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This is a lovely installment!
Posted on Fri, 07 May 2021
I'm sorry to hear about Packam.
And glad you are able to write again, this is a lovely installment to continue. You have done a great job introducing Rohan - I loved this bit in particular :
I'm so sorry to read you are unwell Rhiannon, and I do hope that changes for the better very soon. I wouldn't have guessed from this poem though, which is vibrant and strong as you, the cottage rooted in the landscape with "always" and the...
This is a lovely installment!
Posted on Fri, 07 May 2021
I'm sorry to hear about Packam.
And glad you are able to write again, this is a lovely installment to continue. You have done a great job introducing Rohan - I loved this bit in particular :
“It meanth…” Rohan looked all around, as...
Read full commentPosted in Slugs, Snails and Puppy Dog Tales!
Truly comforting, soothing. I
Posted on Thu, 06 May 2021
Truly comforting, soothing. I would like to be able to read this poem just before passing
Posted in Resting Place
I don't know that they can
Posted on Wed, 05 May 2021
I don't know that they can think thoughts bad enough to name us
Read full commentPosted in Blackpoll warbler
Definitely keeping up the
Posted on Wed, 05 May 2021
Definitely keeping up the entertainment!
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 6
As Penny says, your
Posted on Wed, 05 May 2021
As Penny says, your description of migration is so powerful! This is amazing:
"1700 miles of the blank canvas
of an ocean; their name for it -
a bird-like word for death,
a vastness
upon which
...
Read full commentPosted in Blackpoll warbler
I'm so sorry to read you are
Posted on Mon, 03 May 2021
I'm so sorry to read you are unwell Rhiannon, and I do hope that changes for the better very soon. I wouldn't have guessed from this poem though, which is vibrant and strong as you, the cottage rooted in the landscape with "always" and the...
Read full commentPosted in Coastal Cottage (Pembrokeshire)
Ohhhhhhhhh what a cliff
Posted on Mon, 03 May 2021
Ohhhhhhhhh what a cliff hanger!!!
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 5
I couldn't resist reading
Posted on Sat, 01 May 2021
I couldn't resist reading this aloud - the first 2 lines in particular are so satisfying to say! Also the bit about polar bears made me smile :0)
Although it's sad to realise that we are as likely to visit Mars as somewhere beautiful on...
Read full commentPosted in Roaming the world, and beyond
I liked "haven of canvas" too
Posted on Tue, 27 Apr 2021
I liked "haven of canvas" too, and also the contrast of "tin can" with all the exotic names
Read full commentPosted in Footsteps on Mars
Love this Jenny, thankyou so
Posted on Tue, 27 Apr 2021
Love this Jenny, thankyou so much for posting
Read full commentPosted in Sunrise
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