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I love the first three lines,
Posted on Sun, 24 Apr 2022
I love the first three lines, with "vastness" at the end. This stanza made me think of the end of the first Planet of the apes film, with the Statue of Liberty poking upthrough the beach. I really like the idea of memories being like flotsam, or...
Read full commentPosted in You Looked Like You Had Lost
"She" made me think of the
Posted on Sun, 24 Apr 2022
"She" made me think of the life spirit, strong in wild things, muffled in us. Does She sleep? She would sleep under tarmac, under concrete, inside buildings which have windows but no wind.
Read full commentPosted in Angelus Novus
"eagle settles / on the
Posted on Sun, 24 Apr 2022
"eagle settles / on the breeze"
"freedom surging relaxed"
"ride on ever / changing winds"
you evoke peacefulness and power, space and immediacy
Read full commentPosted in Fly Like An Eagle
Living knowing many people
Posted on Fri, 22 Apr 2022
Living knowing many people wish you weren't, must indeed need a very thick skin
It's always good to be reminded even the worst tyrant will one day be rex extincti. I got that off Google translate - don't be impressed :0)
Read full commentPosted in Vladimir Plutinpot Transforms Into A Tyrantosaurus Rex 500 Years After Henry VIII Did The Same! by Alfred N.Muggins (Thus Proving Once Again That History Repeats Itself!)
though don't know about
Posted on Thu, 21 Apr 2022
though don't know about Pointless, I am glad to have seen all the Carry On films so was able to appreciate this :
"“Oh, it’s our pleasure, Prime Minister. We were sent by Michael Gove whose spies had uncovered a plot by the EU to...
Read full commentPosted in Pointless Boris (Part Two of two)
I wish I could see your
Posted on Thu, 21 Apr 2022
I wish I could see your photos bigger! The are GORGEOUS!!! It sounds in this poem like you must be on the mend? I hope so. Your line breaks in the first half sound like the breath of someone climbing a steep hill :0) And "here!" at the end, seems...
Read full commentPosted in Climbing up from Minton
You had me from the first
Posted on Sun, 17 Apr 2022
You had me from the first sentence. So many details, you really communicated the intensity of his secret life. But there was also a feeling of danger too, how you said this was a release. Also, it was sad about the pants
Read full commentPosted in Jai
Great to have a new
Posted on Sun, 17 Apr 2022
Great to have a new installment!
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 27
gosh David, thankyou! What a
Posted on Fri, 15 Apr 2022
gosh David, thankyou! What a very kind comment :0) I think it is your stories that gave the idea - I wish I could write funny stuff about the news the way Mr Muggins does
Read full commentPosted in two men
You describe all your birds
Posted on Thu, 14 Apr 2022
You describe all your birds so well, those pigeons, they always seem a bit pompous to me, and your blackbird having a bath with "gusto" is just right :0) And you show again how in tune you are with your crows. I really enjoyed this, all the...
Read full commentPosted in Passing Time
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