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How many times and places
Posted on Wed, 16 Jun 2021
How many times and places have seen this horrible looking for a scapegoat, a sacrifice. Your translation flowed well, to me, the idea of the helpless and the accusing both becoming sand again, to mix on the shore
I like the contrast of "shards of light" with "softly rustles" also "gathers in bundles" is just right for cherries. You have done your cherry tree proud :0)
So glad to see you have escaped the house to write this detailed account, I feel I have been there. It sounds wonderful with all the flowers, and I liked the foxglove sentinel, you pick up everything important. I do hope your health continues to...
Teaching is a family tradition for you? She does look very determined and good humoured, like one of those toys that keep bouncing back upright. That's lovely that she saved all the money your Mum gave her, as I expect things must have been...
How many times and places
Posted on Wed, 16 Jun 2021
How many times and places have seen this horrible looking for a scapegoat, a sacrifice. Your translation flowed well, to me, the idea of the helpless and the accusing both becoming sand again, to mix on the shore
Read full commentPosted in The contagion that killed the fisherman's wife
I like the contrast of
Posted on Tue, 15 Jun 2021
I like the contrast of "shards of light" with "softly rustles" also "gathers in bundles" is just right for cherries. You have done your cherry tree proud :0)
Read full commentPosted in Cherry Tree
So glad to see you have
Posted on Tue, 15 Jun 2021
So glad to see you have escaped the house to write this detailed account, I feel I have been there. It sounds wonderful with all the flowers, and I liked the foxglove sentinel, you pick up everything important. I do hope your health continues to...
Read full commentPosted in Finding the Castle in the village of Richard's Castle.
"a happening with no music"
Posted on Sun, 13 Jun 2021
"a happening with no music" wow that's brilliant :0) Your honeysuckle is way ahead of ours, no colour showing at all yet
Read full commentPosted in Honeysuckle On The Breeze
Made me think of you being
Posted on Sun, 13 Jun 2021
Made me think of you being like a mountain range for the insects :0)
Read full commentPosted in Sunbathing
Agree with Jenny, you have
Posted on Tue, 08 Jun 2021
Agree with Jenny, you have adapted that nursery rhyme wonderfully, with your usual genius for rhythm too so it is as good to read as the original song
Read full commentPosted in Where the lie leads
So much rich language! I
Posted on Mon, 07 Jun 2021
So much rich language! I loved "mind twirling" and
"combing beaches...finding all kinds of thingamajigs,
that would appear curiously like brief mysteries of
wonderment," what a brilliant way to describe all the little...
Read full commentPosted in In The Stillness Of Late Years
Enjoyed this story
Posted on Thu, 10 Jun 2021
Enjoyed this story
Read full commentPosted in Bring Me Sunshine
I really like all the details
Posted on Sun, 06 Jun 2021
I really like all the details in this, as Insert says, you have evoked the magic feeling of the dawn, when all sorts of things seem possible
Read full commentPosted in Garden at Dawn
Teaching is a family
Posted on Fri, 04 Jun 2021
Teaching is a family tradition for you? She does look very determined and good humoured, like one of those toys that keep bouncing back upright. That's lovely that she saved all the money your Mum gave her, as I expect things must have been...
Read full commentPosted in My ‘Mamgu’ (c.1880 - 1969)
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