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I have 180 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 949718 times and 288 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2275 of my 6,420 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2370 votes

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How on earth (!) to you gat

Posted on Thu, 30 Jun 2022

How on earth (!) to you gat such a sense of space in so few words? I loved this

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Posted in Mid-Wales Haiku?

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It must be so difficult

Posted on Tue, 28 Jun 2022

It must be so difficult having to learn her loss over and over. and for you to see that. You describe her as having such dignity despite the dementia

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Posted in The Journey. Part Three.

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You have given such a warm,

Posted on Tue, 28 Jun 2022

You have given such a warm, togethering description of your family, your Mum and Auntie sound very, very kind, good people. Thankyou for sharing your account, all three parts are beautiful

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Posted in The Journey. Part Three.

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I found this intriguing too,

Posted on Mon, 27 Jun 2022

I found this intriguing too, as not sure whether the unexplored was internal or external, about habit and new experiences or how we don't understand what we think we know about Nature, about how writing ideas can spread like cities

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Posted in From Out of the Bush

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"They were all dead and

Posted on Mon, 27 Jun 2022

That bit stood out for me, too, "They were all dead and belonged not to us, but each other" that's so true, that's just how it feels in churchyards

The may or may not be ghost is a great addition, unbalancing Jim who is usually the most...

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Posted in Ugly Puggly 43

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If all you need to try a

Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2022

If all you need to try a publisher is someone to check for typos, I'd be happy to have a go? I'd be bound to miss a few, but if it would help? I don't like to go on about them every time I see them incase it's discouraging

 

If you...

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 32 ( Conclusions Part 2-- the ending)

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This dialogue is sparkling, 

Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2022

This dialogue is sparkling,  not a single un needed word, it's really fun to read. Thankyou so much for keeping going, it has been wonderful to see your story unfold, the strong characters and place. That the relationship wrong-turns of...

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 32 ( Conclusions Part 2-- the ending)

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I really enjoyed this. I

Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022

I really enjoyed this. I remembered a poem about Spencer (I like seagulls)  We have looked after baby seagulls too in the past, none this year yet.

I liked this not just for the accurate accounts of seagulls' pooing proficiency, but also...

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Posted in Freddie

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 The image of a little girl

Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022

 The image of a little girl with the bees coming down to her is magical. And that she is Queen, in a world inside a world.

And you "holding court" yet she is Queen, and gives you honey and thegift of friendship sweet beyond  words

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Posted in (This Life) Part 6: The Bee Keeper’s Daughter

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As  CM said, this made me

Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022

As  CM said, this made me think how in future they would want volunteers for euthanasia, that seemed horribly likely.

The meteor shower could have been a satelite fleet being blown up?

I wonder how much of the sense of fatigue you...

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Posted in The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 3 of 3)

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