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I have 180 stories published in
2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 681559 times
and 288 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2022 of my 6,054 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2084 votes
trouble, gullible, rebel are
Posted on Thu, 09 Sep 2021
trouble, gullible, rebel are great!
This reminded me of that brilliant one of yours about homelessness?
"imaginatively disobey" this reminded me of some bright children, who put so much effort into not doing things. How wonderful to...
Read full commentPosted in A Winning Handshake
I liked "clouds squeezed to a
Posted on Tue, 07 Sep 2021
I liked "clouds squeezed to a pulp" too, made me think of them being like fruit making juicy rain :0)
Also "lightening strikes like a knife" is wonderful, both for the quick jabbing sounds and the imagery
And the idea of leaves...
Read full commentPosted in Yin And Yang Of Autumn Forest
"Once, men and trees knew the
Posted on Sun, 05 Sep 2021
"Once, men and trees knew the same earth," would have taken me a whole poem to say this :0)
I liked the fairy tale too. I suppose for many people in the past, and now, in some places, stories were the only place where justice...
Read full commentPosted in The Swallow's Broken Leg
involving description of the
Posted on Sat, 04 Sep 2021
brilliantly involving description of the approach of an exhilarating but uncontrollable force. I hope you are keeping safe!
Read full commentPosted in The Smell
I LOVE this poem,Jenny. How
Posted on Thu, 02 Sep 2021
I LOVE this poem,Jenny. How far you travel - from beside a cobweb, like a symbol of stillness and fragility, to a distant hill where "copse of strong trees stand" ( I love that you put strong in there, too) All brought about by you listening to...
Read full commentPosted in Trees Called To Me
You are clever at making the
Posted on Mon, 30 Aug 2021
You are clever at making the reader feel your story is true! not the ones about the pm obv. :0)
should it be storey? "Story after wooden story took the construction to new heights. "
Read full commentPosted in Chinese Whispers (edited and updated, 2021)
"the coach now sways to
Posted on Mon, 30 Aug 2021
"the coach now sways to
"the sweep of an October wind" so sinuous !
Read full commentPosted in Riding The Rails
"She smiles (thinly) spins
Posted on Sun, 29 Aug 2021
"She smiles (thinly) spins and twirls," seems sad? Is it because she is trapped doing the same dance over and over, like a doorkeeper into magic, so though she seems fragile is powerful. But longs to have wings be in the place she guards?
Read full commentPosted in Ballerina Toy Box
If so much in a conciousness
Posted on Sun, 29 Aug 2021
If so much in a conciousness is inherent instinct, there must be connection with those sharing that instinct in the present, I like how you say "a surge of the energy of one" and maybe too with those who passed the instinct down. In such brief...
Read full commentPosted in In The Beginning (for Monarch butterflies)
This is gorgeous Jenny, I'm
Posted on Sat, 28 Aug 2021
This is gorgeous Jenny, I'm also not sure I understand properly what it's about but find it very comforting and I am sure that it holds great truth
I liked particularly the pieces Rhiannon highlighted, also
"everything that came...
Read full commentPosted in Curious Ambiance
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