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I have 179 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 606899 times and 283 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1943 of my 5,929 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2001 votes

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1943 of my comments have received 2001 Great Feedback votes

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what an image, lashing rain

Posted on Tue, 20 Oct 2020

what an image, lashing rain and sweep of a samurai sword! You evoke the storm brilliantly, from the first 3 fierce lines to the colours and slowing at the end making me think of the stillness after

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Posted in Samurai

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 yur 4333;'/?????????????$

Posted on Mon, 19 Oct 2020

 yur 4333;'/?????????????$%Rrrrrrr (message from Tina, I hope you undrrstand it, is probably saying mine is rude so don't read it. I apologise very much if it is?)

this makes me think the past is hard and dark like the moon, and your...

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Posted in The Walrus and the Pearl

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Even as we put on masks to

Posted on Sat, 17 Oct 2020

Even as we put on masks to save ourselves, becoming aware of transience of posessions. Also as we distance from the living, thoughts of death are always close. Very good points, really well put! And a positive ending :0)

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Posted in A Changed World

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You have covered EVERYTHING.

Posted on Tue, 13 Oct 2020

You have covered EVERYTHING. I like your busy rhythm, and the clever rhymes at the end

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Posted in Jobs

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Loved this! Brilliant for the

Posted on Tue, 13 Oct 2020

Loved this! Brilliant for the beginning of Autumn! Particularly liked the idea of the waiting sky

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Posted in House Ghost

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wonderful! Needs reading lots

Posted on Fri, 09 Oct 2020

wonderful! agree,  will read lots of times. Menace and grace. Quick rhythm made me think of small ripples with a huge subject underneath

love calm of carrion, will make me smile next time see a keep calm and carry on logo :0)

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Posted in Gatorland

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your granddaughter must be so

Posted on Thu, 08 Oct 2020

your granddaughter must be so chuffed to have your fun poem in praise of her achieving this useful skill :0) I had to read the whole thing after those brilliant first 2 lines

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Posted in Attacking a satsuma like Jack Horner

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That would be a perfect way

Posted on Tue, 06 Oct 2020

That would be a perfect way to go. Enjoyed reading, found comforting, thankyou. Hope your sciatica is easing?

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Posted in The Nova Scotia I Know

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Great choice :0)

Posted on Tue, 29 Sep 2020

Great choice :0)

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Posted in Everyone's going to the opticians

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this is so sad!

Posted on Wed, 30 Sep 2020

this is so sad!

"I am a robin tricked

to sing at night by false light"

 

I wish I spoke with the rarity of frankinsence :0) I love that idea. Unlike you, though,  far from being an essential, the oil of my words is...

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Posted in Deus Ex Machina

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