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what an image, lashing rain
Posted on Tue, 20 Oct 2020
what an image, lashing rain and sweep of a samurai sword! You evoke the storm brilliantly, from the first 3 fierce lines to the colours and slowing at the end making me think of the stillness after
yur 4333;'/?????????????$%Rrrrrrr (message from Tina, I hope you undrrstand it, is probably saying mine is rude so don't read it. I apologise very much if it is?)
this makes me think the past is hard and dark like the moon, and your...
Even as we put on masks to save ourselves, becoming aware of transience of posessions. Also as we distance from the living, thoughts of death are always close. Very good points, really well put! And a positive ending :0)
your granddaughter must be so chuffed to have your fun poem in praise of her achieving this useful skill :0) I had to read the whole thing after those brilliant first 2 lines
what an image, lashing rain
Posted on Tue, 20 Oct 2020
what an image, lashing rain and sweep of a samurai sword! You evoke the storm brilliantly, from the first 3 fierce lines to the colours and slowing at the end making me think of the stillness after
Read full commentPosted in Samurai
yur 4333;'/?????????????$
Posted on Mon, 19 Oct 2020
yur 4333;'/?????????????$%Rrrrrrr (message from Tina, I hope you undrrstand it, is probably saying mine is rude so don't read it. I apologise very much if it is?)
this makes me think the past is hard and dark like the moon, and your...
Read full commentPosted in The Walrus and the Pearl
Even as we put on masks to
Posted on Sat, 17 Oct 2020
Even as we put on masks to save ourselves, becoming aware of transience of posessions. Also as we distance from the living, thoughts of death are always close. Very good points, really well put! And a positive ending :0)
Read full commentPosted in A Changed World
You have covered EVERYTHING.
Posted on Tue, 13 Oct 2020
You have covered EVERYTHING. I like your busy rhythm, and the clever rhymes at the end
Read full commentPosted in Jobs
Loved this! Brilliant for the
Posted on Tue, 13 Oct 2020
Loved this! Brilliant for the beginning of Autumn! Particularly liked the idea of the waiting sky
Read full commentPosted in House Ghost
wonderful! Needs reading lots
Posted on Fri, 09 Oct 2020
wonderful! agree, will read lots of times. Menace and grace. Quick rhythm made me think of small ripples with a huge subject underneath
love calm of carrion, will make me smile next time see a keep calm and carry on logo :0)
Read full commentPosted in Gatorland
your granddaughter must be so
Posted on Thu, 08 Oct 2020
your granddaughter must be so chuffed to have your fun poem in praise of her achieving this useful skill :0) I had to read the whole thing after those brilliant first 2 lines
Read full commentPosted in Attacking a satsuma like Jack Horner
That would be a perfect way
Posted on Tue, 06 Oct 2020
That would be a perfect way to go. Enjoyed reading, found comforting, thankyou. Hope your sciatica is easing?
Read full commentPosted in The Nova Scotia I Know
Great choice :0)
Posted on Tue, 29 Sep 2020
Great choice :0)
Read full commentPosted in Everyone's going to the opticians
this is so sad!
Posted on Wed, 30 Sep 2020
this is so sad!
"I am a robin tricked
to sing at night by false light"
I wish I spoke with the rarity of frankinsence :0) I love that idea. Unlike you, though, far from being an essential, the oil of my words is...
Read full commentPosted in Deus Ex Machina
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