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Maybe if the heart is like an
Posted on Wed, 07 Apr 2021
Maybe if the heart is like an egg, inside there is a creature which can fly, and needs the heart to break so it can be free?
Oh! I am glad he is better, remember you writing about him ages ago, having to stay in a cage till his bones healed. And then a rat!!! That is a proud and stubborn spirit he must have.
I like very much how you describe the atmosphere in...
I love the first part, the crazy dance (rooks always seem a bit crazy) I imagined a scene which has played for centuries on those hills? A wonderful timeless quality.
Your poem made me very glad not to need to be going anywhere :0) It has a bustly feel - I like how you slow it right down with the "op" sounds and then the easing with s sounds at the end. There is always so much craft in your writing! I'm amazed...
I have been called this several times at work in the past :0) First time, I didn't realise it was not a compliment. Because fruit cake is wonderful (not mine though as it always sinks)
Maybe if the heart is like an
Posted on Wed, 07 Apr 2021
Maybe if the heart is like an egg, inside there is a creature which can fly, and needs the heart to break so it can be free?
Read full commentPosted in Humpty Dumpty
THANKYOU!!! That is an
Posted on Tue, 06 Apr 2021
THANKYOU!!! That is an amazing compliment, you are very kind :0) And the picture is BEAUTIFUL, now I feel all luxurious. What an honour!
Read full commentPosted in to pick up time
Oh! I am glad he is better,
Posted on Mon, 05 Apr 2021
Oh! I am glad he is better, remember you writing about him ages ago, having to stay in a cage till his bones healed. And then a rat!!! That is a proud and stubborn spirit he must have.
I like very much how you describe the atmosphere in...
Read full commentPosted in The Easter Rat
This is magic! I do hope it
Posted on Sat, 27 Mar 2021
This is magic! I do hope it is where you live?
I love the first part, the crazy dance (rooks always seem a bit crazy) I imagined a scene which has played for centuries on those hills? A wonderful timeless quality.
I liked how you...
Read full commentPosted in Pastiche
Your poem made me very glad
Posted on Fri, 26 Mar 2021
Your poem made me very glad not to need to be going anywhere :0) It has a bustly feel - I like how you slow it right down with the "op" sounds and then the easing with s sounds at the end. There is always so much craft in your writing! I'm amazed...
Read full commentPosted in Looking down on the city’s departures …
I like the belligerence of
Posted on Tue, 23 Mar 2021
I like the belligerence of the first line :0)
I have been called this several times at work in the past :0) First time, I didn't realise it was not a compliment. Because fruit cake is wonderful (not mine though as it always sinks)
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Read full commentPosted in I am a Fruit Cake
I cannot tell you how very
Posted on Sun, 21 Mar 2021
I cannot tell you how very much I loved this!
I am so sorry for your loss, Penny. You sound like the best person a dog could live with, Frankie was surrounded by love and respect all his life.
My dog passed 21 years ago and I miss...
Read full commentPosted in "The Canines of My Life"
Oh! I loved this :0) You are
Posted on Sat, 20 Mar 2021
Oh! I loved this :0) You are a great story maker!!! Perfidia Mishapsham is a BRILLIANT name :0)
Are these typos?
circumstances dire
Willow jumped thru her pet door..... she waked further into the garden...
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 2
Do, please write some more!
Posted on Wed, 17 Mar 2021
Do, please write some more!
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail"
I like this very much, coming
Posted on Sun, 14 Mar 2021
I like this very much, coming after Lydeford Gorge made me think of a ghost?
"swirl of billowing white silk floating," I love this!!!
Please could you explain what is devoured by trees? Am too thick, have read several times and can'...
Read full commentPosted in Escape To Freedom
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