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I have 180 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 945581 times and 288 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2272 of my 6,412 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2367 votes

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I'm so glad you didn't rest

Posted on Tue, 07 Jun 2022

I'm so glad you didn't rest with the photo! That could only be static, and your poem catches the movement of crop striving and tree slowly easing back into the land's food chain. Your title could even be about the life stage of the tree? And at a...

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Posted in Evening peace

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Perfidia is a wonderful

Posted on Fri, 03 Jun 2022

Perfidia is a wonderful character :0) I love how you play with her belief in her sense of superiority when she meets Dillon :

 

"“More than once actually, if I’m forced to be honest and I think for the moment I am,” he admitted with...

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Posted in Willow's Tail" 29 (gather the suspects)

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I love the idea of Faith

Posted on Sun, 05 Jun 2022

I love the idea of Faith being like clouds!

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Posted in A Fox In A Moon Night

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I'd not heard of Pascal's

Posted on Thu, 02 Jun 2022

I'd not heard of Pascal's wager, so did not understand Ewan's poem, but have looked it up now. That is canny for an 8 year old!

I hope there is always the opportunity for people to be in Nature and able to appreciate the Design 

You...

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Posted in Diamonds of truth

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Posted on Thu, 02 Jun 2022

 

"whirling, wild winds forge sinister spouts.

Hurtling through the raging tempest,

a house flying,"

You evoke the nightmare quality that so many wish they could wake from

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Posted in Back In Kansas

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You have a wonderful stirring

Posted on Thu, 02 Jun 2022

You have a wonderful stirring rhythm and create a romantic sense of adventure. Only, at the end, you call her victim and I think of her as heroine?

It's a great accompaninment to the original story!

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Posted in Leaving The Nest

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Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022

Rhiannon, I'm sorry all my replies to you keep being in the wrong order and I cannot sort it!

I agree with both you and Jane?

While I have been with my partner for 20 years we are not married. It is a struggle and we have had some...

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Posted in unclear nuclear

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Your job sounds really grim!

Posted on Sun, 29 May 2022

Your job sounds really grim! I remember feeling like this, you express how at the end of a shift I couldn't wait to go to the woods with my dog and be alive again :0)

I hope things become better for you very soon

I like "softer"...

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Posted in If I can just get through the day

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Oh, my eyes are getting tears

Posted on Sun, 29 May 2022

Oh, my eyes are getting tears in this is so beautiful

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Posted in Meadowsweet

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That WAS abrupt! On a radio

Posted on Fri, 27 May 2022

That WAS abrupt! On a radio program the other day, they were discussing whether it should be required of doctors to be kind. I wonder if your doctor thought she was being kind, I think you were very brilliant to take it so bravely

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Posted in Janus 13

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