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There's a wonderful coolness
Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022
There's a wonderful coolness to them,isn't there? Your last line, about them being a work of art, made me think of pictures I have seen of the inside of the Blue Mosque?
This poem is a lovely Summer companion to your one about Hyacinths :0...
Read full commentPosted in Love In The Mist
This is scary! I think
Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022
This is scary! I think because some parts are so closely my experience (almost dying), but mixed in with sinister and truly frightening thoughts, I was so worried about the baby boy. I wonder if you carry it further, if he will believe in his...
Read full commentPosted in Largo and Seraphine
Great episode! You made it
Posted on Tue, 07 Jun 2022
Great episode! You made it easy to identify with Maben all through
Isn't pus a sign of infection? Could you say "ooze?"
I guess a child who is always hungry becomes used to hunting out anything edible, that she was so desperate...
Read full commentPosted in The Castle (16)
I'm so glad you didn't rest
Posted on Tue, 07 Jun 2022
I'm so glad you didn't rest with the photo! That could only be static, and your poem catches the movement of crop striving and tree slowly easing back into the land's food chain. Your title could even be about the life stage of the tree? And at a...
Read full commentPosted in Evening peace
Perfidia is a wonderful
Posted on Fri, 03 Jun 2022
Perfidia is a wonderful character :0) I love how you play with her belief in her sense of superiority when she meets Dillon :
"“More than once actually, if I’m forced to be honest and I think for the moment I am,” he admitted with...
Read full commentPosted in Willow's Tail" 29 (gather the suspects)
I love the idea of Faith
Posted on Sun, 05 Jun 2022
I love the idea of Faith being like clouds!
Read full commentPosted in A Fox In A Moon Night
I'd not heard of Pascal's
Posted on Thu, 02 Jun 2022
I'd not heard of Pascal's wager, so did not understand Ewan's poem, but have looked it up now. That is canny for an 8 year old!
I hope there is always the opportunity for people to be in Nature and able to appreciate the Design
You...
Read full commentPosted in Diamonds of truth
Posted on Thu, 02 Jun 2022
"whirling, wild winds forge sinister spouts.
Hurtling through the raging tempest,
a house flying,"
You evoke the nightmare quality that so many wish they could wake from
Read full commentPosted in Back In Kansas
You have a wonderful stirring
Posted on Thu, 02 Jun 2022
You have a wonderful stirring rhythm and create a romantic sense of adventure. Only, at the end, you call her victim and I think of her as heroine?
It's a great accompaninment to the original story!
Read full commentPosted in Leaving The Nest
Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022
Rhiannon, I'm sorry all my replies to you keep being in the wrong order and I cannot sort it!
I agree with both you and Jane?
While I have been with my partner for 20 years we are not married. It is a struggle and we have had some...
Read full commentPosted in unclear nuclear
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