminder. The second one made me think of people thinking they are heroes...
Read full commentPosted in Two Poems Concerning The Sun
I loved this :0) I feel like
Posted on Sat, 09 Apr 2022
I loved this :0) I feel like I have been inside your mind, too now, it was so honest. You write with such empathy, understanding for the animal characters living with you. How you describe your dog not having many pees, or barks left, I know that...
Read full commentPosted in Pet Sounds
wow! you have humming birds?!
Posted on Sat, 09 Apr 2022
wow! you have humming birds?!?!!! I was enjoying this very much till that bit but now I'm almost too jealous even to say ruby pools is gorgeous way to descrtibe petunias
Read full commentPosted in Shared Existence
I love the idea of thoughtful
Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2022
I love the idea of thoughtful, gentle people being like daisies. Made me think of flowers in unmown grass, shining like acts of kindness, small but adding together into something wonderful
Read full commentPosted in Daisy Chain
I had to read this a few
Posted on Thu, 07 Apr 2022
I had to read this a few times to get the sense out of it as the sounds are such fun! Lazlo Biro is the most brilliant name :0) And how you have the i/y sounds in the middle of each line from Biro and stylus is so clever. It is very, very...
Read full commentPosted in Inspiration point - scribbled couplet
you shouldn't have changed it
Posted on Wed, 06 Apr 2022
you shouldn't have changed it just because I am thick!
great choice for POD, lots of ideas
Read full commentPosted in Living Life Backwards
I loved the image of a
Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2022
I loved the idea of a drooping tank :0) I couldn't find the image, though there was lots of stuff about tanks being pulled by tractors? Something I heard on the radio was that Russian army's problem was mud. If one reason for taking Ukraine is...
Read full commentPosted in There is a Great Picture of Great Emperor Plutinplot! By Alfred N.Muggins
"Justice – like pick-up
Posted on Wed, 06 Apr 2022
"Justice – like pick-up trucks – may seem slow
to arrive." brilliant :0) I love the whole of this section, how you describe fields, too. Although can land be both lush and barren? Fruitless, maybe?
Read full commentPosted in Living Life Backwards
this made me think of
Posted on Wed, 06 Apr 2022
this made me think of special days' memories being like collecting lavender and rosepetals to put in drawers, so sweet and fresh and "potent" as you say, that, long after, clothes of today are scented, by them. Again, you have evoked such a...
Read full commentPosted in Amongst The Memories
This is full of beautiful
Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2022
This is full of beautiful things, from the rainbow of prisms at the beginning, majesty of whales, to the peace of a sunlit valley, like a poem verson of "Wonderful World" song, positive and heartening
Read full commentPosted in Life Through a Prism
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