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Agree with Penny. Had not
Posted on Sun, 25 Jul 2021
Agree with Penny. Had not heard of Buck Moon, however what Penny says explains the deer barking in the woods I heard yesterday. I love so many lines of this poem, particularly "thwack in snarl" that whole stanza is brilliant, can see and hear so...
the other day there was a bit on Inside Science about moons forming. In the past, this would have meant nothing to me, but now when this sort of thing crops up, I wonder how you will write about it?
This is so energetic! Have listened to the (I am guessing) Rimsky Korsakov variation on Spottify, and you have captured the intensity and eeky vibe really well. But it's wonderfully vivid too, all your words seem clear because dissonant (am not...
There's so much skill in this, I think someone listening to the sound alone, without knowing English, would understand the message. It must be a masterclass in internal rhymes, and you have done that thing I have seeen in other poems of yours,...
Your poem brought back memories as I grew up a few miles from Guildford :0) Haven't been there for a very long time, though, don't remember either place you mention, was more C&A and Our Price, which disappeared in an earlier wave of closures...
Agree with Penny. Had not
Posted on Sun, 25 Jul 2021
Agree with Penny. Had not heard of Buck Moon, however what Penny says explains the deer barking in the woods I heard yesterday. I love so many lines of this poem, particularly "thwack in snarl" that whole stanza is brilliant, can see and hear so...
Read full commentPosted in Force Of Life
This might be my favourite
Posted on Sun, 25 Jul 2021
This might be my favourite episode so far! You have everything here, a brilliant read. Am loving the thing with Willow and Perfidia :0)
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 13
Posted on Sat, 24 Jul 2021
"this incredible day
continues to unfold
like a bolt of silk."
brilliant
Read full commentPosted in In IKEA, he dreams about the woman he loves
the other day there was a bit
Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021
the other day there was a bit on Inside Science about moons forming. In the past, this would have meant nothing to me, but now when this sort of thing crops up, I wonder how you will write about it?
"tumult of molecular clouds,
...
Read full commentPosted in The First Stars
This is so energetic! Have
Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021
This is so energetic! Have listened to the (I am guessing) Rimsky Korsakov variation on Spottify, and you have captured the intensity and eeky vibe really well. But it's wonderfully vivid too, all your words seem clear because dissonant (am not...
Read full commentPosted in Another Night On a Bare Mountain
THANKYOU :0) That's a
Posted on Thu, 22 Jul 2021
THANKYOU :0) That's a brilliant surprise! Am going for a walk now, will tell the daddy long legs they got pod :0)
Read full commentPosted in later
There's so much skill in this
Posted on Thu, 22 Jul 2021
There's so much skill in this, I think someone listening to the sound alone, without knowing English, would understand the message. It must be a masterclass in internal rhymes, and you have done that thing I have seeen in other poems of yours,...
Read full commentPosted in Fork Ahead!
Your poem brought back
Posted on Thu, 15 Jul 2021
Your poem brought back memories as I grew up a few miles from Guildford :0) Haven't been there for a very long time, though, don't remember either place you mention, was more C&A and Our Price, which disappeared in an earlier wave of closures...
Read full commentPosted in Daydreaming on Guildford High Street
As Jenny says, thankyou for
Posted on Wed, 14 Jul 2021
As Jenny says, thankyou for creating this feeling of space and movement, light and beautiful sound. Particularly liked:
"A car sweeps past,
a butterfly, white, dances
across the hedge-wall,"
also, the last line, the...
Read full commentPosted in A sleepy mid-July mid-afternoon
I canot tell you how
Posted on Wed, 14 Jul 2021
I canot tell you how wonderful I found this, Jenny! I think this is what "Happy Ever After" means
Read full commentPosted in Coming Home
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