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this is so exciting! I loved
Posted on Fri, 12 Feb 2021
this is so exciting! I loved it - would never have thought of shoving, but it's perfect, giving the idea of eagerness. And I love the peace of the 2 wide, flat A sounds at the end - vast made me think of the sky and last the sea wrapping round...
Read full commentPosted in River in Spate
loved this one! You are
Posted on Tue, 02 Feb 2021
loved this one! You are amazing at catching fleeting moments of infinite beauty.
The two feet bit made me think of when I saw a deer this afternoon, in very windy woods, and just as you say, it was my solidity that struck me, compared to...
Read full commentPosted in I Cannot Explain
That IS stubborn!
Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2021
That IS stubborn!
Could you have defined and realigned to contuinue the strong rhyme? Eg
though sees through mist a wrong defined
his point of view still can't be ever realigned
only with your brilliant springy...
Read full commentPosted in A mind made up
"Showery and cool the day" is
Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2021
"Showery and cool the day" is musical as a song itself!
and I liked the repetition of V sounds in "quiver" and "over"
"untamed routes" made me think of a cowboy at a rodeo seeing how long they can stay on :0)
"gently prosper...
Read full commentPosted in Drifting On The Muse
I love herring gulls, and I
Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2021
I love herring gulls, and I love this poem, too!
cries that pull threads
of understanding
yes!
from a rooftop, a silver
wing to seize the wind
gorgeous
Read full commentPosted in Herring Gull
Love this! Exactly how I
Posted on Sat, 16 Jan 2021
Love this! Exactly how I rememeber it :0) Spotify is great, would never have heard any of the music I like now, without it, but the foreplay of records is a wonderful thing, and you have recreated it perfectly
Read full commentPosted in Darren's Records
Are you describing a crab
Posted on Fri, 15 Jan 2021
Are you describing a crab apple and a sweet apple? Cos birds love crab apples just as much, and the colours are gorgeous :0)
There is something very deep about holding a warm apple while it is still attached to the tree, isn't there? I...
Read full commentPosted in Apple Tree
There's such a magical feel
Posted on Fri, 15 Jan 2021
There's such a magical feel to this poem - I love the idea of mist being moths'wings
Read full commentPosted in Vagabonds of Memory
I enjoyed this very much - it
Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021
I enjoyed this very much - it is so happy! Your bluejay reminds me of the jackdaws which come to our house for peanuts :0)
Read full commentPosted in The Blue Jay
this is so rich, enjoyed
Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021
this is so rich, enjoyed reading very much
Read full commentPosted in The Haunted Fort of Bhangarh
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