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"Afraid to stay
Posted on Fri, 11 Mar 2022
"Afraid to stay
Afraid to go"
I heard a lady talking about this, about her grandparents who being Jewish had suffered in the second World War, remembering her grandmother saying it had been so difficult deciding when to go, and then...
Thank goodness was not the poet's eyeball!!! Realy enjoyed this :0) The tying of "ew" body part transience to the transendence of ideas that last forever in a child's story is brilliant. I wonder what changes happened in the eagle?
You are always helping me look at things from a new point of view! Thankyou.
There must be so many conflicts which could have been avoided if things decided after previous wars had been decided differently. Perhaps all? Is what I have...
I was very grateful for your explanation, I think I read this before when not very well and more brain dead than usual. Reading again, now, this is STUNNING, I do hope Insert's plan works and it is read loads!
Oh, it is fab to find another installment :0) Just as exciting and intriguing as before! You are brilliant at characters, all this emotional tension running backwards and forwards between everybody like twanging elastic seeming to draw them close...
This is so clever, yet personal, too. From the safest place there is, a parent's bed, to the scariness of the world order changing, from hugeness of countries to small as a child's feet
"Afraid to stay
Posted on Fri, 11 Mar 2022
"Afraid to stay
Afraid to go"
I heard a lady talking about this, about her grandparents who being Jewish had suffered in the second World War, remembering her grandmother saying it had been so difficult deciding when to go, and then...
Read full commentPosted in 502 Kilometres
Thank goodness was not the
Posted on Fri, 11 Mar 2022
Thank goodness was not the poet's eyeball!!! Realy enjoyed this :0) The tying of "ew" body part transience to the transendence of ideas that last forever in a child's story is brilliant. I wonder what changes happened in the eagle?
Read full commentPosted in The Poet's Ear
you describe this so well.
Posted on Wed, 09 Mar 2022
you describe this so well. And those last 3 lines, all about "I" shutting the world out.
Read full commentPosted in Nil by Mouth
Gosh Jenny, every single line
Posted on Tue, 08 Mar 2022
Gosh Jenny, every single line of this has something wonderful! Intense sensations, and also full of meaning
Read full commentPosted in Up On The Ridgeway
You are always helping me
Posted on Tue, 08 Mar 2022
You are always helping me look at things from a new point of view! Thankyou.
There must be so many conflicts which could have been avoided if things decided after previous wars had been decided differently. Perhaps all? Is what I have...
Read full commentPosted in We Used to Tell Ourselves
I was very grateful for your
Posted on Sun, 27 Feb 2022
I was very grateful for your explanation, I think I read this before when not very well and more brain dead than usual. Reading again, now, this is STUNNING, I do hope Insert's plan works and it is read loads!
Read full commentPosted in Dazhdbog
Oh, it is fab to find another
Posted on Sat, 05 Mar 2022
Oh, it is fab to find another installment :0) Just as exciting and intriguing as before! You are brilliant at characters, all this emotional tension running backwards and forwards between everybody like twanging elastic seeming to draw them close...
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 25
I liked the Harry Redknap bit
Posted on Fri, 04 Mar 2022
I liked the Harry Redknap bit very much, too :0) Also, I really appreciated your story cheering me up
Read full commentPosted in Parables of Clippety (15) - The Overworld
This is so clever, yet
Posted on Thu, 24 Feb 2022
This is so clever, yet personal, too. From the safest place there is, a parent's bed, to the scariness of the world order changing, from hugeness of countries to small as a child's feet
Read full commentPosted in Firepower
I loved the sounds and rhythm
Posted on Thu, 03 Mar 2022
I loved the sounds and rhythm running all through, as in
"Swishing spray from wheelrims spin"
and the satisfaction of the last rhyme
Read full commentPosted in Night Cycling, November
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