Crossing the Line

Gold cherry

By Richard L. Provencher

Sat, 27 Aug 2022
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10 comments
 

I slid across

our side-walk until

a magic carpet

of leaves hoisted me onto

the wind-

 

it’s a hot summer

night on the

edge of farewell

as Autumn’s flavour arrives

determined to keep

earlier torrid days

tucked away

at least

for a season.

 

 

Certificate U
Poem
Nature

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Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

 

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Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Jenny, thank you so much for comments & observations. So many wonderful subjects to write about. -Richard 

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Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

What a lovely thought, being carried away on a magic carpet of leaves. I just love the cooler Autumn conditions with the leaves changing colour, and that freshness in the air.

Great poem Richard.

Jenny.

 

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Picture Credit: https://tinyurl.com/ycke5puu

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

A great honour to receive these awards. Thank you ABC. They do encourage me. -Richard

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Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

A very nice picture. Thank you.

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Submitted by Di_Hard on

I agree with Jenny about your leaves being a magic carpet, specially where you are with your maple trees. A gorgeous image. I hope you have a beautiful Autumn

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Thank you DH. We do have an abundance of beautiful Maple trees. 

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by marandina on

"It's a hot summer night on the edge of farewell.."

 

Beautiful imagery, Richard. Congrats on the well deserved POTD. Paul 

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Your kind remarks are much appreciated, Paul.

Richard L. Provencher