Di_Hard

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I have 180 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 861140 times and 288 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2241 of my 6,419 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2326 votes

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How do you think up these

Posted on Tue, 18 Jan 2022

How do you think up these fabulous images? Clouds being "plump ogres" is WONDERFUL. And I love "realm of trails" too, magic! Off to look up your woods :0)

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Posted in Burnham Beeches

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I love "a yearning of notes

Posted on Tue, 18 Jan 2022

I love "a yearning of notes flung/to the sky" and "stars scatter with their call" shivery exciting :0)

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Posted in Wolves, blizzard

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I think that might be what

Posted on Sat, 15 Jan 2022

I think that might be what the new anti protesting laws are for

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Posted in Money - some context

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These pooems about your

Posted on Sat, 15 Jan 2022

These pooems about your experiences with homeless people are moving and informative Richard, and hold great dignity

"my infantry

days in Afghanistan did

this to me.

Now PTSD crawls all

over me."

I am...

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Posted in This Homeless Man

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Brilliant! Am rather like

Posted on Fri, 14 Jan 2022

Brilliant! Am rather like that, specially with computers, so is great to have a new hero :0) You had plausible historical details (no idea if they are true but  they seem true) which made it all more real. And your own wonderful writing style,...

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Posted in The God of Mistakes

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Argh, I have the memory of an

Posted on Sun, 09 Jan 2022

Argh, I have the memory of an amnesiac mayfly, I knew about that but couldn't remember his name! I keep telling myself to ignore any new instalment and wait till you have finished when I will be able to keep track of everyone, but then I see one...

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 24

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this is withering :0)

Posted on Sun, 09 Jan 2022

this is withering :0) "Perfidia stared at him. Was he trying to hide a smile or was it a burp he was trying to swallow; it was most likely the latter she decided."

again (know have mentioned before) I love the relationship between...

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 24

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How you have "confine!" in

Posted on Mon, 10 Jan 2022

How you have "confine!" in the middle of the line, breaking the flow, works so well, it really stands out as a warning, and the rest of the poem explaining why. I wonder if first people using fire might have had rhymes like this? Even not so long...

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Posted in Harness!

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I love these stories :0) That

Posted on Tue, 11 Jan 2022

I love these stories :0) That beginning is brilliant :0) Our neighbour (not the one who has just got better from COVID)  has a woodburning stove. Whenever I offer him any  Buddleia prunings etc he tries not to shudder and says that the wood has...

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Posted in A Hot Little Model from France

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As a child the only fruit we

Posted on Tue, 11 Jan 2022

As a child the only fruit we had (apart from a satsuma in Christmas stocking) was from the garden. Apples would be kept in trays in the garage getting wrinklier and smaller through the winter, and sometimes with maggots growing in their cores. So...

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Posted in Two Generations. Two Fruits.

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