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You evoke a very strong claustrophobia! To make lockdown being shut away from Life's colour, and feeling blue the only colour left, the colour of shadows from the walls we make, is beautiful idea. I hope you are well, and soon get to wander...
This is a brilliant contrast, those who were once beasts of burden, but whose enjoyment of living brings joy while reinforcing our link with nature, the delight of children in the newborn foals. And their replacements, robots, small, vulnerable...
This seems very sad to me, particularly the last line, the only certainty in your poem full of words about change - precarious, maybe, dripping, melting. Yet there is warmth all the way through - the snow can't get inside, where the cat is so...
yes, I see. Thankyou for
Posted on Wed, 13 Jan 2021
yes, I see. Thankyou for explaining :0)
Read full commentPosted in Oh, What’s That In The Hollow?
You evoke a very strong
Posted on Tue, 12 Jan 2021
You evoke a very strong claustrophobia! To make lockdown being shut away from Life's colour, and feeling blue the only colour left, the colour of shadows from the walls we make, is beautiful idea. I hope you are well, and soon get to wander...
Read full commentPosted in The Edge of Colour
My son ame in when I was
Posted on Wed, 13 Jan 2021
My son came in when I was looking at the painting and said "Whoa, that is a terrifying painting!" and two seconds later"It's really cool, though!" :0)
All these paintings you are linking to are an education! I had not seen any of them, and...
Read full commentPosted in Oh, What’s That In The Hollow?
Hi Onemore, I hope you are OK
Posted on Fri, 08 Jan 2021
Hi Onemore, I hope you are OK?
I love "lost to the secrecy of sleep" I didn't sleep at all last night, maybe I will tonight if I keep your beautiful poem in my mind
I hope grief soon turns to memory. At the moment I guess loss is a...
Read full commentPosted in Night With Her Train Of Stars
"carless calm" is wonderful.
Posted on Thu, 07 Jan 2021
"carless calm" is wonderful. There is a huge peace in your poem, the only sound the waxwings at the end. It's lovely.
And thankyou for a good z word fror scrabble :0)
Read full commentPosted in Zills
You make me long to go to
Posted on Sun, 03 Jan 2021
You make me long to go to your coffee shop! It sounds so cosy and welcoming to all five senses. I hope you are soon allowed to write there again
Read full commentPosted in "A cup with a viewpoint"
LOVED this poem Rhiannon :0)
Posted on Thu, 31 Dec 2020
LOVED this poem Rhiannon :0)
"A boo – k, oh good:
they open and shut
and you can stagger about
to give them to someone, or hide them"
Made me smile, you are so wonderfully wise at knowing/remembering how a young...
Read full commentPosted in Toddler opening presents
I love the idea of violin
Posted on Thu, 31 Dec 2020
I love the idea of violin sound raining down, also the suspended energy of deep double base,made me think of a great big lazy brass bright lion :0)
You have given words to the qualities of these instruments' sounds like turning a crystal...
Read full commentPosted in Symphony Of Emotions
This is a brilliant contrast,
Posted on Tue, 22 Dec 2020
This is a brilliant contrast, those who were once beasts of burden, but whose enjoyment of living brings joy while reinforcing our link with nature, the delight of children in the newborn foals. And their replacements, robots, small, vulnerable...
Read full commentPosted in The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 1 of 3)
This seems very sad to me,
Posted on Mon, 21 Dec 2020
This seems very sad to me, particularly the last line, the only certainty in your poem full of words about change - precarious, maybe, dripping, melting. Yet there is warmth all the way through - the snow can't get inside, where the cat is so...
Read full commentPosted in At Christmas
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