Di_Hard
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Your poem made me very glad
Posted on Fri, 26 Mar 2021
Your poem made me very glad not to need to be going anywhere :0) It has a bustly feel - I like how you slow it right down with the "op" sounds and then the easing with s sounds at the end. There is always so much craft in your writing! I'm amazed...
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I like the belligerence of
Posted on Tue, 23 Mar 2021
I like the belligerence of the first line :0)
I have been called this several times at work in the past :0) First time, I didn't realise it was not a compliment. Because fruit cake is wonderful (not mine though as it always sinks)
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Read full commentPosted in I am a Fruit Cake
I cannot tell you how very
Posted on Sun, 21 Mar 2021
I cannot tell you how very much I loved this!
I am so sorry for your loss, Penny. You sound like the best person a dog could live with, Frankie was surrounded by love and respect all his life.
My dog passed 21 years ago and I miss...
Read full commentPosted in "The Canines of My Life"
Oh! I loved this :0) You are
Posted on Sat, 20 Mar 2021
Oh! I loved this :0) You are a great story maker!!! Perfidia Mishapsham is a BRILLIANT name :0)
Are these typos?
circumstances dire
Willow jumped thru her pet door..... she waked further into the garden...
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 2
Do, please write some more!
Posted on Wed, 17 Mar 2021
Do, please write some more!
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail"
I like this very much, coming
Posted on Sun, 14 Mar 2021
I like this very much, coming after Lydeford Gorge made me think of a ghost?
"swirl of billowing white silk floating," I love this!!!
Please could you explain what is devoured by trees? Am too thick, have read several times and can'...
Read full commentPosted in Escape To Freedom
I liked this very much, too.
Posted on Sun, 14 Mar 2021
I liked this very much, too. Particularly your description of birch trees. Hope you are well and Spring is coming where you live
Read full commentPosted in The Wind
Enjoyed this very much, a
Posted on Wed, 10 Mar 2021
Enjoyed this very much, a great 50th piece :0) I can identify the moon and that's it, everything else is unknowable, vast. Your poem made me think of a huge jewellery box, full of silver chains of orbits and crystal celestial orbs and medallion...
Read full commentPosted in Black Holes and Revelations
I'm glad you lived life to
Posted on Wed, 10 Mar 2021
I'm glad you lived life to the full, cramming in as much colour and joy as you could! "thriving energy in this gorge filled with intrigue" is wonderful! I remember always hoping to see ghosts in such places, or go through a portal. Your poem...
Read full commentPosted in Lydford Gorge
I read this right after
Posted on Wed, 03 Mar 2021
I read this right after Onemorething's Wren, what a contrast! You took me straight to a station like a teleport machine, and your poem is so vivid it feels like my own memory now. I liked "shoals or iron" very much, also "thronging multitudes of...
Read full commentPosted in New Amsterdam
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